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Reviews for Who Can It Be Now?

By : YamiBakura
  • From AliceMina on July 03, 2007
    Very cool! I really liked it.
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  • From Annie on March 14, 2007
    That was so unbeleivably adorable! I loved how they decided to start all over again.

    *glomps you madly*
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  • From ANON - Remetan on March 13, 2007
    Fantastic! Simply marvelous!

    I have one bit of advice, though I think it is a bit more about silly html format limitations on this site rather than your writing. It might be easier to differentiate the characters' narratives at first glance if you can find a way to write them in different fonts. It becomes clear a sentence or two into each change, so it's not that big of a deal. Just a thought.

    But other than that, wonderful tale!
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  • From Kireania on March 13, 2007
    I'm going to be mimicking thrnebrook(sp?) and ask for more maybe just one more chapter because its that good. lol i love this and can't wait to go read your other fics.

    well gotta go read now

    Ja ne
    Kireania
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  • From methoslover on March 13, 2007
    Any chance of writing a chapter two?
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  • From RDWind on March 13, 2007
    I very much enjoyed this story -- please know that you made someone smile very early in the morning!

    --RD

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  • From thrnbrooke on March 13, 2007
    I can't help it if I want more! There should be no such things as one shots or short stories! The good ones always make me want more. Sooo... to quote myself..."I've gotta have more!!!"
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  • From Star55 on March 13, 2007
    Aww, that was brilliant!! I would say "MORE" but you did point out that it was a one-shot. This was very well written though =)

    It kept me guessing and left me completely satisfied at the end. Well done =)

    ~*Star*~
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  • From ANON - Jien on March 13, 2007
    mmmmm, delightfully tempting to make you add a sequel but it's very wonderful to leave it as is =^.^=
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