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Reviews for Touching the Untouchable

By : graballz
  • From Mitamay on February 25, 2007
    This is very interesting...I sure hope that Ron understands that Harry was pissy-drunk, and didn't mean it. I'll be waiting for the next chapter! EM
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  • From Danine on February 25, 2007
    Oh why haven't you read the books!?! They are delightful!

    Neville is a timid, awkward boy, but will certainly stand up for what he thinks is right when it comes down to it. He doesn't really stand up for himself though. It could fit that he'd take on a roll like this if Ron showed him great interest, and I'm certain he'd do the job as well as he could, if only for the delightment of being thought that he could do it. Does that make sense? Sorry, probably not.

    Anyhow, don't worry too much about your British slang. You'll always get some offhanded remark for some "English" person who shouts "CANON" at you, but as long as Draco isn't shouting "Fucking-A, dude!" then you have little to worry about. There's a nice site on british slang terms if you want to pick up a few new ones, but basically keeping conversation english, from any country, no one is going to care whether your British or not. Basically all of the writers aren't anyways, so keep that in mind. I only know a handful that are, and they could give a shit whether I said something right or wrong.

    Oh! And another awesome chapter! Read the damned books! You're missing out! ;)
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  • From on February 25, 2007
    how do you write about something u never read or saw. especially something based on a book.
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  • From YamiBakura on February 25, 2007
    Chapter 4 (End)

    Wow. What an intense chapter. POOR HARRY!!! Please update this again soon! I'd love to know how he's reacting to what Ron said/did to him in front of the entirety of Hogwarts staff and students.
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  • From lissagal99 on February 25, 2007
    Surely with 426 hits you don't believe it's the same 3 ppl reading them over and over and over again?
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 25, 2007
    I sooo need chapter 5! He doesn't remember but will they believe him? Can the trio work things out? Will they want to? Poor Hermione but poor Harry as well!
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  • From YamiBakura on February 24, 2007
    Harry finally comprehended that Ron wasn
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  • From Danine on February 24, 2007
    Oh no! *hugs Harry* Please continue!!!!!!
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  • From YamiBakura on February 24, 2007
    Chapter 4

    Oh NO!! Short but ... well, not sweet either, unless you count the fact that I adore Harry, and therefor love to see him in pain. (We always hurt the ones we love XD) This is GREAT!! Update again soon!!

    YAAAY, I got special mention at the top! Thrnbrooke is one of my favourite people on AFF, as they can ALWAYS be counted on for a great review, all the time. I wish I was half as good about reviewing as they are. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 24, 2007
    Very cool...I cant wait for the rest :)
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  • From YamiBakura on February 24, 2007
    Chapter 3

    I really like this so far!! Terrible that it's not finished yet, but since you're planning to finish it, that makes it better. ^__^ I can't wait to see what goes down at lunch, especially considering Harry doesn't remember yet. XD
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  • From Danine on February 23, 2007
    Oh man, intense. I hate that that happened between Hermione and Harry (I have this weird mothering nature for her for some reason, always trying to protect her when I write myself) and I hope she has it in her heart to forgive him. I doubt Ron will be as kind though. He is so easy to manipulate in fan fiction since his moods and attitudes swing so far to every direction in canon.

    I want to read more without really influencing you though, so I'll stop here. Just get some sleep on it, that's where I get most of my ideas. Let the scenes you've written run through your head and play out. It will come to you! Can't wait until it does either. Lovely start.
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  • From Danine on February 23, 2007
    OH GOD NO! Oh Hermione, please get away, pleasepleaseplease! Ok, off to read chapter 2!
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 23, 2007
    Oh this is bad! Soooo very very bad! That's something hard to forgive! Need chapter 3!
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