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From Samaelthekind on March 20, 2007
Oh dear! Draco and Harry's secrets are out in the open, Little Parker is with a complete sociopath, and now we're all waiting on pins and needles! I cannot wait to see how this pans out! Peaces, Samayel
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From Samaelthekind on March 20, 2007
Never seen WoaT before, but then I rarely watch TV anymore...just select movies and anime, and a lot of news via the computer. I have been catching as many episodes of 'Heroes' as I can tho. I have a great fondness for science fiction :-) I really like this quick paced fic, and thanks for the lovely rec in the A/notes :-) More power to you, and three cheers for Ireland! My family may be 150 years American, but we're from such a rural area in the North of Michigan that it doesn't count for much...still got a bit of brogue and lilt at family gatherings :-) Peace and Love, Samayel
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From NightLo on March 20, 2007
Finally find some time out of work to read...wow - now we know Snape is not a spy and he is intended on catching Harry for his 'work', and Blaise really did join in the kidnap (or how will Cissa know about it...though Pansy maybe too thoughtless to tell her also)...

Actually personally I hate the idea of molesting child with only 3 years old, so now may I ask you a favour - nothing permanent and taunting will happen to cute little Parker? Actually I believe Cissa can do anything to Parker, as she is a death eater and intend on revenging on Draco, but that would really be heart-breaking on knowing awful/horrible thing and death of the boy...would there be some conscience in Cissa's heart?

Okay, back to review, I would love to know whether Snape will appear sooner and later? Would there be revenge on Harry from Cissa and Snape? On him or the girls? As Ginny and the twins are getting to the headquarter, will they be safe? I would guess Draco will live in the headquarter/nearby with Harry (okay - also with Ginny and the girls), would Harry comfort Draco? And actually what has happened between them? Oh~~~~ would Ginny say something rude to Draco?

BTW, will Pansy repay Blaise on kidnapping her son (as I believe she is a mother and really love Parker)? And would the American and British wizarding world involve in it? And...the team - how would they 'manhandle' Harry? Would Harry be kicked off? OH~~~~ there are so many unanswered questions, so please review soon!!!
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From xXBrokenDreamsXx on March 20, 2007
Oh my goodness, I almost cried!

What Draco must being going through is just unimaginable.

Yeah, I know...I get way to in to stories lol. But child molestation really gets to me (well I assume it gets to most people).

But Parker is going to be okay, right??? Right??? ::sob::

When he said "Byebye Daddy, I love you" (or something like that, sorry if I quoted you wrong) I almost lost it, I could picture a cute little blonde three year old blowing a kiss in my head which just made it 948568948 times worse.

Gah! But I still adore this story! You
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From rafiq on March 20, 2007
I'm not familiar with the TV show, but I love this story. Do we find out how Narcissa escaped from Azkaban?
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From takahashi06 on March 20, 2007
OMG! I can't wait for the next chapter. I feel so bad for Draco and Harry, tears in my eyes and everything. Looking foward to the rest of the story.
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From Danine on March 20, 2007
Okay, that was very startling. I had to go and check on my son after reading this! I have the prettiest little blue-eyed toddler in the whole world (to me, anyways) and it freaked me out. Now, on to the review.

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wow. You really put some work into this, didn't you? My god. The fine detail you have mapped out takes me to this place, sitting behind everyone, watching this awful video. I could feel the reactions of Draco and Harry (I sort of missed out on Pansy's, she's a blur) but my heart sank when Narcissa so coldly denied her son and said she was ending the bloodline with Lucius. How could anyone be so heartless and cold? I hate her, I want her dead. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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From EmeraldGrey on March 20, 2007
Aww, don't even THINK it!
This is wow, what a mind blowing experience!
I am STILL on the edge of my seat!
You are a fantastic writer! Totally WICKED.
I bet you'd make a kick ass screen play.

I was so excited to see that you had posted
yet another chapter in this fast-paced story.

I am ashamed to say so, but this is the first
story of yours I have ever read.
I really enjoy your writing style.

I eagerly await the next installment, and I am wondering just
how you are going to slip in a d/h relationship.?
As well as what is going to happen next!
I got chills from this chapter, as everything you
showed us, could really happen as people like spaulding are
really real, and terribily frightening too.
The show's getting EVEN better! lol.
EG

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From EmeraldGrey on March 20, 2007
Wow!
I am now REALLY REALlllY on the edge of my frickin' seat!

Hmm, who could that text message and email be from?

This story just keeps getting better and better...
And, Ty for your reply to my review. :)
You have an interesting eye. *inner*
And the way you see things really is quite different.
Very refreshing to read I might add.
But, it still feels as if I'm watching it,
NOt merely reading it, and not too many writers can cause me to feel this way.
Btw? trust me, lol, IF you don't have patience,
it's very hard to become a good parent, because
patience is a BIG requirement, and one of those things you have to figure
out for yourself. lol. ;)
Eagerly looking forward to the next installment!

*drums fingers patiently against the keyboard... :)
EG
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From sneakypoo2 on March 19, 2007
I really like the pace and direction you're going in this story, and I must admit that this has been the very first fic I can remember that I've had dreams about!

I'm not too familiar with the characters and the style of the show you're basing this on, having only seen one episode. Despite that, you've given the characters a lot of depth and I'm really looking forward to reading more!
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From Faerie87 on March 19, 2007
I love this story. Please update more. I really want to read more.
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From CrookShanks on March 19, 2007
Okay, so the kidnappers know where Harry is too, hmmm...could Ginny be in cahoots with Zabini??? bears thinking about. I'd like to read the flashback of either Harry's or Draco's POV of their Lover days...at least one intense interlude, please? pretty please? with sugar on top? I know I'm a perv, so sue me.
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From EmeraldGrey on March 19, 2007
This story is just amazing!
And I am SO looking forward to more!
I really like how you wrote it, and I think
you've achieved your goal of making it appear as if
one were 'watching'it, not merely reading it.
When my twins were 3, I had been shopping in a large city
for clothing for them with a good
friend and her own older children.
Your story brought back some memories of that
day and my own two hour hell.
It can take only a moment for a child to simply vanish.
Lucky for me, my little girl was found playing hide and go seek by
a decent man and a good natured security guard.
Her big sister had put her up to it, sneaking away to play underneath
the clothing trees.
I was so happy to of found her, that I didn't punish them.
When they were 7, we went to NY NY.
I have been to the toy store in your story.
It is freakin' unbelievably HUGE!
I can only imagine my stark fear IF my daughter had disappeared from there instead.
I know you've written us fans a fictional story, but?
It has enough of a tinge or two of real life insistances to make it very
on- the- edge- of- your- seat and heart- in- your- throat believable.
You've captured my attention and I am eagerly awaiting more! :)
a new fan,
EG

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From DracaMalfoy on March 19, 2007
I read this, and even though I don't watch it regularly, it follows the plot uncannily. I'm impressed! In response to your question about Lush o'the Irish, I don't think I'm going to continue it, but yes, drunken sex was implied. Hang over sex, that might be ackward...but anyhow I love to read your reviews when I post mine, they make me laugh exetremly hard! YOU'VE SEEN EQUUS?! *jealous* I read that fic of yours too, made me giggle just a little bit. But if you're ever in need of a beta, let me know! Until next time, -Draca
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From Danine on March 19, 2007
This is absolutely magical! I really, really love this!!!!!!!!!!!! The mystery is so thick, I'm entranced. Please make it last, I want to read more and more. Holy shit, this is so good!! Draco is perfect, Harry is fantastic! Pansy is the psycho, over-reacting bitch I knew she'd be! I'm so in love with this and cannot wait for more!
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