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By : ProfessorSibly
  • From ANON - Jules on December 31, 2007
    Narcissa is a moron. Does she really think that denying Harry the right to be legally recognized as Remus's cub and costing him the family he's always wanted is going to make him MORE willing to mate with Draco? If anything she should be offering to push the cub thing through as a bribe. And why does Draco think Harry would view getting a few convicted killers and torturers out of Azkaban as a good thing? Harry knows first-hand what Lucius was as a Death Eater. And the other Death Eaters are just as bad and don't have the family connection to pull on Harry's heart-strings. So Draco's ego and selfishness aside, exactly what is it Harry's supposed to be gaining here aside from in-laws who will use him to the fullest extent and don't give a damn about his needs or wants in the process?
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  • From bananasforyou on December 31, 2007
    no flames just want of the next chap!
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  • From NightLo on December 04, 2007
    ..okay, you aroused our interest about the loop hole...would you tell us sooner?

    And how can Draco show what is Harry doing to himself?
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  • From ANON - wind on December 03, 2007
    update soon

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  • From bananasforyou on December 03, 2007
    wow hes angry but i need more!:)
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 03, 2007
    I don't know whether I should say poor Harry or poor Draco.
    Thanks for the great story.
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  • From thrnbrooke on December 03, 2007
    Sooo need chapter 23! Ron should send a letter to the Veela Council about the rape. What would they think knowing Draco had raped his mate to make him bond with him?
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  • From alleycat88 on December 03, 2007
    WOOHOO! Update! Did Harry even tell anybody that Draco forced him? Or is Draco allowed to do that? I don't know. Anyway thanks for updating!

    Anticipating another awesome chapter,

    *Lilith*
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  • From dracoharry4life on December 03, 2007
    Wow! I keep hoping they will get closer, so, we can get to the lovey dovey -happy part. But, they seem to get further apart and his friends are about to make it further.
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  • From hilfreak on November 28, 2007
    Hopefully we can expect an update soon? I know I'm anxious about what's going on.
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  • From ANON - JKG on November 24, 2007
    Hi!
    When will you be updating?
    It has been a very long time already!
    I can't wait for the next chapter...
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  • From hilfreak on November 15, 2007
    This is a wonderful story, but your spelling and grammar are throwing me off. If you need a beta I would love to help you out. I am anxious to see what happens between Harry and Draco.

    hilfreak17@hotmail.com

    Carrie
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  • From erospandora on November 08, 2007
    yes i'd like to see how they're getting together anyone ever raped me i'd try to kill not fall in love......................


    ~Ero
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  • From ANON - Kathleen on November 07, 2007
    You have a beta!!!
    He or she is not doing his or her work!!!
    Lots of wrong spelling, punctuation, sentence structures!!!
    Please do check everything if you are not in a hurry to post.
    You do take a very long time to update you know?

    If you do post everyday, it will then be understandable that you have lots of mistakes. But... it does not seem to be the case!!!
    Reading such English can put a reader off no matter how great the story line is!!! It gets on the nerves and it feels really uncomfortable.
    Is English your main language?

    Kathleen
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  • From ANON - Kathleen on November 07, 2007
    Hi!
    Finally! An Update!!! Can't wait for the next update.
    You should check the spelling. There are lots of spelling errors.

    Example: "Fallowing Draco's lead, he was lead out of the diner, and away from the two raging woman."
    It should be "Following" not "Fallowing"
    "he was lead out of the dinner" It should be "He was led out"
    "Led" is the past tense of "lead".
    "from the two raging woman". It should be "from the two raging women".
    Plural form of "woman" is "women". Just like "man" and "men".

    I noticed that all your "follow", whether it is in past tense or if it ends with "ing", are spelled as "fallow".
    The correct spelling is "follow" not "fallow".

    Other than that... Great story line and I can't wait to know the ending.

    Kathleen
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