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Reviews for Pillow Fight

By : CryingCinderella
  • From ANON - catsnthebag on November 07, 2007
    hey, I love your story. I think you have great ideas and you really know how to set the mood.I have a small request, but only if you are into that sorta stuff. I know this is a hg/ss story and it's still the begining, but i was hoping if you could really lay it on thick as far as the sappy cupcake love story goes between snape and hermione. I mean right now you can't really tell she's the only one for him and he liked having her more than the others....it would be really cool if he stressed that point to her and even made a public display...hehe.... You can really tell that she likes severus a lot and it hurt her because he slept with the other witches.
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  • From Mmoirai on November 03, 2007
    Did I review already? I guess I could stop being lazy and just go look. Anyway...I just wanted to pop in and say that I really am enjoying this. I can't beieve how hot each one of your scenes is! Thanks for taking the time to share of few of these fantasies and please do update. I especially like this because it is leaning towards Snape and Hermione as a romantic couple. Love it!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on November 01, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on November 01, 2007
    RE: chapters 1 through 4

    *SQUEE* I love Severus Snape the Slytherin Sex God!
    HMM, I'm looking forward to reading the remaining chapters 5 through 9!
    *WEG*=*Wicked Evil Grin* or if you prefer, *SWG*=*Sexy Wicked Grin*
    ;-D
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on October 29, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From mamabear52 on October 27, 2007
    Great just great, but can't wait to see more of it real soon I hope. You're readers are hungry and need more to read to keep them happy and fed in fiction. Update soon please !!!
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  • From ANON - andy on October 24, 2007
    hi. I LOVE your story. there definately are a few minor spelling and grammar mistakes, but a different plot line from what I've previously read. i hope to see an update soon.
    Andy
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  • From ANON - because on October 19, 2007
    Thank you thank you thank you. I was so happy to see another chapter I actually did a little happy dance. Wow that had to have been the most embarressing conversation ever, I loved it. Two statements that stand our are Hermione calling Severus a random man whore (I may actually use this one in real life - priceless) and Albus blandly asking "Who was naked?" LMAO!!!
    I know what you mean by finding the characters direction difficult. The first chapter was so much fun (have re-read it around 10 or so times) but where do you go from there?
    Thank you also for the comment at the start of the chapter, I was hoping you took note of your reviews. Now what can I give you to get you to write more for "Autumn Argument"? Hee Hee.
    I absolutely love this story. I love a snarky but loving Snape. I really love how you write the small things in this story, the way he looks at her, holds her, the sound of the sheets when he reaches for her, perfect. Look forward to more from you, happy writing.
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  • From ANON - Damiana on October 18, 2007
    Hi! Fun story and lovely lemons. :)

    I think that there may be a bit of confusion due to chapter 9 as it is... The following line breaks continuity: "Ginny fell silent. She hadn
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  • From angelnomiko on October 18, 2007
    wow that was awsome .. please please more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From catysmom1028 on October 17, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From DB1 on October 17, 2007
    @9 lol awesome chapter, update soon

    *DB*
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  • From Apryl on October 17, 2007
    OMG! I laughed my ass off. This update was well worth the wait. Can't wait to see what's next.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 17, 2007
    YAY!!!! You updated. Thank you. I love this fic!!!
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  • From scotsgirl on October 17, 2007
    thanks for the update been looking forward to it, great chapter looking forward to the next one
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