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Reviews for The broken, The unwanted, and The Inhuman.

By : ProfessorSibly
  • From tanyaflorio on April 02, 2010
    PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - pixie0714 on May 22, 2009
    I am loving your fic. When you get this, I hope that you contact me and is able to tell me that you are continuing on with the story. Stopping now will be a waste to a great plot.
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  • From ANON - B on January 21, 2009
    It's a good story. Please continue.
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  • From remembermeby on February 16, 2008
    I like your story. Please post more soon :)
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  • From remembermeby on February 16, 2008
    I really like your story, I just wanted to ask you if you could maybe add a few spaces here and there because it gets really hard to read if everything is just posted in one go without any paragraphs...thanks :)
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  • From ANON - SP777 on February 05, 2008
    con't...

    in other words there is only ONE 'u' in Ludacris, not two.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on February 05, 2008
    con't...

    in other words there is only ONE 'u' in Ludacris, not two.
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  • From ANON - SP777 [ain't logging in, will do it towards the end] on February 05, 2008
    I must say I AM enjoying this, MUCH anticipation and dark sense of humor. :-)

    Now about chpater 19, I'm not sure if this was mentioned, I loved the little sneaky words you threw in this chapter, but Ludacris is spelled wrong..there is no 'u'.
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  • From casia on February 04, 2008
    Your story is really great and I can't wait to read more of it. but I'm going to say something now i never said before (because I'm a sucker for happy endings): please, let this end bad! I don't care if Harry kills himself or just rejects Malfoy for the rest of his life, but I don't want a Happy End. Harry is to damaged and Draco, he doesn't love him. Everything he did so far was in his best interests, he never cared what Harry wanted. Harry is broken, yes, and may need help, but draco is just breaking him more and trying to fix Harry into something new, something Draco wants.
    That's all

    PS: I undertand completily if you write a happy end, because it's your story after all, but i thiought maybe there's till the chance ofr a bad end.

    PPS: Sry, if my english is bad, but it's not my mother tongue and i just really wanted to let you know what i thought
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 06, 2008
    Hi! my e-mail's lars.jiyae@gmail.com, can I please ask you to send me news of chapter updating as it bacomes available? I'm in love with your story - cheers! :)
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  • From ANON - A on January 02, 2008
    You keep using the wrong word-"witch"- for which...like, "which one?" Hope that is helpful.
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  • From DannyLove on January 02, 2008
    your story hasen't started yet and i'm hooked 0.0

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 02, 2008
    gotta say that was one big bomb shell but i don't really mind. i've read too many sotries where lucius was with voldy for one reason or another and was not over all good but good as a slytherin can get and i gotta say i kinda like him. he grew on my in fanfics and the books. i mean he obviously realized at the end of the books that joining voldy was not only bad for him but for his family. well hope you update soon. ja ne ^___^
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  • From ANON - Ang on January 01, 2008
    Hey Harry has strong reasons to hate Lucius and be cautious of his ideas and plots. Why would he like Lucius's freedom? It only explain Draco's reasons.
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  • From Natwestgirl on January 01, 2008
    If I am reading this story right. Harry is the strong one of the couple. So Harry is the top and Draco as usually is being lead by others not for himself. I personal think that Harry cannot give up to much control and Draco is not strong enough for it. He could be the Sub but not the top. I wanted harry the top but he does need help. Plus I don't think Harry will let DE out of jail just because/
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