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Reviews for Butterfly

By : fatedsoul
  • From ANON - cnaj on March 10, 2007
    Aww...
    it's not that bad... in fact, it was pretty sweet :)
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  • From Britt01 on February 27, 2007
    Incredibly cheesy... but oddly... i'm ok with that.

    (I loved it.)
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 27, 2007
    great story. i love dancing like that cause it's so much like sex but it's not and it's great. but yeah, awesome story.
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  • From shelagh on February 27, 2007
    Fluffy but really creative. I love the butterflies as they dance idea. is it a real song? If so who sings it I want to look it up my daughter would love the lyrics. Great job.
    Will it stay a one shot or is this going to go longer. I like the samuari direction you could head into.
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  • From KayTeeJay on February 27, 2007
    I thought it was beautiful and hot :-D lol There are a couple spelling mistakes here and there, but spell check should catch them, otherwise it was well written. Keep writing, I would love to read more of your work.
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  • From ANON - brayzen on February 27, 2007
    I really loved it....i hope you write more fics soon.....need my DM/HG fixation...lol again great job!!!!
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