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By : WilkinsDragon
  • From ANON - DJStroake on March 16, 2007
    I am loving this story so far. Cannot wait to read more. It isn't your avreage run of the mill HP story and I cannot wait to see where you will take us next! Have you thought of posting it on the grangerenchanted (dot) com (forward slash) enchant, site?? We would absolutely love to have a story of this caliber on the site and I know our readers would love it as well!!!! Hope to see you on Granger Enchanted soon.
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  • From ShilohDarke on March 16, 2007
    I was so happy to see you had updated! And I got two chapters to read together! (*hugs and warm mugs of hot chocolate to you for that!) I am so intrigued as to where this is going! I cannot wait... Oh, and I hope that when the truth is out, Molly and Ginny are both left feeling like total idiots!

    I bow to your story telling, and I anxiously await more! (Loved Lucius being pissed about their hatred!)

    SD
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  • From Sampdoria on March 15, 2007
    Another great chapter!!! I hope you have some wonderful evil revenge planned for Molly and Ginny, those two deserves to learn a rather hard lesson. Please save Hermione soon, I hate seeing her in such a situation! Hopefully we will also get to know more about who is behind her kidnapping. Love your story, update soon!!!!
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  • From ozarkmoon on March 14, 2007
    Up to Chapter 4 - Well, I'm ready to lead the band of readers to burn Molly at the stake! Bitch! Seems she and Ginny with their outbursts are going to alienate the rest of the Order members and drive them to the new group. Can't wait to see how this goes.
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  • From ANON - BuffyXO on March 13, 2007
    I have just started reading your story and boy do I feel for Molly now that Lucius knows her true feelings for Hermione. My goodness! The tension that you have built between the Order and the newer group is also enticing. I cannot wait to read what will happen next. Keep up the good work!
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  • From LaBibliographe on March 13, 2007
    Chapter 4: So Hermione was kidnapped by... Muggle terrorists fighting against the magic folk? I guess I have to wait to find out why Hermione is affected adversely by the use of magic, making it hurt her. And does Lucius get hurt by her pain, too? Oooh, sexy, Lucius to the rescue. How wonderful (and salacious) that he's connected to Hermione so strongly. I love where that's going so far and not too fast either. I like the slow buildup of tension for those two.

    I like the Ron-Draco pairing and, for this chapter, all the transference of thoughts between wizards helped by Snape, an accomplished master of legilimency.

    So far Molly is making me very angry because she never asked for any explanation, just condemned not only Hermione, but indirectly, Ron and Harry. Now I wonder why she isn't angry with the boys, thinking they're sluts, too? (A bit of double standard which I also don't honor her for...) I'm glad Ginny wasn't in this chapter - she makes me tired with her nonstop ranting. I just want to punch her out. LOL.

    Well, I guess all this reaction means I like the story very much. I'll wait patiently for the next chapter and not push for it, seeing as how it's supposed to be dark (shiver). 8-)
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  • From ANON - kassie on March 13, 2007
    great story. can't wait for the next chapter. Hurry up please!
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  • From ANON - Rowen Mc Nair on February 22, 2007
    So far i'm hooked! This fic is like nothing i've ever seen!The muggles actually going after wizards interesting twist..Though i am curious,is the new order just fighting for wizards or also for muggles?Please Please update soon!


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  • From throughvioleteyes on February 22, 2007
    Wow! This is a really good story. I'm curious to see where it will go. Please update soon.
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  • From LaBibliographe on February 22, 2007
    Chapter 3: What made Ginny so hateful? She's that mad because Hermione spends more time with Harry and Ron? Then why isn't Ginny angry with Ron too?

    I like how Lucius and Hermione are bound but not exactly together. That makes for very exciting UST. And Snape is an interested observer, watching the two circle each other. I'll enjoy his comments as those two parry each other's "blows". A point system, huh? I'm not quite clear on why Lucius got a point for knowing Hermione had taken the pep potion, though. She wasn't allowed to do that?

    Did Lucius feel all the blows Ginny landed on Hermione in the fight? Just like Hermione felt the pain from the Dark Mark tattoo on Lucius?

    I guess there are still several characters not yet named who could be Hermione's kidnapper. So now I have to wait for chapter four. Rats!
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  • From ShilohDarke on February 22, 2007
    Interesting interaction between Lucius and Hermione... I like the way they bantered back and forth. I do, however, have a hard time understanding why Ginny has turned so hateful. I trust that more will come to light as the story evolves.

    SD
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  • From ShilohDarke on February 20, 2007
    You definitely have my attention. I am curious to see where this is headed! I'll be eagerly waiting for an update!

    Shiloh
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  • From ANON - LaBibliographe on February 20, 2007
    Chapters 1 and 2: This is fascinating so far. The plot, the story idea, and of course, the Lucius-Hermione combo, all make me want to read chapter 3 as soon as possible. I'm a bit fuzzy on if Voldemort is ruling the world, and how the Order of the Phoenix works into the mix, but I assume those bits of info will come along with future chapters.

    I'm glad you don't have Lucius and Hermione in each other's pockets yet. I'd rather have the tension of the two playing off against each other for a long time. Those two invented the words "Unrelieved Sexual Tension" and their characters are perfectly designed for UST.

    Update soon, I'd love to read more.
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  • From Sampdoria on February 20, 2007
    You should absolutely continue this! What a interesting plot! I do so love to find a totally new plot, and this is really promising. You also write very well, so I will absolutely call this a potenital great story. I look forward to follow you through the upcomming chapters!!!
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  • From skydancer on February 20, 2007
    wow...what a way to start my day! even with the warning of multi-chapter-plot-workings I think these two chapters are a great start. Loved the little chat at WWW's

    Have some of my unpatented P.B.U.N.S. ( plot bunny ultra nutriious snacks, silent 'p') to keep them bouncing on your keyboard!

    Skydancer
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