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From EmeraldGrey on March 28, 2007
I hate it when the damn thingy on here cuts me off* grr's*
anyhoo, I love it when you say such nice things about my reviews
in your replies. *blushes*
BUT YOU!? You are SUCH an awesome writer, and I mean it, seriously.
I read a lot of stories.
A friggin' lot, but only ONE writer has ever given me SUCH chills and thrills and more than
once, and that's my jameschick. :)
And now, YOU.
I also wanted to say that your imagination is not only awe inspiring, it's such a sight to behold.
The detail that you give to even the most tiniest of things, is mind blowing.
This Chapter like the last was actually 4-D for me.
I could smell the sea air, feel the building tensions, and the effects of the POV's
even Parkers on THIS chapter just blew me away!
In a few paragraphs you told us SO much! TY!
I
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From EmeraldGrey on March 27, 2007
"FREEZE Motherfucker!"
Helllll yeah!
*pumps fist in the air.*
I think THAT was my favorite line of this Chapter babe... ;)
Ohhh ya gave me chills and squick, and MORE chills and then major squickity squick...
That POOR baby Parker! *sobs*
Poor Draco too! :( Having to endure all of theat, I think I might of gone mental!

And, then? I LOVE you man!!!
YES! JUSTICE IS served!
Now, tell me why ALL creepy evil
no good child molesters can't be *served like this?*
Orange peels, it's raining orange peels!!!!
;)
As headstrong as Harry is, I just see him swan diving in right after Draco to help find that baby!
WOO HOO! The calvery arrives!!!
But, now I KNOW we're not out of the water yet...Erm badddd pun..*sheepishly walks off)
HOLY CRAP!
Yet ANOTHER KICK ARSE Chappie and YOU ROCK MY SOCKS!
AWESOME PLOT and WRITING Luv, and oh my GOD, STILL dangling ON THE edge of my seat.
I await the next part with baited breath, and a hopeful heart.
Speaking of heart, I
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From NightLo on March 27, 2007
5 mins before bell rings, so a quick review instead this time...well...I just wait whether my assumption of Parker knowing how to swim turn true...but with bonded arms and legs, the only way to swim...well that's quite impossible for young Parker...

I really love your idea of how Parker recognizing Harry - and this also pay the way to 'meeting' future Harry and the twins...oh~~~ I can forsee, really, how lovely the scene would be and how embarass Draco would turn...

Actually my second review last time is just for fun, you know, with pants down, many humurous accidents can happen...wouldn't that funny of how Graham being caught? Actually I have planned a way of killing him painfully...e.g. falling into the water and kill by the boat engine, 'stirring' him to death...hahaha....

Wait for further update, and if I have time later, I will give a more detail review!
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From Samaelthekind on March 27, 2007
Hmmm...Maybe make an Inferi out of Spaulding and keepit handy as a combination ashtray/punching bag? Eeven with the hole in the head! Still, a slug through the brain box is a satisfying ending for a perfectly repulsive villain. Now, to scrub my skull clean of fear and tension and horror, we'll be needing H/D lovins pronto! Thanks Love! Peace, Samayel
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From Samaelthekind on March 27, 2007
Holy Cats! Talk about raising the tension level! You're as fiendish in your way as I am! Spaulding has Draco's adorable little boy!!!! This is horrible! Make the bad man die painfully!!!! Please! (PS: Wonderfully flattered that you liked the Tracer Spell with the hair :-) Thanks for crediting me with that, but kudos for you finding latin to make a proper spell of it! Well Done!!)
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From CrookShanks on March 27, 2007
Totally sweet! that Parker sensed he could trust Harry. A definite "Awwww" moment.

I have no problemo with Jack putting a bullet in Spauldings head...he deserved it. In fact, a 33 cent bullet would be a great cure for eliminating pedophiles everywhere.

FYI: Babies have a tendency to float, due to a large percentage of body fat which doesn't start to decrease until said child hits puberty ( also the reason why women float better than men)- I taught swimming lessons for years. The problem here would be that the water would be extremely cold (hypothermia) and its dark out...so the surrounding authorities would need to watch their engine propellers.

Anyhoo, another great chapter...KUDOS! okay, okay...I guess I'll just have to wait for the hot man-sex, you've promised
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From xanth on March 27, 2007
mon fils, je souhaite pour vous aller
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From lissagal99 on March 27, 2007
STOP HURTING THAT CHILD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(and I believed you when you said nothing would happen to him that couldn't be handled... poor permanently damaged child...) *wails*
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From thrnbrooke on March 27, 2007
They're on a boat! Can't go too far! Need chapter 10!
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From DracaMalfoy on March 27, 2007
*SCREAMS!!!* WHY??? You're horrible! MORE?!!?!?!?!?! Yes, email me when you need more. Life does suck at taking over. SO many assignments due all at once. *growls at teachers* YAY! Harry and Draco kissed!!! *dances* Ow, I'm rather random today...I blame it on the unseasonally warm weather. Tank top and capris! w00T! *dances more* Okay, so update soon please??? Yeh, I like biology alot, it's kinda my kink...lol. Anyhow, yes, your reviews always make me laugh, even when they aren't for my story. YAY! Mext class time now, ttyl!

-Draca

*sends more cookies for good chapter*
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From xXBrokenDreamsXx on March 27, 2007
Damnit! Fucking hell Draco! You screwed everything up! Gah, if he wasn't so gorgeous I'd be utterly pissed off at him right now lol. But seriously, you can
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From Danine on March 27, 2007
ZOMG

That was probably the most amazing chapter I have read yet!!!! Harry is so goddamn fucking sexy here I'm about to go take a cold shower to cool off! So so so sexy!! The action was spectacular, I'm all tensed up and grinning from ear to ear. I can't gush over this enough, I have to know how this will end! That sonofabitch went through with mosesting that small baby. I soooo badly wanted Harry to put a bullet through his head. And narcissa too.

I just have to say that I love you so much for writing this. I haven't read anything remotely this exciting in... years? Yes, years! You are brilliant!
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From Star55 on March 27, 2007
YAY for the Kiss!!! Woot. ;-)

Whoa, what a cliffe!! Poor poor Parker, I feel soo terrible for him, poor baby. Cannot wait to find out that happens next!!

I was almost crying when Parker was hit and it was so sad for Draco as well.

Please update soon!!

~*Star*~
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From EmeraldGrey on March 27, 2007
HOLLLLLLLLLLLY FUCK!
I STILL HAVE CHILLS!
EEEEEEEK!
Tears and fuckin' chills, poor little Parker!
OMG!
I was happy to see Draco punch that bitch of a mother! Yea!
But, dammit!
That sick fuck Spaulding got away!! AGAIN!!!
OMG, poor Parker!POOR Draco! knowing he fucked up and royaly, but I have to ask?
IF Harry can do wandless magic, why in the FUCK didn't he just do
an Imperio or a stuptify or SOMETHING on that Fucking Spaulding!!!????
Why mess with a gun, when you have magic??!!
Little Parker sucking on his thumb...*WAHHHHHH* more sniffles...
Eww, gods! WHAT did that creep DO to that baby?!
PLEASE PLEASE tell me Draco get's the privilidge of cutting off the mans fingers one by one,
and then force feeding them to him, as he slices off his bollocks and stews them in a hot tea,
and makes him drink it, and finally, he cuts off his evil and damaging cock and shoves it so far up that monsters arse,
that he's crapping pieces of it in the afterlife, in hell!
Blaize,Narcissa and Snape hell even Pansy because she's an arse, should all die painful deaths!
Kill of that useless cunt Ginny too why you're at it,
and let Draco or Harry cleanse Parkers little body and mind with magic, like with a time turner?
Oh and let Harry and Draco get together and raise their kids!

AAAGHHHH I am in agony here!
You are evil Luv, positively eAHhg! E.V. I. L.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
How many more hours until tomorrow??!!!
*sniffles*
eg
ps, how's THAT for an orage peel? ;)
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From EmeraldGrey on March 27, 2007
;)
I feel like I'm *tick tick* ticking up the side of a very large roller-coaster ride.
I am holding my breath, as I am about to hit send on this and
then go and read the next chapter to keep *tick ticking* lol
and after that? I am SO ready for the plunge!
You are welcome, welcome welcome WELCOME!
lol
I am glad that you liked my *apple* *winks* Yeah, too kewl about your
*orange* Well, they say great minds think alike eh? lol
I am very excited to see where this is gonna go!
Congrats on all of the kick arsed reviews too!
Ya got a winner here yeah... ;)
EG

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