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Reviews for The broken, The unwanted, and The Inhuman.

By : ProfessorSibly
  • From Selera on March 18, 2007
    I hope you get the next chapter up. I do like this alot.
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  • From dropedonmyhead on March 16, 2007
    I like the concept, but, I don't understand your writing style???????????? *will get over it* HAHA!

    Like how Draco just tells Harry he's going to get him. *laughs*
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  • From SnarkyB on March 16, 2007
    I beg you, PLEASE get a beta reader.
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 16, 2007
    Oh I need chapter 5! That was hilarious!
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  • From NightLo on March 15, 2007
    Wow...Harry's so smart, he figured out all by himself - without Hermione's help...things start to get interesting! What will Harry do next? And what will happen when whole school knows about THIS?
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  • From mnfmplom2 on March 15, 2007
    This is good, very good. I can't wait for more!
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  • From Snarrylover on March 15, 2007
    good story. i cant wait to read up on some more. but you really need a beta.

    cheers!

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  • From NightLo on March 15, 2007
    Hum...using Veela magic at the very beginning, really a bright move. However, you know, Hermione and Ron and Neville and Luna will find out soon - then after Harry's telling what happened, Draco's plan might not work. Even he has Snape helping him, but with Hermione's help and Harry's will (intention not revealed yet), there maybe interesting stuff to find out. What's more, with Seamus and Dean, interesting thing maybe heard also...BTW, does Dumbledore or Minevar know about this and has plan already?
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 15, 2007
    Holy have mercy I need chapter 4!
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  • From alma on March 14, 2007
    Yay! another veela story. I love them. The more possessive and jealous Draco the better.
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  • From NightLo on March 14, 2007
    Wow...this seems a grand story opening, would you soon reveal more?
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 14, 2007
    I soooo need chapter 3! Fantastic beginning!
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  • From myniephoenix on March 14, 2007
    i look forward to this very much. please update again soon.
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  • From acr1228 on March 13, 2007
    This seems like an interesting start. Though you might want to get a proofreader "there" refers to place "their" is a possessive. I'd like to see more cross house couples, though. I just can't imagine that everyone would pair up so tidily. I mean, I can get the Gryffindors and Slytherins not dating each other, but why wouldn't they date Hufflepuffs and ravenclaws?
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