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Reviews for The Inadequate Life

By : metafrantic
  • From kodiac on April 21, 2007
    that was such a great chapter i only have one question since u have all those ravenclaws working together do u think they could find a cure for hermione please
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  • From victoriana on April 21, 2007
    Oooh thanks for the smut :)
    Lots of good things happening now with the DA, I love Harry's leadership and Ginny's understanding of just what he needs to relax, such a good wifey!
    But I especially liked in this chap Ron's show of maturelism in face of the twins. Go Ron! Hermione really should reward him with a threesome ;p (hehe, don't mind me, I'm just a perv - but Draco does come to mind - on dear, I'll stop now. At this rate I'll have you writing part 14 *smiles dreamly*)
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  • From TifLaw on April 21, 2007
    Just started reading. Brilliant start, I really liked that first chapter. The rest of the story is quite excellent as well. Can't wait for the next part. Update soon.
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  • From aok1992 on April 21, 2007
    Cant wait to see the inventions
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  • From on April 18, 2007
    Can't wait for an update! Do you have an email list so you can email me when you update?
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  • From Wiz on April 16, 2007
    PLZ hurry up and update... i think that this is good enough to be a book...
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  • From WilliamSpike on April 16, 2007
    Are ya quittin? I know the book draws nigh, but I really like your perspective.
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  • From ecorate on April 07, 2007
    good work update soon
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  • From victoriana on April 05, 2007
    Humm, not yet huh? I'll check in again tomorrow, I'm patient but when a story is this good it's hard not to want quicker updates.

    They have a free evening, to me that means SMUT! Am I right? Come on man, I'm dying here!!

    Hehe(jk) I'll take whatever, smut or no, because I know it will be great. I just want it now!

    Oh, and please update soon!!!
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  • From Artfuldodger on April 05, 2007
    very well done, love the story so far....when will u have and update? can u email me when u post new chapters?
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  • From Farr2rich on March 28, 2007
    Hey, this is by far one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. This sounds like it could be written by JK Rowling. The plot is fantastic, and it provides many twists and turns. What I especially like about what you did was keeping track of everyone, but staying true to Harry most of all, instead of giving them all an equal amount. Snape was esquisite: I did not see that coming. Keep up the excellent work, but I have noticed one small plot hole: Voldemort has only six Horcruxes, not seven. The diray, the ring, the locket, the cup, something that was Ravenclaw's or Gryfindors (not one of each) and the snake. It says so clearly on page 503 of Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince. On the second paragraph, not counting the one that had already been begun, it reads,
    "I am glad to see you appreciate the magnitude of the problem," said Dumbledore calmly. "But firstly Harry, no, Harry, not seven Horcruxes,: six."
    Other than that minor plothole (which destroyed my suspicion that you are actually JK Rowling in disquise), this story is perfect. If you have an explanation for the seven Horcruxes that I missed, please email me back. Can't wait for an update.
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  • From JRok on March 27, 2007
    excellent story series, my favorite on the whole site
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  • From shawnsarver on March 26, 2007
    Well just finished what there is of Harry's seventh year and I just wanted to tell you I can't wait for more. I would normally say a story is one of the best I've ever read, but in this instance I have to say that your story was the best story that I have ever read. And thats saying something sence I starting reading Harry Potter fan-fics about a year ago when I started at Veritaserum.com, then to mugglenet.com, and finally to here. Over about a thousand stories your is what I truly believe the best. thank you for writing and I hope you continiue this story.

    Keeper of the Sword
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  • From WilliamSpike on March 22, 2007
    Great stuff. This is my favorite fic..been a while for Pansy and Neville.. (hint).
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  • From IanBorlace on March 22, 2007
    Last part in one of the best, if not the best fan fics ive ever written! Cant wait to see it updatd!! Maybe you could do an 8th year...
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