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Reviews for Defamation of Character

By : Looneyluna
  • From nonentity on May 07, 2007
    Ah, foiled in chapter 5. I figured Ginny would come and rescue Hermione. How were her assets frozen?

    I was scared to read chapter 4 because of the injunction plotline, but Percy and Snape are just being bad, naughty people. I can't wait for Snape to get his comeuppance! At this point I don't think I want Snape and Hermione to get together!
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  • From ANON - bel_amour on May 06, 2007
    loved it please update soon i can not wait to see what hermione writes
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  • From ANON - sinbad on May 06, 2007
    I hope your surgery goes well, with a speedy recovery. I loved the last chapter and hope I will see a new one as soon as possible. I hope your recovery will be quick and uneventful. Good luck, Carla
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  • From OpenTilMidnight on May 04, 2007
    Love it, love it, LOVE IT! Although I'd be very interested to read the original, judging by some of these comments. And I admire you for having the guts to rewrite...if it were me, I'd have abandoned it if it weren't going my way (and I've done that more than a few times).

    Write more soon! I'm hooked!
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  • From Queeny on May 01, 2007
    I never got into the first round of the story, so I'm quite enjoying the second round. Its a nice break from my writing of my story which is.. .not really funny at all gah. ! I never realized how draining writing serious situations can be x.x
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  • From ANON - tasha on April 30, 2007
    i love the story. the plot is really good! i can't wait for the next chapter. one question/comment though; in this chapter snape thinks about how he like her style of writing the sex scenes, but in the first chapter he mentions how horrid it is. that might be accounted for by his extreme drunkenness. but still, though i'd mention it.

    hope you write more soon - tasha
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  • From catysmom1028 on April 30, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.
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  • From nonentity on April 30, 2007
    Oh, you might want to mention that you're re-writing and not re-editing in the summary.
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on April 30, 2007
    Severus is so funny in the first chapter! The whole "maybe he should eat some dinner" line had me laughing so hard
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 29, 2007
    I'm glad you decided to take it in a new direction. I was slightly worried about the twist it had taken in the last few chapters. Keep up the good work.
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  • From Happyappy on April 29, 2007
    I do like this way better. I look forward to where it goes from here.
    Sansa
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  • From Jen618 on April 29, 2007
    Hey, hon. I totally understand why you did what you did, and I can only hope your readers will appreciate the guts it took to re-model the story. The alternative, of course, would have been pulling the story entirely and not finishing -- much worse, from my pov. I love this new plot line; and yes the old one was interesting in terms of the headache potion and the forgetting and the puzzle of the whole thing (I liked the puzzle aspect), but there was that other issue which was... uncomfortable. Kudos to you. I'm pleased we have an exciting 'new' fic rather than none at all.
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  • From ANON - snapeaddiction on April 28, 2007
    I quit.
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  • From SorceressFujin on April 28, 2007
    I have to say, I am rather disappointed as well. The original story was going great and I can't say I really feel like reading the 'same thing' again.
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  • From nonentity on April 28, 2007
    Not that I want you to be unhappy, but I'm pretty bummed about the termination of the original storyline. I really, really liked the Memento-esque struggle--how she had to take headache potions everyday and all. It's not precisely a romantic comedy, certainly, but the darkness was very appealing, and we were getting to see all sorts of facets of both Hermione and Snape. Snape is being punished and knows his own guilt well, and he won't get off the hook with anyone all that easily.

    I'm confused about why Snape would get control of both the profits and all of Hermione's other holdings. Wouldn't the ministry just snatch everything and hold it in limbo until the situation is resolved? I liked that she assumed Snape was Fred or George. Fred and George have stocky silhouettes, so she should have known immediately that the person didn't look like Fred or George though.
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