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Reviews for Potions Master For Sale

By : SoulBound
  • From shelagh on February 24, 2007
    Love it!!!!!!!
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  • From Mmoirai on February 24, 2007
    Ch.3 You are doing wonderfully. I loved the part where they were discussing their misunderstanding. It made me get kind of warm and I started blushing. Maybe because I'm not comfortable with my own feelings...It is all too true that couples just don't talk enough or explain how they are feeling or how their significant other's actions may have affected them. I also just adore the thought of Snape falling in love, so yeay! Sooooo....I am really interested in seeing how this whole Bachelor auction will unfold since he is in a "relationship" now. I imagine some falling out and him going through with the auction to spite her or something, and her bidding on him and winning and making him listen to reason, or some other tart winning and she becomes waaaaayyyy jealous..blah, blah, blah...I know that what ever twist you put on this will be loads of fun! Keep it coming, and great job on updating so swiftly! I only wish I could do the same with my own fanfics. *bows head in shame*
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  • From catysmom1028 on February 24, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From missbliss on February 24, 2007
    I love the story. I'm a terrible reviewer, I know, but I figured I should say that much. I know I like to hear it when people like what I write.
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  • From bellaamante on February 24, 2007
    ok i love where this fic is going but your summary on the main page might be a little misleading to others. and then again in the first chapter, you have the main plot that relates directly to your summary. that being Dumbledore forcing Severus to be in this auction. my question to you is...where is this supposed auction? the only reference i've seen of it has been in that first chapter and the summary. in a sense i kinda wish you would go back and rewrite the story so that it follows your summary line, but the other part of me wants you to continue this story but just change the first chapter. all in all i think this story should be split in two. one with a short one-shot (maybe) of the auction and then this one where hermione and severus fall in love. umm...hope you find this helpful and i can't wait for the next chapter. until then. xoxo
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  • From melusinesara on February 24, 2007
    awww. what a lovely chapter! they seem so...so...so..human! lol. i dunno how else to describe it, but you really make them believable.
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  • From Happyappy on February 24, 2007
    I love your story! I don't think that your Severus is too soft. I really like how you get into your characters heads. You explain their feelings so well. I am so glad that their little misunderstanding at breakfast was resolved, and they could go on. I look forward to their "courting". Meeting the parents should be interesting, as should the rest of the staffs reaction. I'll be looking for your update in 2 days.
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  • From ccino49 on February 22, 2007
    Just read both chapters. I barely got through the first few paragraphs before I was laughing like a loony at the image of Severus' expession in my mind as he desperately tried to get out of the auction. I love the way you had him trying to fugure out what Hermione was playing at. How dare she ignore him. LOL. I thought the dinner was brilliant. He admitting he didn't know how to dance and then kissing. I wonder if that was the first time since hi yule ball too.(Though U doubt it) Then the lemony bit at the end. Mmm.
    Hey. Please hurry and post agin. I'm loving this.
    ccino
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  • From Pumkin on February 22, 2007
    liking it alot. hope you have them work on the relationship more. keep up the good work. update soon please.
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  • From kirabates on February 22, 2007
    I just read the first chapter today and was really happy to come home and find it updated!!! yea! Anyways, great chapter, i thought that it was funny that Snape forgot how to dance, lol, and i really liked how he was stuck with a boner afterwards, that was hilarious. lol cant wait to see wat happens at the auction, i think that that will be rather funny.
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  • From servantofall36 on February 22, 2007
    This is a wonderful story...very well-written. Will you be posting more? I tried to read it on Petulantpoetess, but couldn't get in. I do hope you will finish it here. Blessings. Elizabeth
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  • From LustBlood on February 21, 2007
    That was fantastic!! Your writing is amazing! I'm so glad you treat Hermoine as an intelligent being. I can't WAIT to read more!!!!!!!!
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  • From Mmoirai on February 21, 2007
    Ch.2 - This was a sweet chapter. I blushed and did my best to act like I wasn't looking when they were dancing, and I was practically drooling when he relieved himself! Yum!
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  • From DarkLady on February 21, 2007
    flipping hell! lol I literally held my breath that entire chapter *giggles* and those kisses GAH! lol well done it was excellent and I cannot wait for an update!
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  • From nonentity on February 21, 2007
    Mmmm, yummy make-out session. I like your incoherent Severus, his thoughts about dancing, and Hermione's self-beration. It'll be interesting to see if Hermione continues her strategy.


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