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By : ccrawley
  • From sentineljandb2 on April 15, 2007
    Wow what is Hermione planning to do with her new Malfoy toy!

    Wonder if Draco will come looking for his father. What a surprise he will get, and maybe Hermione will add Draco to her Malfoy toy collection.

    I like that Hermione is the one in charge, from the title I thought that she would be the Toy.

    Can
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  • From misslala on April 15, 2007
    hahaha Hermione screwed him tied up that's great!!!! DENY HIM! What a pratt!
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  • From on April 14, 2007
    Well Lucius certainly had his way with her didn't he! I suppose wooing her was out of the question. Now I'm curious to see Hermione's reaction when she comes to. Is Lucius planning on keeping her? Please update soon!
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  • From Prufrockgirl on April 03, 2007
    I don't know quite how to put this, this story is....horrifically awesome. Very creative, certainly. Please keep updating. I enjoy reading it.
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  • From DB1 on April 02, 2007
    @6, great chpater, update soon

    *DB*
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  • From misslala on March 30, 2007
    Talk about getting fucked six ways from sunday, LOL I wish that you would have been more descriptive with the sex but it was good either way. Lucius is too hot for words...:P RAWR!
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  • From LaBibliographe on March 30, 2007
    Chapter 6: My goodness, Lucius didn't waste any time at all did he? After all tht, what does he have left for dessert? So far, this Lucius is shaping up to be a certified slimeball (I guess I can live with that - slime and lemons go quite well together, don't they?) But poor Hermione, all she did was go to her bookcase for a book without putting a robe on first, and she gets all this?

    How's this for a punishment for Colin - tied down spreadeagled, diced ferret spread all over him and a herd of hippogriffs let loose on him? Too bad, Colin couldn't be the one portkeyed to Italy, but I think this Lucius isn't bent that way. A shame.

    I hope Hermione manages to even the score with the Dark Wizard. I always like to see Lucius in the final act, at her mercy in one manner or another. And I hope Narcissa is out of the picture permanently some way. It's always messy for Hermione when he's married. (Sheesh, I wish Rowling hadn't made him a married man - widower would have been perfect.) 8-)
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  • From on March 21, 2007
    Oh wow! I just found your story today!

    What a funny idea with Play Wizard! I suppose the pictures move as well, making them even more tantalizing. Lol

    I also liked the part about the Polyjuice call girl. I know Blaise was able to see the girl before she switched, but it
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  • From DB1 on March 13, 2007
    @5. amazing chapter, go hermione sue them, too bad people have already seen them, though they have magic couldn't they like erase the memory of those who saw it when they retract the issue???? got to love magic!!!! update soon!!

    *DB*
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  • From ShilohDarke on March 12, 2007
    Chapter 5:

    I loved Hermione's reaction. (The child of Crooks sounds so cute) Anyway... Her reaction to the News of the magazine was priceless! I hope she gets to sue their arses off! oh, and I do hope that was Lucius that joined her in her trip at the end of the chapter... Perhaps he will turn on the smooth Malfoy charm, instead of just kidnapping her and ordering her to just relax and enjoy? Of course, I know that both Hermione and Lucius are stubborn to a fault, so this should be fun!!!

    Write more soon!
    SD
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  • From ShilohDarke on March 12, 2007
    Hmmm... Chapter 4:

    I like the way his jaw drops when he sees the pictures. I like the choice he made as to which position he liked her best in... I also thought that it was very Malfoyish of him with his instant, She will love his rough sex... LOL!!! Okay, going to read ch 5 now

    SD
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  • From LaBibliographe on March 12, 2007
    Chapter 5: I feel so sorry for Hermione. Suing the publisher won't bring back her privacy. I hope you have a suitable punishment in store for Colin - may I suggest blinding him so he loses his livelihood and can never do that to anyone else? Perhaps that's too bloodthirsty - oh, just stick with my previous choice - cut off his balls. And then blind him or at least make his eyesight so poor he can't function as a photographer.

    As for the magazine - Hermione should at least get filthy rich from their illegal use of her pics. I think she may need the money if it's who I think it is, going along with her on her portkey. He has very highbrow tastes.

    Oh, I do hope it's Lucius. That man is seriously HOT!! I might have posed nude too, if it brought me to his attention as a mate. Colinnn...Where's that stupid boy when you need him!!?
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  • From MsMischief on March 12, 2007
    this is definitely fun to read
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  • From scotsgirl on March 12, 2007
    I am very interested in this story i think it will be full of fun, looking forward to the next update, which i hope might be soon
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  • From misslala on March 12, 2007
    Hello! I just found this story and I think the concept it cool. I like the story very much and hope that you will take this as constuctive criticism and not flames. You are crafting an interesting piece here and I am glad you are sharing it. You have a few issues with tenses and personal point of view. Fixing those are a good start. Also, you completed the first few chapters so quickly. I feel like you have a lot of room to expand more details in this story. I really like it and hope that I can read more soon! :)
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