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By : graballz
  • From ANON - MoonTart on November 18, 2015
    Just re-read this. It is as good as I remember. I wish it was complete though. Would really love to find out what happens next.
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  • From MildlySadistic on June 07, 2008
    great story you have going on here
    on a side note, good idea to not use mr. Rogers seeing as how the guy had a pretty weird life.
    that and the reason he always wore sweaters was to hide his sleeve tattoos. HA!
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  • From MoonTart on February 25, 2008
    This is really good. I can actually "see" this playing out as an episode in my head. Can't wait for the next installment.
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  • From Jan on July 07, 2007
    I can't believe that I missed you previous updates. Thankfully I remember the title of this story and looked up. Poor Parker, to have such a crazy grandmother to do such a thing like that to him and to Draco as well, what a bitch. I was so happy to read when Harry slap Pansy. Can't wait to see what's going to happen next. I have a feeling that at the moment when it happen no one question Harry and Hermione about how they got in to the restroom in the first place seeing that there is no opening from the out side and they never saw them entering the room, do to the commotion but how will Harry or Hermione for that matter explain that little prob. Any ways Please update soon. I still love your story. ^_~
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 26, 2007
    OH MY GOD!
    Seriously freaking out here.
    I stumbled across your story
    via a fic rec by Weasley Wench.
    This is sooo good.
    WOaT happens to be one of my most
    favorite shows. I can see the story
    playing out and it's awesome.
    Thank you so much for writing this.
    I need to keep reading this!

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  • From sunset20 on May 09, 2007
    FINALLY I have some moments to spare so I can review your story! I really love it, it's so exciting even without knowing the original series. But I must tell you, my fav part was the end of the first (was it the first? never mind...) chapter, when Harry and Draco met. OH SHIT, indeed! :D Asleigh is fantastic, a real angel! Poor Parker!!!! Please help him to get over all this REALLY REALLY soon!!! And please torture Narcissa to death!!!!! BITCH!!!! And give Draco a big hug from me, okay? *winks*
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  • From chantalmalfoy on May 08, 2007
    OMG!!! Poor Parker!!! :( Poor Draco!!! :( *hugs both boys tightly*

    I hope that Pansy, Narcissa, Blaise, and Snape get what they deserve for being so horrible and cruel... And I hope that Harry moves back to a magical community and starts using magic again... He deserves to live as himself and not be hiding all of the time.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 08, 2007
    I think you worry too much sometimes...I love how this story is going...I loved the drama of Draco almost being shot...One thing that may need an explaination tho, Danny at the very least should be wondering how HJ and Hermione got into the bathroom...Martin would probly wonder too but he might not have enough information at this point to come to that point...But Danny and Ash knew Parker was alone in that bathroom and unless there is another door from the other side, I'd be suspious(i can't spell that word)...But then maybe you're leading up to HJ and Hermione and possibly Draco telling Jack and the crew about their magic!?!?! hint hint lol...Anyways, great chapter, the story is moving nicely, and we're getting lots of info which is making it so nice to read...Can't wait for the next chapter...

    SyXX
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  • From Danine on May 08, 2007
    haha, Harry called Pansy a Slytherin slut! Very good chapter, want to see another!
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  • From CrookShanks on May 08, 2007
    Hmmm, I see that you have been busy....so sorry I was out of town for a few days, just got home and am catching up on my reading. *snickers* Well done! Now that they have Narcissa & Pansy in custody again...won't the US Federal govt have something to say about them being extradited?? After all, they did kill a US Federal officer. Hermione will be a busy beaver trying to untangle this mess. Can't wait till they get their hands on Snape!
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 08, 2007
    I sooo need chapter 29! What happens next?
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  • From misslala on May 08, 2007
    Brilliant chapter!!!!! I am so looking forward to the next installment! I want to see lots of hot juicy Drac/Harry and them living/liking happily ever after!!!! hahaha
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  • From NightLo on May 07, 2007
    Sorry...I am out of town for 2 days (taking my students to a Geography fieldstudy camping)...luckily, the facility has internet connection and I have some free time as there are tutors helping around...but definitely will be back on Wed (at HK's time)

    It is good to find out that it is Blaise that held Draco's hostage, but not Narcissa or Pansy, as both are wandless and have too less magic around. So now we understood it is Blaise that stunned a nurse, stolen a nurse outfit, lured Draco and imperied him, and used Pansy as a sidetrack...this is a more logical way of going...But still British are British, Slytherins are Slytherins, they are too proud to be in control, as Narcissa just checked around Draco and ordered him to be quick...however, there is a catch - how can Narcissa asked for Parker, first using Mr. Malfoy, but later using Draco? If I were Ash/Danny, I would find that out, and immediate know something was wrong (how can a blond nurse call Draco instead of Mr. Malfoy)...luckily, Ash has already recognized Narcissa from earlier and told Harry...really good response!

    Now we had Pansy, Narcissa and Blaise on hands, with Hermione helping and Harry going...but it would really be much better if just Harry keeps and uses Blaise's wand, better to cast more harmful but useful hexes at the three...e.g. jelly-legs, something like bat-bogged eye or others...after they are all secured, informed Jack and held custody, Hermione can come in. Or...would Harry just go back and check Draco, give him Blaise's wand, ask him to set wards and others??? Still it is up-to-you to decide and change...

    Now the FBI and NYPD know that Draco and Parker are in danger, would the security level set higher? How would the hospital react with a misguided Narcissa running and threatening around? How would it react? Also with such a grand closed-down in hospital, sure the press will know, how would the agents handle that? Could they still cover the truth that Parker is found?

    And wouldn't Hermione need to report and ask for help (esp. with Aurors as Narcissa was escaped and suspected help from Blaise)? Would that be included? Would Ron come over? Would Snape find this all out and help?

    With all the above, sure the agents really understand the importance and stress of dangers that Harry stressed from earlier, how would they treat the three suspects (no longer the previous measures, would it? The highest standard of custody)? If ever Ash and Danny and Martin recover their senses, would they find out how can Harry come out of thin air? As Martin kindly pointed out that he saw no one coming into ICU before him, and Katie cleared all the people on the other end...

    So now...how will this keep on? Who is(are) the next suspect(s)? If Draco and Parker are safe, with Ash, Danny, others, docotrs and NYPD protection...perhaps with a wand...the next perfect item would only be the twins and Harry...and I am really looking forward to confronting Harry and Snape?

    Finally - when will Draco back to his former arrogant, cunning and revengful self? Though I know with only 24 hours...or a little bit more, he underwent hell, but Parker needs him...he must be strong and uphold! Draco - please come back SOON! I will also BRB very SOON!
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  • From Danine on May 07, 2007
    ooh! What a cliffie! Don't shoot Draco!
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  • From misslala on May 06, 2007
    waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!! OMG! That was a mean cliffy!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Ok ok, I will give you a break, you updated :P hahaha I can't wait to read more!!!!!!! Argh!
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