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Reviews for Stalking Maya

By : MayaJensen
  • From Amaris on April 16, 2007
    Excellent story I love evil Snape and I love evil Lucius together oh my it's just too much I can't stand it!!!! I love it!!!! Can't wait for more.
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  • From ccino49 on April 07, 2007
    Oh please when are you gonna update. I'm looking every day and still nothing. sob. Eagerly waiting.
    ccino
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  • From ccino49 on April 04, 2007
    Malfoy, your a b#####d. Can't perform well without a spell. You too Snape, I hope you're gonna heal her. And they wanna bring Voldemort back, they're bloody insane. Just out of curiosity, the original contract. Malfoy said it was worthless, how so? He signed, it so what makes it null and void?
    Please, not so long between chapters, it's torture.
    ccino
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  • From InfernalParadise on April 04, 2007
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  • From LaBibliographe on March 31, 2007
    Chapter 10: You said, "I make him do something nasty to Maya later..." I thought he'd been doing that all along, so is this nasty thing going to be really bad? I'm going to put on dark glasses when I read that part so it's not so traumatic.

    So Voldie is a daddy, or was a daddy. And they're going to bring back daddy dearest? How is Maya involved in this, I wonder. And maybe Voldie is going to be angry that those two have been defiling his daughter. Poor Maya - reamed out physically and now emotionally. If Maya is the daughter, why did Lucius keep Hermione for a year and a half? If they were purely prurient reasons, tell ALL.

    And Gaps if you want Lucius to win and I want Maya to win, they both win, don't they? (I'm sure there is some lemon logic in there somewhere...)
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  • From InfernalParadise on March 27, 2007
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  • From LaBibliographe on March 27, 2007
    Chapter 9: Hermione's incarceration will be over, and she'll not remember a thing, so Maya won't have a champion to help her. WHY does that wizard duo need to keep a witch in a cell for one and a half years? Just for kicks? they seem able to grab any female who takes their fancy with no trouble, so why put one in a cell? That takes effort: cell cleaning, feeding the prisoner, keeping the cell a secret - going to that unpleasant place at all seems over the top to me.

    So, the mystery deepens. Is it Maya they need, or would any female do? But for what? Hmm, guess I'll find out in a chapter or so...Are there by chance any lemons coming our way? 'Lemony Lucius' just has a nice ring to it. 8-)
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  • From LaBibliographe on March 25, 2007
    Chapter 8: Well, I'm stumped. Was Maya the victim of a spell, or wasn't she? Thinking out loud here -- Lucius has every reason to lie to Maya to humiliate her so she thinks she reacted to them merely with her own libido. But then again, he could be telling the truth. However, that would mean she subconsciously enjoyed being basically raped, and with such a strong-minded witch, I would find that harder to believe. No, my guess is he is merely trying to rattle her into thinking she likes it with him and Snape. That would be a mind game Lucius would certainly be capable of playing, as nasty a person as he is.

    That's my guess and I'm sticking to it. Therefore, Score: Maya - 1, Lucius (and Snape) - 0

    On with the battle! Who will win? [My money's on Maya -- 8-)]
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  • From ccino49 on March 24, 2007
    Malfoy's a sneaky git. Pretending they cast a spell. That's if he was telling the truth. He's just given Maya a clue how to make him give up on her though. If she just stops fighting, he's gonna get bored and give up. Isn't he? Maybe. There again, he's had Hermione for one and a half years. Who wouldn't give up? Less time between postings. It's agony waiting to find out what's happening next. :D
    ccino
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  • From InfernalParadise on March 23, 2007
    I really didn
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  • From ccino49 on March 22, 2007
    Oh I'd love to know what that spell was that Malfoy used in the bath. At least they're making it good for her. I don't suppose that's much of a consolation to Maya though. lol. Hope Snapes not leaving the room JUST yet.
    ccino
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  • From LaBibliographe on March 21, 2007
    Chapters 5-7: A tandem event, first one, then the other. Malfoy and Snape share a lot, I see. What was the 'spell'? they used to make Maya enjoy their attentions? And what could Maya have done, really, with her wand anyway? Kept herself safe, when Malfoy's whole idea was sex, sex, and more sex? I don't imagine her wand would have helped her much.

    At the end of 14 days Maya is through, and Hermione is set free, but what will keep Hermione from complaining to the authorities? She's not a student under the sway of Malfoy. Shouldn't Malfoy be worried about that? Or will he let her go - just for a moment - and then put her back in the cell (or kill her)? That would be okay under the blood oath. Was Hermione merely a sex toy for Lucius or was there another reason he was holding her in that dank cell?

    Well, I'll have to wait and see what the evil blond wizard does. I guess Lucius has no redeeming qualities in your fic. A nasty, vicious wizard and his nasty, vicious wizard friend. Two peas in a pod.
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  • From ccino49 on March 20, 2007
    Urgh. Why the hell didn't she read before she signed? That Lucius really is a nasty B*****d. But that's how I like him. Snape too for that matter. lol. Keep it going. Less time between updates please. :D
    ccino
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  • From InfernalParadise on March 18, 2007
    Excellent job so far, really! You definitely fulfill my expectations. I love how your Lucius is so utterly evil and
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  • From ccino49 on March 18, 2007
    Please update again soon. I want to know how Malfoy got hold of Hermione. Will Malfoy take the oath to release Hermione once Maya gives him what he wants? Will Maya end up in the dungeon instead of Hermione? Will Snape join the coupling when Malfoy has his wicked way with Maya? Aargh. Stop keeping me in suspense. I have loads of questions.
    ccino
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