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Reviews for No one Comes When You cry

By : ccino49
  • From skydancer on March 31, 2007
    ewwwwwww...death from gangrene? *shudder* that is deserving of the Fourth unforgivable.
    I did have a softening for Albus when he admitted his faults (albit only to himself...)
    chocolate covered P.B.U.N.S for you!!
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  • From Happyappy on March 30, 2007
    Wow, I really didn't want that one to end. I wanted see what happened when Severus wakes up. You finally make me like him in this story, then you almost kill him! Voldie thinks he is dead now, right? So he won't have to answer the dark mark if it is activated again, right? It is a good thing that Sky knew what was wrong with him, and remembered how to cure it. The eyes rolled back in his head was kinda creepy. Actually, the whole curse was kind of creepy. No wonder it is the 4th unforgivable. Gangarene, ICK! Can't wait to read what happens next.
    Sansa
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  • From Miepje on March 30, 2007
    "Tingly?" I loved that part! And Severus (in pyjamas ^^) being watched by Sky and telling her goodnight was funny and sweet.
    Death from gangrene; what a nasty curse! Thank gods Sky was able to get to Severus on time and heal him; it wouldn't have been as much fun without him, right?

    Looking forward to more! (I just hope you're not TOO evil at the end *sob*) ~Miepje
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  • From Dixie50 on March 30, 2007
    A very original story. I am up to Chapter 14 and look forward to more. You write very well.
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  • From misslala on March 30, 2007
    I hope that idea doesn't entail sky dead...I am such a romantic I want a happy ending to this story. LOL Poor girl has been through enough. I actually am going to have to go back a chapter ot two to find the section about Why Severus couldn't go in because it seems I ahve forgotten!!!! NOOO....lol

    Something has to give, poor sky is dealing with so much for her feelings and Severus...he's going to be lost if he keeps dealing with so much. its not fair, LOL Albus of course is being his usual self which I have come to have a serious love/hate relationship for the headmaster. bleh. You are awesome and have me thorolgly wanting more...its like a drug now. I take my husband to work so we can juggle our one car and then come home and hope to read the next insallment, LOL You rock!!
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  • From Happyappy on March 29, 2007
    I'm glad Sky went back to Hogwarts. I am also glad that her and Severus have admitted their feelings to each other. Can't wait to see what the next chapter brings.
    Sansa
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  • From skydancer on March 29, 2007
    that was a great chapter! nice transition from the Snarky to the (dare I day it..? ) Sexy Snape. love the 'jammies at the end lol...
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  • From misslala on March 29, 2007
    ARGH! This just keeps getting better. Severus embarassed? Holy shit! This is such a cool story and I thank you for writing it. I understand drawing out the tension and all, but man they are just too cute together now. LOL I love this story...Sky watching him masturbate...WOW...lol That's kinda hot. And then him bidding her goodnight, RAWR! *Love is in the air* hopefully she doesn't die...now all I worry about is her dying at Voldemort's hands...:( Then she and Severus won't be together...you wouldn't do that would you? No...you can't, not after building them up so much...hrmmm....authors really are evil, LOL

    Please keep going, I look forward to the updates for this thing every day!
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  • From Katha on March 28, 2007
    Love it :) ... I always wanted to read a story like that.. an now... *pling* here it is :) .. Keep it up and update soon!

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  • From Miepje on March 27, 2007
    Yay! Sky kicked some Voldie-butt! She did great, even though she needed healing afterwards. It was also great to see that Sky had more confidence when she talked with Albus and that Severus and Sky are slowly getting a bit closer.

    Wonderful as always. Thanks! ~Miepje
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  • From Happyappy on March 27, 2007
    So, now what's she going to do? Talk to them? Are the founders going to reveal everything to her before she leaves? Might it change her mind about going to Hogwarts? Might her feelings for Severus sway her some? Since she healed Snape a few more times, obviously he was called to Voldie a few more times. Why did he let him live after the humiliation that Sky caused? Keep up the good story.
    Sansa
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  • From skydancer on March 27, 2007
    another amazing part to an already amazing story!!!!


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  • From Emmylovedraco on March 27, 2007
    Great! chappy sad but I loved it, And I love that song I can't wait for the next update.
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  • From misslala on March 27, 2007
    Holy shit~ That was awesome. go sky! hahaha She's too sweet even if she is angry wtih sir. :O You have a brilliant story - keep it up!
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  • From Happyappy on March 26, 2007
    Oh, you left us at that point! I wanted more! I wanted to know what happens when she wakes up. I was enthralled with that chapter. Voldie and his followers got theirs. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
    Sansa
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