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Reviews for Defamation of Character

By : Looneyluna
  • From ANON - DarkAria on May 30, 2007
    Excellent! Please up-date soon!!!!! I can't wait to read more....
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  • From LaBibliographe on May 26, 2007
    Chapters 1-6: I've just found this story and read it all in one go. I didn't read your previous version so I'm a 'virgin' Defamation of Character' reader, but I have read many a romance and I think your writing is wonderful! You did an excellent job of creating a writing dichotomy between the 'romance novel' story and the real life actions of your characters. I'm impressed!

    I like how Snape is believable and not sappy or overly sentimental. I don't think he'd cave in to Hermione's feminine attractions too fast now if he had her in classes for 7 years and never saw her as a desirable female back then. He's reacting to the erotic scribblings that Hermione is nastily enticing him with, but he's not yet sucked into her as a woman. Of course, that makes for more interesting chapters for us all to read so I approve.

    Very well done so far. I'm looking forward to more of Snape's wrangling with the little romance novelist witch. I hope they both win in the end, but I'll certainly enjoy their journey - especially if it ends with them as a couple.

    Thanks for the chapters and I hope you're recovering well.
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  • From nonentity on May 25, 2007
    Oh! Didn't notice the A/N. Recuperate from your surgery and don't worry about us!
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  • From septentrion on May 25, 2007
    They both feel embarrassed, that's something they have in common!

    I'm glad to hear that your surgery went well. Take care of yourself!
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  • From nonentity on May 24, 2007
    *giggle* Go Hermione!
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  • From ANON - sinbad on May 24, 2007
    Great to have you back! Thanks to your betta readers for getting it ready!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on May 18, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter?
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  • From ANON - DarkFaith on May 16, 2007
    Dammit!
    I was getting into this!
    Write more now!

    Please?
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  • From ANON - LauraK on May 09, 2007
    I love it and I think it's better than the original. Good luck with your surgery and I hope you're able to do one-handed updates. : -) LK
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  • From ANON - lipasnape on May 08, 2007
    I like these new developments. I really really hope that after all this Hermione will not fall for Snape's body as easily as she did in your previous version. He deserves to sweat and try hard to get any time of any kind with her after all this. I guess you will have to work out some kond of happy ending for Percy, too, but I cannot imagine the situation where I would be OK with it. Have you perhaps overdone it again? Do we need a third version? I can't imagine Hermione agreeing to anything with Snape, neither sex nor love. Oh, well.
    Good luck with your surgery.
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  • From ANON - snapeluva on May 07, 2007
    I'm liking this version of the story much better than the other one! Good luck on your surgery and keep up the good work...I can't wait for Hermione's revenge!!
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  • From ANON - ChaosProphet on May 07, 2007
    honestly, snape poisoning hermione and having/forcing nonconsensual sex WAS very snapeish, not to mention slytherin to the core. the new version is certainly in character, but i dont think your first plotline and characterization were wildly OOC. the world is not a nice place and bad things happen; not all fanfiction is clean and sweet.

    i like where you are going with this, keep writing. im interested to see how this building war of revenge between snape and hermione breaks into love (or at least lemons).
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  • From Carine on May 07, 2007
    Hi Looneyluna,
    I loved your first version of the story,but your second try ist just sooooo muuuuch better,I teally loughed about your "floo-lag".
    I think this version is much more believable than the first one and that Severus is more in character.Just keep on going like this.

    I hope that your surgery went well.:)
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  • From catysmom1028 on May 07, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.



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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on May 07, 2007
    The chapter was too short!

    I hope your surgery goes well !
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