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From thrnbrooke on April 17, 2007
Soooo need episode 2!!!
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From DracaMalfoy on April 16, 2007
Oh my...you're rather ADDish today. LOL. I had a craptastic day and this made it just a little bit brighter. thanks! I enjoy reading your review responses, they're so random. Until next update, Draca
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From Danine on April 16, 2007
I've got three different versions of Harry/Draco Sims2, plus Harry and Tom Riddle (god they are so hot, and Draco can't live with them because he always beats up Tom) and Ron/Hermione, Lucius/Snape, Sirius/Remus, Luna/Neville, Albus/Minerva (I could go on forever)... I basically made a whole new world, there's loads of HP addons for the sims 2 to play with. I made castles with ghosts floating all over the place, there's Hogwarts (the university), and Hogsmeade is the shopping town. Yes, shoot me! I did all this when I was very pregnant though, so technically I was insane. Makes me want to fire it back up and get some HP/DM shagging going, but my husband's computer is next to mine now, so he'd see it... and that would take all the fun out. haha oh god, I'm sick.
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From Samaelthekind on April 16, 2007
Ahhh...finally back to having time tio read and rev...I love Climax 3....most awesome. Nothing like hypothermia to peel our heroes naked in minutes :-) Still, can't wait to see the ending :-) Peaces, Samayel
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From chantalmalfoy on April 16, 2007
OMG!!! lol... I made my husband buy me a new computer when Sims 2 came out because my old one didn't have a big enough Vid card. Just so I could make Harry and Draco because I heard that you could make men preggers in Sims 2. But I haven't found out how yet... And I haven't played Sims 2 in a LONG time now. But after reading your comments I want to play it again. lol.

Your sex scenes were great! I loved them!!! :D
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From Suse1980 on April 10, 2007
Gah! Ajrnjvnfhgnvncsdjhfsdnv feck I'm lost for words. My jaw is currently stuck to my laminate floor and I'm drooling far too much to be classed as lady like. Fuck me that was bloody hot. Okay deep breaths Suse ...IN...OUT...IN...OUT. Better,now where was I? Oh yeah, trying to review a great filthy hot chapter but I can't seem to get my brain to co-operate at the moment. I've hit meltdown. Heh I loved your Sims thing. I didn't know that game could be so exciting, I may have to buy it. Can you actually make them have sex? If so, then I may have to get the bloody game and I could put myself in it as the filling in a Harry/Draco sandwich. Oooh there goes the drooling again. The thoughts I'm having right now, Draco underneath me, Harry on top............ THUD! >>>>>>>>Runs off to have a cold shower>>>>>>>>>>
PS EMAILED YOU BACK. BYEEEEEEE! NEED TO COOL OFF!
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From ANON - Anon on April 10, 2007
See? Once I start reviewing, I can't stop...LoL and I was still logged in...I think it worked out perfectly that we got to find out what happens after they part, before reading about their night together...It made it really hard for me to get to the ending...Where you just wanted to keep adding things, I wanted to stop reading altogether - irrationally thinking that if I didn't finish the chapter, Draco would never make it to Snape...The sex was amazing and only a truely gifted writer could have come up with all of that...And the romantic parts made the chapter! And the Sims2 bit...lol I'd like to think that you're pathetic or crazy but the truth is, I've made them before...not on the Sims2 but on a dif Sims game...lolol...Bye for now...

SyXX
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From ANON - Anon on April 10, 2007
OMGOMG!!! There have been many times throughout this story that I've wanted to review but because of the logging on issue I decided to wait until the end of the story...But then I started reading this chapter - which I've been rather impatient for - and I got to the song, Learn To Be Lonely and I almost died...The song came on my winamp just seconds before I started reading the lyrics...It's a beautiful song - one of my favorites from PotO - and I think it was perfect for Draco and this story...I will post a final review of this story at its conclusion but just so you know, it's been one of the greatest stories I've ever read...

SyXX
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From NightLo on April 10, 2007
Wow...you have put up a long scene!!! Thanks, I enjoy reading very much this time! And it is really funny, I haven't played Sims2 before (as I play more with Wii/PS2/Xbox360 for japanese games like Sonic/silent hill), so...that would be just GREAT! Now I kinda want to buy and play THAT for my own fun...but I must wait, as I will be very busy in coming MAY (for a whole month - my sister is getting married and being an exam marker)...so I must warn, I may not be able to reply asap. But definitely I will go back once a day for stress relief. But your experience is giving me itching sensation to TRY now...

Back to the scene, I can accept this - as they share the equal role. I am kinda of detest purely submissive Draco/Harry, though that would be interesting to read...but I am always being reminded that...that is OOC...this is not that evil cunning Draco and CUTE adorable brave loving Harry (as I like Harry more)...So I have no problem with yours, and I like the description between the sharing of feelings/ideas between the 2. One has not taught to love, while the other is always taken away from love, so that kind of meaning would just be great and important for them, and it gave me a warming feeling (sorry - not hot...XD) in HEART! Yeah....please put more in coming bonus scene in the second episode!

Well, if forgive is not a possible answer, still I would love to read confrontation between their feelings and ideas, e.g. during the interrogation after the Snape's downfall / found of Snape's diary/plans/xanga (if..he keeps one)...that would be another high scene to expect of!

Magic...that would really be difficult. But with two greatest wizards of the century, that would not be a problem. What's more, when Hermione, Ron, Remus and Minerva are added to the picture - that would just be a great help! And...if ever....the twins and Parker can give signs of magical abilities, would not that be more lovely?

So...what's next? Another bonus scene or the start of new episode?
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From EmeraldGrey on April 10, 2007
Hmm, sims? wtf is sims? I don't understand, but, it sounds like fun!
Okay, so, I've just finished the WHOLE chapter, and ty for your emails btw, and ty for this Chapter,
it makes SO much more sense now.
The hidden feelings BOTH now time Harry & Draco feel for each other. *awww sob*
You are an amazing writer Luv, you have the gift of making a reader do the *senses* dance
right along with you! Like watching a movie show.
Okay, *big yawn and shake and stretch,* I am Soooooo beat! lol Emotionally drained...But I feel
happily saited. Mmm.
This was, mmm, mmm good! ;)
The entire Chapter was just...yummy. Ty Ty Ty!
Ya done good kid.
EG

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From tiapotter18 on April 10, 2007
WARNING!intennse rambling in about...NOW! omg i loved that chapter, i understand why u wantd to drag out the ending, i was gettin sad too at the imminent danger (damn u snape). its nice to see another hp nutter. Sims2?!? thats so clever. i cant wait to buy ootp the game so i cud be my fave character Harry again. whats the next chapter goin to be about? :D
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From devilfancy on April 10, 2007
It was filthy.
It was lovely.
Im so proud of you. *wibbles*
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From thrnbrooke on April 10, 2007
Thanks for the explanation! Makes more sense that way! Soooo need chapter 19!
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From EmeraldGrey on April 09, 2007
Okay, because I love YOU SO much, I am going to say this: WOAH, major sexage coverage
in the Harry does Draco department, and? I likey!!! ;) I am hot and sweaty and need a long shower...
That was...Hott. In fact? I honestly cannot say which scene was hotter! lol
You go on wit yer bad writer self... word.
So, um, now to the part that is hard for me to write...
I um chickened out in reading the what happened to Draco part, AFTER the hott hottt male/male lurvin' because, well, you have already described it to the point it seemed very real already in the Snape Chapter, and um, while I will read it, just can't, not right now.
Still love ya baby, okay!?
Please, don't be mad because I am too scared to read it just yet. I will hold my breath to some now time d/h h/d lovin' complete with a tidy divorces from Pans and Ginny, marriage and a new family for our guys and their kids, oh and a public execution magical style for Blaise, Snape and Narcissa!
WOOT!
Rock on, Rock on!
Ya done good kid.
EG

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From CrookShanks on April 09, 2007
Yep, just as I thought...the second part was as HOT as the first part. YUM!

I'm going to borrow a term from one of my favorite stories here;

Zaebis! (holy phuck in russian) from Double-edged Sword by Romaine....I think that says it all! KUDOS to a well written chapter...I'm not even ashamed to say that ...yeah...you did a great job of soaking some knickers out here in fandom readery tonight!
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