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By : SexyMomma
  • From Domine on March 23, 2007
    In my personal opinion Hermione should kick Adicus' ass brutally. Maybe he'd escape but she'd curse his jumk off first. (Sevvy should show up all knight-in-tarnished-armor just in time to see that) That'd be awesome.... Hermione wouldn't get thrown into the generic damsel in distress category (which is so not her) and Sevvy would get to step back and say "whoa". Great so far, keep it up. Thanks much.

    (I now say Sevvy just because JK hates it. Darn her for not seeing that Hermione and Severus belong together.)
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  • From Rumpelyssa on March 23, 2007
    I like flies in the ointment.

    I would like Hermione to be captured by this Adicus' guy personally. I think that it would add that drama and continue the angsty UST you've got here.

    Also, Severus could enlist Harry's help... (without telling him that he and Hermione are becoming close) and it might do to help Ron grow up to.

    I like Ron as well, so I hope there is someone you have in mind for him... like Luna?
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  • From hermioneandseverusfan82 on March 23, 2007
    thanks for the guess to bad i guess. the cookie sound nice.
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  • From SexyMomma on March 23, 2007
    Close but no cookie, Although it was someone that the trio did go to school with...But it was NOT Draco and definetly not Krum...Viccy does come in later tho...hehehe.
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  • From hermioneandseverusfan82 on March 23, 2007
    hermione should kick Adicus' ass and make her 'admirer' come out into the open. can i have a guess on who it is i think it is eather victor or draco.
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  • From DavidL on March 21, 2007
    Although I agree that Ron is not right for Hermione I can't see him really reacting like that, love potion or not. Because R/Hr is the way Rowling seems to be going it's a great temptation for a writer who supports another ship to turn Ron into a villian. But that's an easy way out that does not do justice to either character.

    And I really don't like the plot device of Harry or Snape or whoever coming to Hermione's rescue. I'd much rather see her defend herself. Sorry, but I don't think this story is really my cup of tea
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 21, 2007
    oohh boy!! i love it.. and what an ass ron is.
    thank the lord severus was there to save the day..
    (even if it was the gates)
    and now hermione knows that severus is planning on courting her!! yayy!!!
    update soon please!!
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  • From DarqueHart on March 21, 2007
    Don't you think that in the few hours Hermione was talking to Snape that it's rather odd for her to have gone from this, in Ch 1:
    "Now, now Hermione....You are no longer my student. I'm going to insist that you either call me Minerva or Minnie...All my friends and colleagues do." the older woman said gently."

    To this, in Ch 2:
    Hermione huffed for a moment. "You heard what I said you old cat! You just want to hear me say it louder!"

    I don't care how flustered that Hermione might have been, in a few hours time, she wouldn't go from referring to McGonagall as 'Headmistress' to 'you old cat'!!!

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  • From ShilohDarke on March 21, 2007
    Good chappie! I was so happy to see it up this morning! I truly enjoyed it, even if I hate that Ron is being such a git! (I kind of like the guy myself, even if I have him being a turkey in one of my stories as well) I hope that whatever is going on with him won't be perminent. I can't wait to see where Hermione and Severus take their newfound attraction!

    Thanks for updating so fast!

    SD
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  • From CryingCinderella on March 21, 2007
    Interesting plot twist. Hooray for Harry punching Ron.
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  • From Rumpelyssa on March 21, 2007
    Oh ho! Ron's a git! We knew that all along, but I can't imagine him raping Hermione... possibly forcing his lips on hers *fights off images!* but hey, it gives him that darker edge which I do like.

    Great story, can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 20, 2007
    i like this story!
    update soon!
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  • From CryingCinderella on March 14, 2007
    Interesting...I don't know that the dream sequence really works there. It was very cliche to go into a dream sequence that raunchy and you could feel it coming from the moment she appeared in the teddy. If you wanted to make the dream sequence more conducive to the story don't have him bolt out of bed. Just go into the dream from her standing in his chambers in the teddy, and then roll into it. He can bolt upright at the end of the dream and hear the knock if he likes as it stirs him from his reverie, I think that would flow better. but what do I know. Heh. Good job thus far. I'd like to see more.
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  • From emerson on March 12, 2007
    I enjoyed the academic discussion between the intern and the professor. I would use spell check before submitting the next chapter. You also might want to capitalize Wolfsbane Potion because it's a proper noun. I'm looking forward to seeing this story develop.
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  • From shelagh on March 12, 2007
    Great start! I'm looking forward to find out where this is going.
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