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By : WilkinsDragon
  • From puddingboo on October 15, 2015
    Brillaint please let it continue this story is great having former DEs and ootp team up
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  • From ANON - Amber on March 11, 2011
    I thought it was Molly not Bill's wife oh well I hope they find it soon and the war is over and Lucius's wife is killed and so is Molly
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  • From ANON - CS on April 20, 2010
    This is by far one of the best AU fic I have read. An outstanding premise and intriguing plot twists. I only just discovered this and am dismayed to see that it has not been updated since 2007. I do hope that it is not a permanent abandonment, as this fic deserves further development and completion! Please come back and finish it! Still, wonderful job.
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  • From ANON - smallsparrow on November 21, 2007
    I love your fic, please update as soon as possible. I
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  • From ANON - sinbad on July 02, 2007
    From one author to another, EXCELLANT job! Keep up the great work!
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  • From scotsgirl on May 29, 2007
    this is a brilliant story hope you update soon
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  • From Citten on May 29, 2007
    yeah a new chapter! the fight scene was just fine no worries! espicaly sense you have never written one. i will confess that i did think it was molly that was the new death eater. you really have to love that hermione is such a genius with spells. :) poor tonks how will remus handle this terrible turn of events? i do wonder what will happen with lucius and hermione will they ever decover their true feelings or even exnolge the feelings that they have as what they are? even just a little? mostly i am asking because as much fun as it is to watch them battle one another it would be so much better if it were of a sexual nature. ;) i do hope that the next chapter is soon in coming!
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  • From ozarkmoon on May 29, 2007
    Ch. 10 - Well yes, that was a surprise as to who the new death eater was. Hmm. Well then. And can we at least get a promise for a rematch later, to enjoy the well-deserved, and now delayed, ass kicking? :)
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  • From ladyravenna on May 28, 2007
    I knew Hermione could kick Lucius' cute little ass in that fight. But Fleur as a spy...was so not expecting that. Well done, Fantasy.
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  • From ANON - BuffyXO on May 28, 2007
    I think that you are doing a spendid job with this tale and Hermione's rage. I know that the rift between her and Lucius will not easy to mend, but I think that their strong feelings are due to the nature of their relationship. You would have had to love someone desperately to hate them so much now. I cannot wait to read more ... I even tracked your story down to ff.net just to read onward. Keep up the great work and please update soon.
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  • From LaBibliographe on May 28, 2007
    Chapter 10: Don't worry, your martial arts fight was very good, very realistic. I took Kenpo karate for several years and had worked up to starting a brown belt when I quit, so I know whereof I speak. I liked the entire chapter, starting with Lucius' very odd behavior - he sounded like he hated Hermione, but that can't be so I STILL don't know what's going on with him. I'll possess myself in patience I guess. Then the exciting fight was breathtaking - so visible I could see the blows and the rolling, jumping moves and feel the hits.

    Having Voldemort powerful enough to actually summon his Death Eaters without their cooperation is scary. (Puts hand up) yes, I thought the new recruit would be Molly. I think she would have looked quite good in boils. But how did Fleur get turned? And poor Tonks - will she get rescued? I hope her capture doesn't make Lupin do anything stupid, but it will be hard for him to do nothing. How will Voldie let Lupin know Tonks is in the Dark Lord's power? I don't think any of the Eredita double agents who witnessed Tonks' capture in the forest will tell Lupin, or he'd ride off to the rescue, putting the group in jeopardy.

    Wonderful chapter and a suspenseful entry. Now I'll have to wait for the next episode. I hope, hope, hope Lucius turns out to be playing some hidden game and he's really fond of Hermione. For all her anger, she seems drawn to him. I think I have a ways to go before the story winds up with Lucius and Hermione as a couple. I love the 'will he, won't he - does he, doesn't he' and the same for Hermione. I hope we get chapters and chapters of their tense, strained, HOT relationship before they come together. (Although a bit of recreational or reluctant groping would be icing on the plot.) Great work!!
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  • From ozarkmoon on May 17, 2007
    Ch. 8 - Wow. Very dramatic chapter and we find the truth out now. And what will happen now? Cannot wait to see.
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  • From ANON - LaBibliographe on May 16, 2007
    Chapter 9: Hmmm, this Nickolai sounds like he might give Lucius a run for his money, especially since the Senior Malfoy is currently in the doghouse with everyone.

    OMG Hermione is dressed to kill! I hope not literally. What an outfit! It's kickass, and that sounds just like what Hermione plans to do to Lucius. I really need to know WHY he separated from her. There must be a reason besides him merely being evil. It can't be anything simple or he would have told everyone why he acted as he did.

    Molly Weasley looks like she's really going to the dogs - or to the Dark Lord (same thing).

    I'm relieved you told us this would be a Lucius/Hermione story. I can sit back and relax now. I don't mind a bumpy ride at all. I stick plenty of potholes in my own stories. Thanks for reassuring us. I'm eager to read the next chapter - for several reasons.
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  • From ANON - Citten on April 26, 2007
    i have been waiting for this chapter for a while and it was worth it! boy poor hermione, poor ginny. stupid-stupid lucius!!!!! well i really want to know what will happen between lucius and hermione and i really do wish that you will update soon and let us know!! :)

    you really don't like molly do you and from your story i hate her too.
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  • From LaBibliographe on April 26, 2007
    Chapter 8: So - you're increasing the heat on Mama Weasley, huh? Ah, that's right, Molly had those books by Lockhart, didn't she?

    Well, there's one rat in the woodpile rooted out. Are there any more? Such damage to Hermione and her parents - and the result was just the opposite of what was wanted by the rat, OotP will fall apart, instead of just being rid of Hermione. What goes around, comes around.

    BUT (throws self on the floor and drums heels in a childish tantrum) I want to know what happened to make Lucius behave the way he did. That intake of breath we heard beside Draco was Lucius. Was he reacting to Hermione telling of three weeks of torture and beatings? Or something else? Does Hermione know consciously that Lucius has severed their tie? It seems as though she must. What will her reaction be to him now? And his to her? And most of all - WHY DID HE DO IT? The Lucius lover in me can't believe he acted from selfish motives.

    I need to know the answers to these vital questions. My heels hurt and I don't want to have to throw another tantrum at the end of the next chapter. But I will, if I have to. You've been warned!!

    Great chapter! (Minor afterthoughts -- Poor Arthur. What will they do with Molly?)
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