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Reviews for Defamation of Character

By : Looneyluna
  • From LaBibliographe on July 10, 2007
    Chapters 9-10:

    I checked your story all the time for several days, and nothing. Now I've come back to it and suddenly I'm way behind again. (Rolls up sleeves and gets started reviewing...)

    I thought Draco sounded very logical and convincing defending Hermione. Good for him, even though her novel messed up his life. Maybe her next one will get his wife back for him. And it's so transparent to Hermione what Snape really wants her to do in that potions storeroom. What is funny is it really wasn't transparent to Snape. He thought it was lust. Poor sod. His discovery he's in love puts him on the defensive and her in the driver's seat - if she finds out. (Rubs hand together with glee) chapters of lovelorn Snape trying to hide it. Yummy.

    OMG, Snape getting advice on courtship from Arthur. I can't think of two more disparate men. Did Snape expect Arthur to find him a way to win Hermione and sweep his wrongheaded behavior under a rug never to be thought of again? Slytherins are so good at shedding blame.

    Oh, dear, I don't think Dumbledore should quit his Headmaster job and try matchmaking, do you? He's remarkably clumsy at it. Most of the mess stems from his interference. Bad Dumbledore (he's just added another brick in that road paved with good intentions...) Severus and Veritaserum. What a disastrous combination with the firewhiskey. He's blatting his every last thought. Of course they''re all the same. "I love you." Well, good for him! 8-)

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  • From LaBibliographe on July 10, 2007
    Extraneous Information: Actually, I think "Andy" just above has it backwards. Your sentence is correct as you wrote it.

    "He'd never been any good at interpersonal relationships."
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  • From ANON - Andy on July 10, 2007
    ok, so i found one tiny little grammar mistake:
    "He'd never been any good at interpersonal relationships."
    it is actually intrapersonal relationships unless your talking about him talking to himself. easy to do, but there you go.
    I can't wait for the next chapter.
    Andy
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  • From ANON - adriana on July 07, 2007
    hay i loved it it got me going hury with the nexed chaptr thow
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  • From catysmom1028 on July 06, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.
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  • From Jen618 on July 06, 2007
    Awwww, hot smut, always nice. Yes, clearly they have issues. Minerva had me laughing in this chapter. Well done again!
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  • From Jen618 on July 06, 2007
    Hey! 11 was terrific. Very evil cliffy so looking forward to getting on the 12. Nice working on fixing poor Draco in Pansy's eyes. But Hagrid patting her knee kind of squicked me! LOL. Great work, now for 12.
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  • From ANON - Andy on July 02, 2007
    darn it. i HATE cliffhangers. now you REALLY REALLY need to update and quickly would be best. ;)
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  • From DB1 on July 02, 2007
    @11. cool you updated love the chapter. update soon

    *DB*
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  • From DB1 on July 02, 2007
    @11. cool you updated love the chapter. update soon

    *DB*
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  • From ANON - andrea on June 28, 2007
    I LOVE this fic. i haven't been reading in a while, and it is a really good one to start back with. I CAN'T wait for the next chapter, so have fun with writing it! keep up the awsome writing.
    Andy
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  • From ANON - Lulu on June 28, 2007
    Seriously, you're the most evil person in the world!
    Get on with it, already!!
    Please?
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on June 28, 2007
    XD Severus got drugged and mad Arther resign that is so awesome!
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  • From redneckmama236 on June 28, 2007
    they had better!! sorry for yelling but i love this story. please give me more. i wanna know what happens next.
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  • From Marti on June 27, 2007
    ok, my stupid review got cut off. Instead of mechanizations, I think Machinations might work better. again, if i'm wrong, just ignore it..

    happy writing,
    marti
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