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Reviews for The Kitten and the Killer

By : crimsonphoenix13
  • From stasa on April 25, 2007
    Like this story very much, hope you update soon...:)
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  • From lothous on April 24, 2007
    i am not into the whole guy guy thing but i like the story
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  • From malinda on April 24, 2007
    love the way things are going can't wait tell the next chapter comes out
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  • From vampireotaku on April 07, 2007
    I like it...riddick/harry is so captivating. ::sigh:: Though you might put that its a crossover with Riddick on the summary. That might be why i somehow skipped over it before. Otherwise, I love it...update soon!
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  • From bubbysbub on April 07, 2007
    GAH!!! Update!!!!!!!!!!!! me love riddick/harry stories so much!!! i'm not that excited about adding draco into the pairing but i will be open minded. but harry/riddick is hot. love this so far, want more please. how are we gonna tie harry now to riddick? very intruiged.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 07, 2007
    I like your story so far, it's quite interesting and well-written.

    I agree that this should be Riddick/Harry pairing, either without or maybe better with Draco joining them.
    I can't wait to see how you'll get Riddick to Hogwarts, so many different ways to choose from (spell, potion, some kind of dimensional portal or a strange artifact or even Harry's wandless magic or even Voldemort uses a dark ritual to summon a creature that will be stronger than Harry).

    I guess that you'll go with Riddick being Harry's mate or something similar (otherwise there's not really too much point in that dream sequence). I only hope that it won't be one of those "soul-mate fics". When I think about Riddick, I always imagine a predator, so almost everything he does is based on instinct. The same goes to sex or to chosing his mate. I mean a more basic, feral need, animalistic attraction and not that sappy "two halves of one soul" or "there's only one that completes me" crap.

    I'd like to see a bit of a fight for dominance between Riddick, Harry and Draco. I like the concept of sub!Harry but I believe he won't submit without a good fight, so no feminine or helpless Harry.

    In your story Harry is a cat-like creature based on his eyes, ears, tail (I think it would be good to add at some point fangs or at least slightly longer incissors, lets say they show only at the sight of blood or as an emotional reaction to something (when he is angry or freightened)).

    I think that the changes in Harry's appearance should be accompanied by changes in his nature.
    For example:
    - likes soft materials,
    - likes different food,
    - has strange reactions to different smells,
    - likes physical contact a lot more than before (hugs, pats on arm or shoulder, even small pecks to someone's cheek or forehead - I got this stupid vision of Harry kissing Snape's cheek or even McGonnagal's),
    - start liking attention or hides from everyone, maybe even has a few emotional outbursts because someone looks at him in a strange way,
    - has an urge to mark his territory or thinks abut certain people as his.

    Hell, he can even start liking spending time with Mrs. Figg's cats or cats start to trail after him or listen to him or want to please him (he works in the garden, a cat walkes up to him, lays a dead mouse in front of him and waits for Harry's approval - happened to me when I was five).

    It would be fun if he did some of these things without even realising it. I've read too many fics where Harry suddenly sprouts a tail and/or wings, but he casts glamour and no one notices anything different about him, he founds his mate and everything is great and he is just a normal human being and they live happily ever after.

    Other thing is that cats live in prides, and a pride needs its alpha or its leader (of course Riddick sooner or later). So I would give Harry a need to live in something similar pride-structure, lets say that he sees Hermione or Ginny as a Huntress, Ron as a Guard or Protector, well you can base it on real cat prides or you can create it yourself.

    Sorry, I really got carried away this time, but too late now.

    So to sum it all up:
    - really like your fic, can't wait for the next part
    - hope you'll use some of my ideas
    - but: YOUR FIC ==> YOUR CHOICE
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  • From Droaerion on April 07, 2007
    XD Tooottaallly hate the pairing. Draco and Harry, in my mind, don't go together. Whether it's just because I find it annoying, or they're too similar, or the idea just makes me want to cringe I don't know. It's not as bad as the suggestion of Ron, but a pretty big no. Um, You could compromise... Itachi instead of Draco. You know you want to... can't you just see them fighting over Harry Rights and then ganging up on him? Not to mention, the overall yumminess.

    Granted, Riddick himself, alone with Harry, no other, is my main choice for the pairing. Um, if you really want to have Draco not be discarded, pair him with someone else that's so yummy that you can see him with another. Like, XDDDD Koga. Just went over last chapter's note for an example, and it stuck out. Koga could be all growly and stupid as well, and Draco would so be of the opinion that he needs to take a bath, so Koga takes a bath -with- Draco...
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  • From Pherazen on March 22, 2007
    Have you ever read any of Primal's challenges? This seems very familliar for some reason. ^^

    Riddick/Harry please. It's hott and not done enough.
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  • From kcgx23 on March 21, 2007
    Great story so far, please add more soon.
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  • From EscagirlUK on March 18, 2007
    Cool. I kinda like this so far.

    And, oooh, Itachi/Harry... Oh, I want to vote for that...

    But Riddick/Harry would be cooler! So I vote Riddick/Harry! Riddick will be all growl-flashy silver eyes-protective-snarl-why you always put youself in danger-here, this how you slit somebody's throat-my mate, mine-grrr. It'll be so cute!

    Oh, oh, when Riddick shows up, will he have the Crematoria hellhounds with him? They were so cute!

    Anyways, update soon, okay!
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  • From Starfall on March 18, 2007
    my my very interesting start would definitely love to read more
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  • From Droaerion on March 18, 2007
    Well, obviously, Harry needs to be with Riddick. Because, well, Riddick being forced to be heroic and Harry with a complex. Riddick would be in a state of 'why' for a long time. Of course, the fact that he totally would be the good grr to Harry is a help. Hm, Another thing would be is that they both make people look and be confused. So not only would it be a first for them about eachother, but the Weasley twins and Riddick are on opposite ends of the spectrum, no matter how much I love identical yummies. Riddick would make Harry's certain personality come out, and be very much high lust and flirting, only to be really unprepared for someone of Riddick's likes. ^_^
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  • From KatrinaCarter on March 18, 2007
    *pounce* Harry/Riddick!!! Please!!! I really like that pairing. Besides, I can see Harry just melting at the protection he'd get, and the full Alpha male thing is such a Riddick response.

    Also, for a dream sequence... well... if you give me a day i might be able to help you out. Send me a msg to melmel_bear@hotmail.com and I'll see what I can do.
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  • From on March 17, 2007
    Great new chappie! Pairing Harry with Inuyasha or Koga would be cute or even Sashomorou(sp?) I have never seen Chronicles of Riddick and am just getting into Naruto.

    I can't wait to read more of this fic.
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  • From speedie234 on March 17, 2007
    Love It! update soon
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