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By : ccino49
  • From misslala on April 05, 2007
    Ok I have to ask, maybe you can leave a note after you update this story again but this question retains solely to "Assimilation". Ok, did Harry, ROn and Hermione have issue with Nina because of her helping him and they knew, or because Harry had forgotten her after she removed the Horcrux? i think that is the only thing I am still confused about..or was it all due to snape being snape? And their intense irritation with him...ARGH...the story's you write have me thorogly wrapped up - if you kept writing stories with your own characters I have no doubt that they would be quite popular. Now on to one other point...I have taken it upon myself to tell you this simply because I don't want people saying I copied or anything...I have a tale I am working on that I already started to publish on here and Lamia and Eurynes are in it but in a different way...hrm...when I found them I was taken with them and so decided I would use them. Anyway - I hope that there isn't an issue there I hope to see a reply or you can email me, lmay3@carolina.rr.com.

    Ja ne!
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  • From Emmylovedraco on April 05, 2007
    OH!' "WOW" that was "Wow" Is it Hot in here, OH! yes you go girl man that was the best chappy I mean all your chappy's are good but this one Was So "HOT" "HOT" "HOT". "HeHeHe".
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  • From misslala on April 05, 2007
    Ok that was just too hot for words, LOL RAWR! *feed the bunny many carrots* Damn I will have to read that again later :P
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  • From Miepje on April 04, 2007
    *phew* I melted into a lustpuddle... and then there was a cliffie! *argh* I hope you update soon.
    I'm glad that Severus realised his feelings for Sky. And even though it's not right to read about someone's thoughts and feeling without permission, it's good that Severus understands Sky a bit better now.

    More!!! Please? ;D ~Miepje
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  • From Apryl on April 03, 2007
    So, Severus wants to be "The Great White Knight"? Who's that, you ask. Someone who can take away all of the pain of the past. Someone who can seem to freeze time and make you forget all of your worries. He is the reason we read fan fiction and fiction in general. Sadly he doesn't exist and is not out there waiting for us to find. **wistful sigh** Keep up the good work. Til next time, Apryl 8D
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  • From Emmylovedraco on April 03, 2007
    OH! my God' OH! my God' please please update soon Please today now ''WOW''.
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  • From Katha on April 03, 2007
    W-O-W ... O_O .... you're quite mean, aren't you?? What a cliffie ;) .. I really love it!! Keep it up
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  • From skydancer on April 03, 2007
    pleeeeease tell me you have some magic-mirrors to loan out for the next chapter!!!!!! OMG!!!!!!!!
    ahem...okay. calmed down(a bit) LOVED the was Snape felt when he thought he was going to die, and then the perfect turn on..I mean turn around...lol....more!
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  • From misslala on April 03, 2007
    OMG I think i want to hug you and kick you at the same time for leaving off there!!!!!! ARGH! LOL That was HOT! The way she innocently tasted him...*shivers* You are such a good writer...wow! That was too hot and i want more...shame, LOL FOR SHAME! This story has me begging...how terrible. LOL Keep up the excellent work! I can't wait to read the start of the next chapter.
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  • From Miepje on April 03, 2007
    It's good to see Severus feeling better and I'm glad he won't be going back to Voldie. I really liked this chapter; they seem to be getting a bit more comfortable around each other, even though Sky was embarrassed after they held each other. ^^

    Looking forward to more, so update soon please?! ~Miepje
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  • From Apryl on April 03, 2007
    Well, I'll be damned! Severus is actually being a good boy. Albus has been chastised -- he he! **sniff, sniff** What's that fresh citrus scent? Is that a lemon I smell? Apryl 8D
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  • From Happyappy on April 02, 2007
    So, what did Albus do to make her so angry? So glad Severus is on the mend and almost himself. He has found himself in quite a tresure trove of new/old information. Glad he put her diary down. I don't think she would have taken that very well. I really didn't want that chapter to end! More, more more.
    Sansa
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  • From Dixie50 on April 02, 2007
    I am really enjoying this story and eagerly await your next Chapter !
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  • From skydancer on April 02, 2007
    wondered if the mirror-looking had "voice" Lol...poor Albus...caught off-guard by that!
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  • From misslala on April 02, 2007
    BUGGER it's over already!!!!! Argh! And how I was so looking forward to a longer chapter. haha I keep getting engrossed over and over again you are a great writer and this is a wonderful story! I hope your writers block wanes, I would love to see this story finish unlike so many that wind up on this site. Sky and Severus both deserve a level of happiness the way you have written this tale.

    I am glad Severus restrained himself from reading Sky's diary, that would have been invasive and if he cared about her he wouldn't do that...I still get a kick out of her reactions when he is aroused. I can't think of anymore things to throw you a loop right now but Voldemort better get his due nad Ablus, curse his damn meddling. Always doing things to hurt others - even if he doesn't mean to. Anyway, keep it up, I can't wait to read more!
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