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Reviews for The broken, The unwanted, and The Inhuman.

By : ProfessorSibly
  • From thrnbrooke on October 16, 2007
    Soooo need chapter 19! The only way out of this is for someone to mention the rape! Harry won't bond with Draco as things are right now. Here's Draco's chance to make things right. He needs to admit what he did and beg to be allowed to start over.
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  • From NightLo on October 16, 2007
    Sure Narcissa, being a half veela, understands clearly what does mean by rejectly by your mate? And as a motherly mother, she is going to protect and spoil her son...

    Shouldn't Draco do something?
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  • From alleycat88 on October 16, 2007
    Awesome cliffie!
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  • From fragonknight01 on October 12, 2007
    I have been trying to catch up on reviewing some of the wonderful people who have left me reviews and to say thank you. So on this story, I skipped straight to chapter 17 and skimmed it because I did read part of the story earlier and was trying to see where I left off. I noticed that several people keep saying that you need a beta and then you mentioned that you have a beta so my question is: Are you sure you posted the corrected chapter? There are a few words misspelled still and several words oddly capitalized where they shouldn't be.
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  • From sarah on October 08, 2007
    Umm, It's about time someone thought about protecting Harry like Remus is trying to. I don't care if Draco meant well or not Rape is what happens after the other person say's NO. NO still means NO even if the rapist makes it feel good even if you orgasm. NO means NO. I do think it's an interesting story but I have to admit I'm finding it disturbing and may not continue reading it. Best of luck with your story.
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  • From thrnbrooke on October 07, 2007
    Sooo need chapter 18! I'm guessing Draco conveniently forgot to tell his friends what he'd done to Harry!
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  • From ANON - Seraphine on October 07, 2007
    Hey, great plot! I do wish it had a little more lead up and suspense but it's very entertaining. Also, your beta has missed a type demon in chapter 4, 'excepting', should be 'expecting', I believe. Now, I'm onto the next chapter :D
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  • From dracoharry4life on October 06, 2007
    I know Harry doesn't want to get close to anyone, but maybe it's time to let him. He is way beyond depressed and sad. Time for that "silver lining", "things will get better" part.
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  • From ANON - Solomon on October 06, 2007
    Great story It gets good real good and it hangs in midair Please update Harry and Draco must be together Is the veela baby going to be a boy with blond hair and green eyes? please email Slm8364@aol.com
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  • From NightLo on October 06, 2007
    Hum...Has Remus asked Harry for his opinions? If not, in the end, he will suffer from his own actions!!
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  • From calmchick on October 06, 2007
    Great Story. I read it in one setting. Can't wait for an update!!!
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  • From alma on September 15, 2007
    good chapter.
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  • From SoriaUndead on September 15, 2007
    ... continue... soon... PLEASE!! ^_^
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  • From NightLo on September 15, 2007
    Just wondering will you...update soon? I am still waiting!!!
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  • From Drkluver on September 04, 2007
    Ooh do countinue
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