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Reviews for Defamation of Character

By : Looneyluna
  • From ANON - Ryu on August 19, 2007
    Not again! Every chapter they find a way to muck it up. Get together already!!!
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  • From LaBibliographe on August 16, 2007
    Chapter 14: The dreaded writer
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  • From nonabloch on August 16, 2007
    Love it! Cannot wait for the next chapter! What interesting characters you have created. And the story has not been predictable, which I love also!
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  • From Marti on August 16, 2007
    I hope you're feeling better, and thanks for a great new chapter!

    Marti
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  • From Alabaster on August 16, 2007
    This story is absolutely amazing. I want another chapter pronto lady :D You write so eloquently, and while i know some of that rests on your very apt beta's the plot and the story is all you! I love that the snarky Severus that we've always known is now grown into a full fledged character with real emotions. He is in love, desperately with a witch that has decided somewhere in her engorged brain that he does not want her. It may take ages to win this out. I would read every chapter!
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  • From Sampdoria on August 16, 2007
    Ugh, I hate it when you end the chapter like this, please update again soon.
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  • From DarqueHart on August 16, 2007
    Woo Hoo, good for Jen! That's what we need, someone to whip the authors into action. The Story - this chapter was actually sad. Hermione's lack of trust [with good reason] and immature belief that people are what they seem to be on the surface, and Severus' frustrations with the whole thing. I appreciate Hermione's reaction to him. After having one's trust betrayed it is EXTREMELY difficult to get over it... which he probably knows as his own trust levels are not the best. Good chapter;)
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  • From catysmom1028 on August 16, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From LaBibliographe on August 01, 2007
    Chapter 13: Apparently the advice Albus and Minerva gave Severus was off center a bit. It probably was good he didn't rush after her while he was angry, but waiting six months to come forward in any way but through his purple prose seems to have made his attempt at reconciliation more difficult.

    I do hope Severus manages to win his way through Hermione's anger to her heart and they finally get past all the misunderstandings. Was Severus the troll in his manuscript chapters? Hermione certainly isn't perfect, but is that the way Severus sees her? That won't work for them either, but I think he really doesn't see her as without flaw.

    I'll wait as patiently as I can (that's, uh, not much) for the ultimate chapter and hope it's a happy ending. 8-)
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  • From ANON - nei on July 26, 2007
    LOL. Snape being dosed by love potion... now, that's something! =]
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  • From DarqueHart on July 25, 2007
    Thank Goodness! A fanfiction writer has returned to the norm. The last week has seemed like a desert to readers!

    Ch. 13 - Does Hermione ever come to the conclusion that 'real life' is not like a romance novel? That she fell in love with Severus as he was and needs to accept the fact that he is not the great romance novel hero. He's making an effort, that should count big time.
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  • From ANON - Estellio on July 25, 2007
    I'm usually very cautious of the pairing of Snape and Hermione but this one looked to interesting to pass up. I have to say, I'm not disappointed that I read it. Some of your language was a bit caustic 'arse' 'snog' and 'bum' I'm reffering to but otherwise it was amazingly well written. From your language I'm guessing your English or Irish and it's nice to read things in familiar English. That may sound strange but American's just write things...differently. Who knows, maybe I'm crazy :P I really did enjoy this and look forward to more of your work.
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  • From catysmom1028 on July 25, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From ANON - Lulu on July 11, 2007
    Seriously, I haven't been this much into a fanfiction in a long time. You've got me on pins and needles!!!
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  • From LaBibliographe on July 10, 2007
    Chapters 11-12:

    Well, we almost got Hermione talking with Snape. Somehow Malfoys always seem to intrude, even innocent ones. Draco - a father of twins. It boggles the mind. Those pregnancy and postpartum hormones are pretty powerful. I assume Hermione has now met all of Draco's requirements.

    I think Percy should be 'fixed'. His Weasley genes are obviously defective and it would be better for the mutation to die with him.

    Oh, oh, look out - Dumbledore's license to matchmake must not have been revoked. He's trying it again. I hope it works this time. He's pulled Minerva into his machinations. Maybe she won't make such a hash of it.

    If you want something done right do it yourself. Well, that finally became Hermione's motto, I see, and just in time too. I think Hermione Snape sounds quite nice! (Maybe I'm getting ahead of myself here...)

    Lovely story, believable characters and a shag - finally. Marvelous!

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    Note: One adjustment you might want to make in Ch. 12 to avoid confusion:
    "He flicked the tip with her tongue and felt her shudder." It should be HIS tongue I think. I know if I was getting that from Severus I'd want it to be HIS tongue.

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