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By : graballz
  • From EmeraldGrey on April 20, 2007
    BALLZ!!! HI!
    Well, now this is getting interesting, and I loved the intro of the last chapter,
    lol wanted to turn up the tele!
    I also loved how in this Chapter you're rounding up the suspects and getting
    people in place and things in motion.
    Oh just LET that arsehole Snape make a move...I just dare him to!

    The sims thingy was a hoot, as you know, I truly have no clue, but, if you like it,
    more power to you although, the sex thingy with the toys and all sounds delightfully evil.
    Love and eagerly awaiting more sla, er angst, lol
    EG
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  • From NightLo on April 20, 2007
    Well...the team finally made out about everything, and it is okay for Jack doing all the stuff - as he is a senior and the leader, usually his training and experiences are the best, it is logical for him to put all hints in one line. But I do agree to the idea of luring Snape and Blaise over - to get proper 'treatment'...

    Blaise should be quite easy - just ask Pansy phoned her on something about being questioned, held and threatened, then Blaise would come over directly...but for Snape, he is experienced (as being a spy) and evil...in order to trick him, better to give him an impression that there is still a chance to get revenge on Draco & Harry. E.g. Parker is still on the lose end...

    For Sims 2, even I would like to play, however, this must postpone until all the markings are done! But I would love to have that specific website for future reference! Wow...I can have Harry for my own, and I can realize my fantasy!!!
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  • From rafiq on April 19, 2007
    Did I miss something? or why is no one on the team concerned that Harry and Draco entered an elevator together, did not appear to get off yet showed up near the Coast Guard boat almost instantly with no apparent means of transportation?
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 19, 2007
    *smile* Sooo need chapter 22! Must have more! How is Parker and Draco? Has Harry checked up on the twins?
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  • From CrookShanks on April 19, 2007
    Don't you think that at some point Jack is gonna have to be clued in to the fact that there is a whole other world containing magic? And that includes all of his suspects and perpetrators???
    Still, a very good update...I'm interested to see how the team manages to "lure" Snape & Zabini to the US. And I know in my gut, Pansy is in this up to her neck. I think she figured that Draco would get killed in the process of locating & rescuing Parker, that way she would be free & clear with the Malfoy fortune intact. Nothing beats a conniving woman...men just don't hold a candle when it comes to revenge plots. *snickers*
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  • From misslala on April 19, 2007
    I am excited about this chapter! Wow, I am so glad someone else knows about England and tehir extradition laws, I started to think I was the only one at times :P It's so cool when you see someone use their knowledge!!! I know that sounds dorky but I am surrounded by stupid most of the time so I enjoy it so much more when I see someone with a bit of intellect! Sans my husband I would a lonely bird...the people in Salisbury are ridiculously dull and dimwitted. :/ I have a few friends that I muse with but damn most of them are thicker than day old gravy.
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  • From DracaMalfoy on April 18, 2007
    erm, thanks! lol. MORE!!!
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  • From chantalmalfoy on April 18, 2007
    Oh no! Please tell me what nude patches are and how to add kinky stuff to my Sims! And what is a RAR file and how does one unlock it?!? Oh, I am so left out! I should have never stopped playing Sims... Please enlighten me. *Begs on hands and knees*

    Oh, I liked the "In case you missed the first episode" chapter. Very creative. I would have forgot about that part of the show entirely.
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  • From NightLo on April 18, 2007
    Oh my god, your play of Sims 2 just make me crazy...if all that you have described to other reviewers are true, how can I deny of such 'luxury'? Even I am busy, I would definitely like to peek in that!!! And in that, I can make my wish come true - Harry is made for slash!

    Do you know about the Japanese game of 'Gakuen Heaven'? Basically it is a boy's love scramble story, sited on a boy's school practically without any female species! And the story centered on a cute boy and 10 other amazing different 'princes'...usually I will finish that game with my favourite character first, then with other attractive, amazing and handsome guys of my second/third pairing...

    But now I would love to find out more about Sims 2 first!
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  • From tiapotter18 on April 18, 2007
    omg if i had the patience to play sims 2 id be one happy woman. HP additions?!? yur yanking my chain (btw i almst typed wanking, rofl!) thats so cute that u made harry a daddy, n the kinky stuf u can add to sims 2...oh my...i liked the chapter, u definitely took the best scenes for that lil montage. update soon, n tell me more abt yur sims 2. im desperate for sum harry potter simulation (almost said stimulation, ya know the stimulation im talking abt ;) )
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 18, 2007
    *claps happily* Episode 2 is beginning! I sooo need chapter 21!
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  • From misslala on April 18, 2007
    Heyla! Glad to see the next part is coming up soon. You are doing this too well just so you know! I love it! I kinda wished it was a little longer but your fervor for this hasn't ended and its wonderful. :) I am getting on the bus...I am adding more to "For the Best" I will let you know when I update. I plan at least two additional chapters of backstory and details for little things. I got side tracked beta'ing for a friend of mine. Hopefully she doesn't shoot me when she sees the changes. Oh well...hope your weekend was well enough and I look forward to more soon :)
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  • From Shananigans on April 17, 2007
    Wow, its been a while since i've read this story. I kind of forgot about it, and then i was watching tv last night and without a trace came on and i was like..HEY! so i had to come and read all those chapters i missed. Sorry about that. I'm curious soooo curious about what is going to happen. So keep it up. Oh, and why would there be a rule against answering reveiws?
    Shannon
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  • From Jan on April 17, 2007
    Oh Gods! You were right. After that hot steamy sex scene,(By the way it was a real turn on, almost stop reading and jumped my husband) I keep telling Har... well the screen, no one else to tell really, right? Well I kept saying Harry take him with you to the Weasley's and never let him go; even though I already knew what was going to happen. And when you wrote that Draco was going back to Slytherin, I was just like you said NO NO NO NNNNNNOOOOOOOOO GO BACK TO HARRY, CALL HIM BACK TO YOU AND DON'T LET HIM GO PLEASE. But That's not what happen's is it. Gods I can't wait for an update. Please take your time but not to long ^_~.
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  • From NightLo on April 17, 2007
    Wow...still I am impressed with your sims 2 skills...hum...I will reconsider this again.

    But now you have made a promise, as Harry is made for slash, if Draco goes straight for Pansy/OC, I cannot think of a better match for him. Lucius? Too old. Snape? Possible. Ron? No, Ron is made for Hermione. Weasley twins? My secret lovely match (hohoho...O - v - O). Seamus/Blaise? But they seem perfect for each other! Charlie? ...okay, I settle for this, ONLY if the twins are not available.

    See - you must update soon, or Harry will be made for other pairing slash!
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