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Reviews for Every One Wants Harry Potter Version 1

By : Raitseka
  • From NightLo on March 19, 2007
    Personally I would love to read 2 versions at the same time, you know, the feeling of Draco/Harry and Snape/Harry is totally different! So please don't stop this and carry on with BOTH couples.

    In the case of Draco, actually more lessons should he learn before actually starting with Harry, as he may view Harry and boy-who-lived differently - one as possesstion while the other one as prize/praise/fame. In the case of Snape, there is no such problem (pretty obvious don't we), instead, friction would be greater (e.g. moral/James influence)...so please, please continue with both couples.
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  • From graballz on March 18, 2007
    Suggestion: Oh, wow, please NOT Harry/Snape! Harry belongs with Draco and ONLY Draco! Let's see, Harry is afraid that Draco is only with him because he's famous....so Draco has to prove that he's with Harry because he LOVES him!

    Ooooh, okay, I have an idea (feel free NOT to use it...I'm just thinking out loud here) of how you can have a Harry/Draco fic with a Harry/Snape TEMPORARY pairing, AND prove to Harry that Draco loves him, whether he's the Boy Who Lived or not!!! Go with me on this...

    Harry left Draco's, upset, and Snape catches him in Slytherin. Snape takes him to his office and proceeds to "teach Harry a lesson" (torture, molestation, rape, spanking, that sort of thing...see? Temporary Harry/Snape). Harry doesn't know what to make of it and stumbles back to Gryffindor. (Ron's pissed at him, Harry doesn't know how he should feel about Draco, and then on top of it, Snape violated him)

    Under Snape's influence, all of Slytherin (except Draco) are making fun of Harry for being a "whore" (going from Ron to Draco to even Snape, maybe?) Snape tells all of them that Harry came onto HIM, even though in "reality" Snape was the one who violated Harry. Draco sees Harry's hurt reactions and suspects that something's not right, but he keeps his distance because he's hurt that Harry left.

    Then Ron starts in on Harry (in front of everyone) basically like the Slytherins do. Harry starts crying and then Ron is taunting him for not acting like the "Boy Who Lived" (being weak, crying, being a whore, etc) Harry runs out of the Great Hall (I envision this taking place at a meal or something) and Draco hexes Ron/Slytherin/Snape and follows Harry (or the other way around: follows Harry first, then hexes them later for revenge).

    But basically, Draco comforts Harry, which proves to Harry that Draco loves him for who he is because Harry hurt him and Draco still came back, and Draco came to hold him when Harry needed him most--when he wasn't acting like the "Boy Who Lived". And then more Harry and Draco-y goodness ensues!

    Wow, no idea where that came from, so yeah...
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  • From Jerica on March 18, 2007
    As long as you keep a Harry/Draco version I'm happy.
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  • From graballz on March 18, 2007
    Chapter 2--Neville...plants! HAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAAHAH Made me laugh! *gasp* EEEEEEEEe Yay Harry and Draco making out!!!! But everyone's still watching......I'M NERVOUS! ohohohohohohohohohohohohohohohohohohooh

    Chapter 3--*gasp* Ron's going to back hand Harry??? I'LL KILL HIM! *GASP* YAY DRACO! GO BABIES! DRACO SAVED HIM! And then Harry patted him on the head!!!! THAT'S GREAT! YUM Harry and Draco are gonna SHAG! *happy dance*

    Chapter 4--Mmmmmmmmmmmmm delicious! OH! Mental picture: Draco in black silk boxers!!!! SCORE! OH MY FUCKING GOD THAT WAS FUCKING AWESOME AND HOTTTT! And you wrote that on a "bad" day??? Note to self: hook up oxygen BEFORE reading next sex scene! I stopped breathing partway through because it was so fucking sexxxy!

    Chapter 5--MAWWAWAWAFAWAIOJGIAWOGW;GN; WHAT???? THAT WAS UNEXPECTED??? HARRY, BABY, DON'T LEAVE!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO (PS I'm traumatized)

    OH PLEASE FUCK NO!!!!! DON'T TURN THIS INTO A HARRY/SNAPE! (speaking of trauma....) GET A GRIP!!!!!
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  • From Jerica on March 17, 2007
    Okay. Now what happens between the two of them?
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  • From NightLo on March 17, 2007
    Just wondering, if this is version 1, that means there must be version 2! Will there be more hotter sex? Or will this be another one?
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 17, 2007
    How wonderful! Can't wait for chapter 5!
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  • From stasa on March 16, 2007
    That was very, extremely HOT!!!
    MORE!!!! :)

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  • From stasa on March 14, 2007
    MORE, I NEED MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!
    YOU CAN'T STOP THERE!!!!
    YOU ARE EVIL!!! :D
    Update soon...
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 14, 2007
    Poor Harry! Soo can't wait for chapter 4!
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  • From NightLo on March 13, 2007
    Hum...with only limited points of view (Ron, Harry and Draco), I cannot rationalize Harry's motive and action, but it seems to me the title should be "Harry Potter wants everyone" instead.

    Wait for more update.
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  • From sutraqueen101 on March 09, 2007
    This is a great story so far. Please do continue : )
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  • From Jerica on March 09, 2007
    Doesn't seem like everybody wants Harry Potter. Just most of them. Ron shouldn't be upset though. I can't really see Harry and him going out.
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  • From NightLo on March 08, 2007
    Okay - now what will happen next? For example, Ron and Harry and Seamus? Blasie and Draco or even Harry? Or even more unexpected pairings?
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  • From Leenah on March 08, 2007
    Ih...very nice. I want more hot action. please update soon :)
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