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Reviews for Waltzing Miss Hermione Granger

By : Rumpelyssa
  • From kirabates on March 05, 2007
    Yay! I love it! I love it! I really love your stories, you are one of my favorite authors! I thought that the dancing and the rain were very nice touches in this story! Please update!
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  • From Pumkin on March 05, 2007
    more please. can't wait to see how you continue the story. keep up the good work. update soon please.
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  • From wildrose on March 05, 2007
    another gorgeous story! right, I had to admit that when McGonagall reveals Hermione had told her about being turned on by Snape I fell out of my chair laughing, just imagining the whole ordeal. can't wait for more! good job!

    ophelia
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  • From ANON - Lyssa on March 05, 2007
    MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From SorceressFujin on March 05, 2007
    Yummy! Looking forward to the next chapter. :P
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  • From ANON - sinbad on March 05, 2007
    Hmmmm the scent of citrus. I just love the domineering Snape. Ha! what man DOESN'T like a virgin? Seems to me he is just being difficult. Nice chapter 2 looking forward to chapter three. Hope you can update soon!
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  • From ANON - Moi on March 04, 2007
    I realize this is picky, but the woman puts her hand on the man's shoulder, not on his waist. He places his hand on her waist or back, depending on how closely he holds her. If she is very much shorter than he, it is permissable to rest her hand on his arm or even his chest (although flicking the nipple is frowned on).
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  • From LaBibliographe on March 03, 2007
    Chapter One: So do I have this correctly? That this story will be only wall-to-wall smut with Hermione Granger and Severus Snape? I have no objections to that. None at all!

    You said she'd never told anyone about her feelings for Snape - I'm assuming you didn't count McGonagall whom she ran to nearly instantly saying Snape turned her on.

    I detect a teensy bit of plot in the news that Snape is McGonagall's nephew. You'd better stomp on that insidious information before it turns into a full-blown issue and makes your story actually have a real plot. This is just an alert. I think you tend to weave ideas into your stories almost by magic, and a mindless PWP will sprout into a real story before you know what hit you. Watch out!! 8-)

    Three years later (are we past the Voldemort Era? Is he only a memory now?) she's moping about Snape again. Or I should say, still. Alrighty, then. Bring on the PWP. Smut pie, yummy. Lemon Meringue, I hope.

    Good start. I wonder who's going to get into who's knickers first?
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  • From bobbie on March 03, 2007
    pretty good so far,,i hope you continue to write more and soon..keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Lady Minstrel on March 03, 2007
    Wonderful first chapter! Great style too. I do realise that you want to write PWP but I think plot would only improve the story. Keep going!
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  • From Emmylovedraco on March 02, 2007
    I love it please keep it coming,
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  • From AriaDragoncrest on March 02, 2007
    Very good.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 02, 2007
    i like the start of this!!
    i hope you update soon!
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  • From crinna on March 02, 2007
    ok
    first off i really like this fic and i wold love to read more.

    second, pleas don't take offence, but his is a little note for another one of your fics. i am leaving it here for the fic "The Love of A Sheriff" i just want to be sure you see this in case you don't read the reviews on your older stories. i hope that it wasn't a one shot. i can see you have many pots running around in your very prolific head of yours, i just hope you can revisit some of your other work too.

    sorry if i am too naggy i don't want to sound ungrateful for the work you have already done i love your fics and i will keep an eye out for updates
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  • From ANON - Rani on March 02, 2007
    This is a good story so far. I will be watching to see where it goes. However, PWP is supposed to be porn WITH OUT plot, and you have to good a story emerging to do that. Give in, take the plot and run, and make us happy. Just my humble little tirade there.
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