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Reviews for Paradise Found

By : TCardan
  • From MotekElm on January 11, 2018

    Great second story for the triad in what a which wants. I'm so happy it's a full on plot + smut story with Dramionarry, and not an epilogue with fluff and kids.


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  • From ANON - pk on December 29, 2012
    Hey, Where can I find "What a Witch Needs"?
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  • From ANON - Laila2605 on September 01, 2011
    (Ron closed his eyes and moaned as her lips enveloped his cock with hot, wet, heat.
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  • From ANON - Sam on April 08, 2010
    For the most part, I enjoyed this story... however, I'm not so impressed with Harry's and Hermione's actions. If I were Draco, all they would have succeeded in doing was pushing me further away. That's not to say Draco avoiding them was all that smart either, but I can sympathise with him, I don't like Ronald Weasley either. And I'm sure his feelings of being pushed aside weren't helped at all by Harry nor Hermione, who I'm sure were spending plenty of time with the Weasleys without a thought to how it made Draco feel. Of course, I don't understand why Draco would wait for so long to return after receiving Harry's letter... basically him admitting to wanting Draco to return. (Yes, I'm aware Draco said "pride" in his head... but if his need for the other two was enough to overcome his feelings that the end of the whole ordeal and allow for sex, I'm a little confused as to why his need for them wouldn't overcome his pride.)

    I have a few questions, though. In WaWN there were apparently withdrawal symptoms when they left Marlston, how come Draco didn't seem to suffer these this time around? Regarding Bunny/Tiger... I can see sending a female, because at least Hermione can partake, but Tiger's a male... and none of the triad will touch him... which leaves him for guests, or possibly other pets, and by Hermione's rules, only if they want to.

    Has Mordred possessed anyone of the other Marlston triads? Or is Draco just 'lucky'? When Draco became possessed, Harry would have lost his powers, ya? So... wouldn't Harry have shown some sort of worry for Draco after he returned from capturing the vampires, powerless? Even if he wasn't worried for Hermione?

    I hope Hermione's learned not to open Marlston up to the general public by now, how many times does the way to Merlin have to become breached for her to grow a little more paranoid?

    Also, if Hermione wasn't as bad off as she appeared to be, why didn't she listen to Draco, and released Those That Dwell Below? I was going to ask why she didn't just ask them not to harass her guests in the first place, but then realized that if they were out at all, they would have stopped her from being bitten.

    I think that's all for this one.

    --Sam
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  • From on September 11, 2009
    good story darco is hurt becouse he is afraid that ron will take his lover away.. ron is hurt becosue darcco is taking his friend away, and afreaid that they will stop being friend with ron to make darco happy
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  • From ANON - darkangel on June 26, 2009
    wow! i loved it, and no i never guessed that the whole scenario was a setup...lol. i love triad fanfics, your body of work is quite impressive.
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  • From ANON - horsegurl1986 on May 09, 2009
    This is a really good story. I love it. I'm really glad you kept going after What a Witch Needs. It was a good ending but I'm enjoying the post story as well. Keep it up. You're an amazing writer =]
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  • From diami25 on March 17, 2009
    My god you keep the excitement on so amazingly well!!!!!!! i keep fidgeting in my room, your smut is not just smut the plot in it is just.... unbearable, I can't stop reading and grow with ... what is it ... nervousness? Anticipation?.. My god ... I can't believe you!
    YOU ROCK! YOU SOOOO ROCK...

    Off to continue in chp2 at the moment ... oh boy what will Draco do?!... *squeals*


    Finished now... Wow... it truly was an incredible story I will love to read the few stories u have written on this plot, I hope you wrote some by now, I
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  • From ANON - Som Lancer on March 05, 2009
    moar plz?
    sorry, i go lolcat when i get excited... but still, more triad would make me very pleased. i was not a fan of slash previously, but slash with the other parts does quite nicely. i look forward to everything you post.

    Som
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  • From ANON - moiramctaggart on February 18, 2009
    Thank you so much for continuing this story. I've read WAWN too many times to count and having this extra made me so happy. Thank you. Thank you! THANK YOU!!!
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  • From chantalmalfoy on February 17, 2009
    Another awesome fic... I am so glad that I found these after they were finished. :) I hate waiting... lol. The only thing I felt was missing in this one was that you started this great thing with Ginny and Blaise that never got to be... so maybe if you make another fic... lol. :)
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  • From marieriddle20 on February 13, 2009
    I really hope you write more to the triad story
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  • From marieriddle20 on January 18, 2009
    so i've spent the last week in front of my laptop reading all of WAWN and now this. I'm in love with this plot, its amzing! please do more with it!!!!
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  • From THEleprechaun on January 08, 2009
    **glomp huggle attack of doom (the fun kind of doom that is)** I absolutely LOVE your writing!! I cracked up soooo much during WAWN that my husband thought I was having a mental breakdown until I jumped him ^^. So, huggles and triad shaped marshmallows to you for being so awesome! and yes, in case you're wondering, I do drink an abnormally large amount of coffee.....**shifty glance** woot!

    love and huggles,
    Murray the Leprechaun
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  • From dragongirl on January 07, 2009
    It would be lovely if you continue with the adventures of the triad and the mansion they should have the 7th yr and also becoming the parents of the twins.... that would be simply amazing.... just pls think about it....
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