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By : graballz
  • From NightLo on April 25, 2007
    Well...actually when mione first appeared - I was kind of suspicious, she just came out of nowhere, too well-informed and too political - so first of all I just wondered if that was polyjuiced Snape/Blaise...but luckily reaching the end, this is the real mione!

    With her around, something important must be happening! Maybe really concerning about escaped Narcissa + kidnapped Parker, that's why the Ministry worked so fast...for Harry, actually even is he is taken out of the case, he still will stay with Draco. But I do understand can he share his past with a muggle boss - better to use magic this time!

    For the lab result, do it only included something before the catch? As no report of rape kits analysis and others are given, that must be the report sent before 9 hours missing...if ever Vivian found out what actually has happened to little Parker, maybe she will try to revive Spaulding and killed him one/more more times!!!
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  • From Kalinx on April 25, 2007
    *flails* Merlin, why oh why do I have to be cursed to always read bloody awesome fics that are WIPs? Why?
    Onward, just dropping you a line to say, holy Salazar girl you've got me hooked on this! Yep, that's what I wanted to say! I'd say more, but I've been awake way too long - a phone call woke me before my normal hour, bloody loud cell - and my brain's doing the electric slide.

    ~Kali
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  • From misslala on April 24, 2007
    I am glad to see that some of the ideas on how to handle things are coming together. I think this was a well laid out logical path and I am also excited about the use of Scheherezade from Arabian Nights. :) That is one of my favorite classics!!! You are getting so creative with this and I love it!!!

    I am happy to see Hermione in the story to be honest. I was starting to worry that no one from the wizarding world would come to help him. He needs it...him and Draco...I can't wait to read the next chapter! :)
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  • From chantalmalfoy on April 24, 2007
    Please do email me about all of the wonderful SIMS patches and things! You should be able to get my email by clicking on my name... I think. Thanks for explaining the RAR file... once you said 'zip' I knew what you meant.

    Those 3 new chapters were great! You have stuck true to the WOaT theme and it is working wonderfully!!! And the plot is just continuing to thicken more and more, it's so awesome! You're a great writer, keep it up! :D
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  • From DracaMalfoy on April 24, 2007
    YAY! Today was alot better. Although the elementary kids (9-11 years old I'd say they were) actually got some of the humour. The only mistake that happened was that the girl that plays Titania fell off the stage onto the step below on her one exit. It's only about 6 inches so she was okay. *giggles* This was fantabulous. I want more damn it! Pwease? but yes, thoughly enjoyed this. I can't wait until the shit hits the fan (sorry, no better way to put it). *hugs and cookies* -Draca
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 24, 2007
    Sooo need chapter 24! Hermione is there? Oh my! This should be fun!
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  • From DracaMalfoy on April 23, 2007
    YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY! Harry and Draco smooched! lol. I'm running on low, I spent all day at play rehersal (Midsummer Nights Dream, our frist show is tomorrow for the school kids) and ppl still don't know their lines! I want to smack them! Anyhow, Loved it! MORE PLEASE! And yes, you're like the square of toliet paper taking away some of the shit of my day. That analogy is odd, but it works so well. Kudos on that one.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 22, 2007
    The chapter made sense to me...I thought it was a well played out discussion...Well done...LoL...When WoAT comes on now, I'm disappointed to not see HJ - love the nick by the way - in the credits...How sad is that?!?!?

    SyXX
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  • From irishdragondance on April 21, 2007
    You live in Ireland? that is awesome! I want to live there.
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  • From NightLo on April 21, 2007
    Well...first of all, thanks for the email, I really will make the best use of it, once I have loads of free time (esp. starting from June!)...

    I just forgot to ask - if Harry got so freak out of why Sam and Elena must not go to England, and being so opposed Jack's idea, being a trained FBI agent, logic and reasoning are the basics - how can Harry explain that to muggle? If Harry argued with armed/connections, actually agents are trained for that - but for magic and other stuff, esp. with Snape, who is so fluent with legilimen...that would really be dangerous - so when stopping their set actions, maybe really this time we need help from the ministry as well as England's connection, e.g. Ron and Hermione.

    BTW, would Ginny reappear in the coming episode?
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  • From NightLo on April 21, 2007
    Okay, Parker is suffered from great distress and serious damages, though I hate to know, but I MUST know what has happened to him so as to decide what kind of punishment should be assigned to Narcissa, Snape, Blaise as well as Pansy!! You know, better to make it enough announce - so a divorce can be made between Draco and Pansy!! BTW, please don't tell me that there are more bad guys assist in the act - you know Martin has practically left Draco and Parker alone...

    For poor Parker, would he be awoke soon? Just don't know why, it seems to me that he is being put into coma...just hope if he wakes up from his long sleep, he would practically forget everything. And Draco...better to obliviate him asap!!!

    Now Draco and Harry's relationship is out, and it seems getting well - as gay is more widely acceptable in US than Britain - just hope there is a bright future for them. For Sam and Elena - in order to stop them and calm Jack, Harry better to go grab his wand and apparate - as they know nothing about magic, again, would aurors be involved?

    Lastly, thanks for your email...I will keep it 'safe'....
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 21, 2007
    Sooo need chapter 23! Harry is in soooo much trouble! He's going to have to tell them about magic. It's the only way. Poor Parker. I kinda hope he doesn't remember. That poor baby! Who's waiting for Harry?
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  • From misslala on April 20, 2007
    Poor Parker! *cries* That is so not right. :( *sniffles* I can't wait to read more...and for the Sims 2, I am hopelessly addicted to that game, LOL I like to get the crazy flesh skins that make them look like fairy's and stuff. I need to get the game going again and start myself a Draco/Harry relationship that would be lots of fun :P
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  • From EmeraldGrey on April 20, 2007
    haha, you're begining to worry me with your sims addiction
    lol
    Great Chapter as usual, brought tears to my eyes, poor Parker.
    I hope he doesn't remember, and oh my GOD! Who is the *person asking for HP?
    Hmm, ya got my poor little brain a frying, lol
    Oh well, it keeps my mind off of my own stupid problems.
    You know the ones. :(
    I am happy that you've updated and so quickly too.
    And this was such an excelent Chapter, filled with angsty-goodness.
    Ty,
    EG

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  • From tiapotter18 on April 20, 2007
    thanx for the blow-by-blow, i was so happy for it! i think im midly obsessive since im not as obsessive as u (i think) but im still obsessive cuz i wanna get a tattoo on my lower back of the way they write harry potter on the book covers, ya know, that special calligraphy, plus it'll be as red as the way they did it for book 7. its like they read my mind, cuz ive wantd to do it in scarlet for ages! plus id get harrys initials (n maybe draco's) on one of my wrists, and it'll look like how i draw it, cuz i can do calligraphy as well :D and i agree about there being hp fans who are worse than me, although my status has changed bcuz i recently wrote a thesis paper on the relationships in hp ootp lmao. thanx for lettin me ramble, btw loved the chapter, cant wait til snape n zabini r caught!
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