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Reviews for No one Comes When You cry

By : ccino49
  • From skydancer on March 12, 2007
    P.B.U.N.S. To you and your bunny!
    (Plot Bunny Ultra Nutritious Snacks : silent 'p')

    This story is wonderful. Sad, sick and silly, but wonderfuly written as always.
    I think you have Canon-Snape down to a art.
    I can hardly wait to find out who Sky is and why her life was like that.

    Sky dancer
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  • From Happyappy on March 12, 2007
    I have to say one of my favorite parts of this story so far are your descriptives that you have Severus say about Dumbledore and Harry Potter. They are just too funny! I hope you continue it through out the story.
    Sansa
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  • From Emmylovedraco on March 11, 2007
    God! that was so sad but really funny too I like this story please update soon luv,
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  • From ridert on March 11, 2007
    good chapter always like seeing Snapes softer side even if he can't admit it to himself that he is starting to care for the child not to sure about the physical atraction bit but the story wouldn't be the same without it hope to see more soon.
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  • From misslala on March 11, 2007
    This is a truly interesting story so far. I am looking forward to more. Please update soon.
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  • From Miepje on March 10, 2007
    So there's a girl under all those rags. I wonder what's up with that stone/necklace and how Albus knew Severus would find someone there (although Sky is clearly not a boy like Albus thought ^^).
    But no more hitting the new girl! *tsk* Severus can have such a temper ^^

    Looking forward to more! ~Miepje
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  • From Amaris on March 10, 2007
    Okay first of I am sorry but I just HAD to review this before I really started it. I just love your chapter Rags and how you refer to the person as rags as if he/she is a non-entity. I've never really read anything put that way and I read a lot maybe I just having been paying attention lol. Anywho, I thought that was beautifully done and original. Okay I am done with my rambling.... on to finish your story.
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  • From skydancer on March 10, 2007
    oh geez...I really, really hope who ever did this to her gets stuck in a room with Snape for a minute..or two.

    Sky
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  • From Happyappy on March 09, 2007
    I know that no one comes when you cry, but I just want to cry for this poor girl. What an awful life she must have led. It just makes me cringe to imagine her wounds. Guess Albus is way wrong thinking she is a boy. What's up with the necklace? I'm really looking forward to reading more.
    Sansa
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  • From Aragonsan on March 09, 2007
    It's a very intrigueing beginning so far and I'm looking forward to more! Can't say much more at the moment because the OC and her cirumstances/function is still such a complete mystery...
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  • From skydancer on March 08, 2007
    that was a tear-jerker of a start
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  • From Happyappy on March 07, 2007
    Oh my, how sad. So many questions. Who is the rags, how did they get there, who put them there, why did they beat the rags, why did they suddenly abandon the rags, and if Dumbledore knew they were there, why did he wait till now to save them. I'm sure you will reaveal all of this with time, but you know me, I feel compelled to ask. Good thing Severus kept looking. Can't wait to read more. Thanks for letting me know it was posted!
    Sansa
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  • From Miepje on March 07, 2007
    A very interesting beginning. But what horrible way to live (if you can call that living). Thank gods Severus found "the rags". Can't wait to see what will happen next.

    Great to see a new story! ~Miepje

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  • From Emmylovedraco on March 07, 2007
    I love it already so I know this story is going to be good Please update sooon,
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