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  • From Alabaster on April 20, 2007
    More! I likes it! I really Likes it! lol :D I can't wait to see what happens next :D

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  • From Citten on April 08, 2007
    hey glad that you updated, i was thrilled and i do hope that you have another chapter coming soon! i really would like to know what will happen to both lucius and hermione and will it truely work to sever them or just make things worse? let us know soon!! :)

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  • From angelnomiko on April 08, 2007
    man .. why did you do i lucius.. please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Lazart on April 07, 2007
    I love it and can't wait for more! I can't believe Maloy would do that! I knew he was a cold hearted bastard but still!
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  • From DarkLady on April 07, 2007
    loved this chapter :D don't forget to update on Granger Enchanted darling!
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  • From LaBibliographe on April 07, 2007
    Chapter 7: What an amazing new twist! The course of action set by Lucius seems so selfish and insensitive. But I do wonder what exactly caused Lucius to make his decision? It can't have been just a cowardly wish to escape his connection. If he is getting too involved with Hermione it makes some sense to protect her by severing their bond so she isn't in Voldemort's sights. If Voldie homes in on the Eredita group through Lucius' weakness for her that could be a disaster. Lucius was willing to dare the unknown effects of severing the bond to protect the group, I bet. And he's taking it in the shorts as badly as Hermione is - but no one is seeing his reaction. Poor Lucius...

    Fascinating new element. Who else might want to sever their bond? And what's up with Remus and his bondmate?

    Great chapter!
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  • From LaBibliographe on March 27, 2007
    Chapter 6: I'm relieved that the magic-suppressing equipment was destroyed in that compound and all the remaining magic folk went free. So how are Nickolai and Seren going to be added to the mix? A little love interest for Draco? Or is that bond they all submitted to, sexual as well as connecting them telepathically and physically on other levels, making Draco Ron's significant other? I'm a bit confused about the total ramifications of the bond...

    So funny coming into the hospital section to see Lucius prone on the ground petrified. But did you have to make him face down? It might smash his beautiful nose. He cares about Hermione? Beyond the bond? Okay, this is where I vote to take Narcissa out with the garbage.

    But how did Lucius' feelings go from distance to desire? It wasn't apparent in the previous chapters. Was he keeping it so bottled up he himself didn't know until he saw her injured? Or is this a totally new departure for him?

    Can a bondmate feel the other's feelings toward them? Including love? So will Hermione sense Lucius' change of heart?

    Whew, Hermione is really banged up, isn't she? Can Lucius help her telepathically somehow?

    Nice minor denouement in the fierce action. And now there are two new characters. Really good descriptive writing as usual, giving a solid feel for the compound. Thanks for the new chapter!


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  • From Citten on March 27, 2007
    more please! more please! update soon. and let us know what will be!
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  • From ANON - Citten on March 20, 2007
    well i will say THANK YOU HAVING THIS BE A L O N G STORY AND I AM TRUELY PLEASED!!! i really love this story and i just wish that days would pass quicker so i could read more! :) i really look forward to the next chapter! :) Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - bookworm on March 18, 2007
    awsome!!! I cannot wait for more.
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  • From Sampdoria on March 17, 2007
    A magnificient chapter. The wipping of Hermione was grusome, but I agree that it was necessary for the story. I am so glad you had her rescued by the end of the chapter, and I hope that in due time you will let her get some revenge towards those who did this to her and the others they held captive. Again; a brilliant chapter, I look forward for more of you story!!!
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  • From ANON - LAzart on March 16, 2007
    MY GOD!! Poor Hermione! This story is brillaint and i cant wait for more so update ASAP!
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  • From crinna on March 16, 2007
    I really like this. It has substance and from me that is a huge compliment. This story has a plot i can sink my teeth into. I think the plot wold have merit on its own, even without the HP universe. It is intriguing and exciting, and I can hardly wait for more.
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  • From skydancer on March 16, 2007
    *cringes as the whipping scene replays in my head*
    oh, yeah... you go the realizm down pat..*shudder*

    I will wait for the Sev and/or Luc on a motercycle scene!

    Sky
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  • From LaBibliographe on March 16, 2007
    Chapter 5: Oh, excellent! Your description of Hermione's defiance and her punishment were so realistic, with the other wizards and witches forced to watch. I know Hermione's not done for, so I could commiserate totally without being worried that she would die. (I haven't any guts when it comes to suspense...) Introducing the raven made me feel safe right from the beginning of the chapter, knowing help would be at hand at some point.

    AND (doing a little wiggle dance) yes! Having Lucius taking care of a badly hurt Hermione plays into my preference for more UST between them. Thank you for that! I hope he'll be gentle and snarky at the same time, not letting Hermione see too much concern for her injuries as he paradoxically makes sure she is well taken care of.

    I love that Harry said to kill all the ALPHAs they can find. I'm so bloodthirsty. Go Harry!

    Great chapter - scary, moving, and advancing and intensifying the plot. I can't wait to see what comes next.

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