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By : ccrawley
  • From DB1 on March 12, 2007
    @4 great chapter, can't wait for hermione's reaction!!! wonder if she can sue colin??? anyways update soon!!

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  • From LaBibliographe on March 12, 2007
    Chapter 4: Minor detail - the title of the chapter is mislabeled chapter five.

    Otherwise, I really liked seeing Lucius getting all horny looking at the contraband pictures. It was nice the way you described the particular pose Lucius liked and what he imagined he was going to do. He certainly has good taste in women - and poses.

    The elder Malfoy's a very fast mover, already planning his nuptials from a few pictures of Hermione naked. I guess he know what he wants when he sees it. I don't know how Draco is going to feel when he finds out he's in competition with his own father. Besides adjusting to second place - Hermione would be crazy to want hamburger when she can have steak. Sizzling, HOT steak...

    Now when will Luicus' daydream come true? Next chapter??

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  • From DB1 on March 10, 2007
    @3. cool story, poor hermione though.

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  • From ShilohDarke on March 08, 2007
    Oh man! I can't wait to see what's going to happen next! I hope Hermione kicks some photographers butt! Little terd! Although, I look forward to seeing what Lucius does when he sees the magazine. And of course How will Hermione react to it all? I'm sure she'll be livid! And what about when Harry and Ron see it? OMG!!!

    LOL,
    SD
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  • From crinna on March 07, 2007
    this is very good i can't wait to read more. i love the little snake tattoo
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  • From LaBibliographe on March 07, 2007
    Chapters 1-3: I haven't read a story with a Polyjuice prostitute before so I think that was a terrific idea. It makes so much sense. Now all I need is some hair off Lucius' head (snerk).

    The idea of Hermione Granger being photographed naked and put on the cover of the magazine was great! And Snape's reaction! Draco and Blaise didn't waste any time using the pics for their own edification. Blaise is the kinkier of the two - odd - I might have voted for Draco, being his father's son and all. But Blaise did himself proud.

    I can't wait to read who else reacts to those pics. Since you've put this in the Lucius/Hermione section I certainly hope Lucius Malfoy reads Play Wizard. AND how will poor Hermione react to all this? She'll have every horny young (and old) man after her now. Can she sue Colin for invasion of privacy and selling those pics without her permission? I hope she strings him up by his gonads.

    Waiting for the next chapter. What next???
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  • From NoOdlesOup on March 07, 2007
    I honestly don't know which is worse "remembering that she was forgetting something" or "the press of her large breast pressing" Get a bloody beta!
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  • From WyckedInnocence on March 07, 2007
    Interesting.
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