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By : graballz
  • From thrnbrooke on March 31, 2007
    I've sooo gotta have chapter 15!
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  • From NightLo on March 31, 2007
    Wow...get some time now to review at last.

    Actually these deleted scenes help us to understand the characters more, especially Jack - I understood the feeling of unfinished business and constant pain in ass, and I love that pain is finally gone! It is more interesting to read when we can finally link the characters' lives with us - how do they feel and what do they think...somethings like that. Really hope to read more about Jack and Vivian as team leaders...

    For Draco and Blaise - how can a secret lover being so un-secret? Actually I just wonder under that situation why did Draco not get a divorce with Pansy? Malfoy/pureblood pride? With no mom and dad around, he is Lord Malfoy, cheating will be the ENOUGH reason to have a better and happy life...okay, maybe he is afraid of fighting the custody for Parker...but no one can interfere with a Malfoy's possession and heir, right? Also, if Blaise is 'really' in love with Pansy, not just fancying some married woman who is hot in bed...he should fight...maybe this is the reason why Blaise has participated in the planning....

    Wait to read about Harry, DRaco, Molly and Lily as well as Parker, for Snape, well it is really up to you to decide, both bonus scene and new episode sound great to me!
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  • From Jan on March 31, 2007
    Another great update as always. Please update soon.
    Hmm...I wonder are there going to be any Harry and Draco flashbacks too?
    Well can't wait to find out. ^_~
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  • From EmeraldGrey on March 31, 2007
    delish as ever, bring on the hot man lurve
    AND the next eppisode!!
    wink wink* OH! You SO slay meee!
    EG
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  • From Shananigans on March 31, 2007
    Hmm that was interesting!!!!!!!! Can't wait for the Draco/Harry deleted scene.
    You are amazing!!
    Shannon
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  • From misslala on March 30, 2007
    *Busts out laughing* Pardon me, I have partaken of a spirit or two this evening and my usual pateint self is suffering from what I would like to term "Drunkards impatience" hahaha So yeah, I get the email and jump up and down and my husband looks at me like I have lost my mind. I return to the kitchen and get more ice to add to my crown royal/coke mixture and settle in to enjoy the deleted scenes. :P RAWR! Draco can be a bastard, hehehe. ROCK ON! GO FUCK YOURSELF ZABINI! I always hated him as a character, don't ask me why, LOL. WHen I thought of him it made me want to retch up my wonderful drink mix, BUT I did keep it down and that is due to your wonderful writing! I hope Harry and Draco curse him to hell and back, LOL They deserve to take care of him snape and Pansy, LOL

    I am in rare form, so don't mind me, LOL I am here trying to write on one of my other stories and I am so buzzed the music keeps distracting me, LOL Anyway I will stop my drunken rambling and give you five thumbs that I don't have up!
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  • From misslala on March 30, 2007
    You tease! I thought another chappy was up!
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  • From DracaMalfoy on March 30, 2007
    I thought that you had posted another chapter. *humph*
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  • From CinCity69 on March 30, 2007
    I love your writing!
    I like Ginny's story, you make it seem like it could actually happen!
    The ending was... meh. Not what I was expecting but it got the point across.
    Oh! And I do think that you should do a second part where they go after Snape and Blaise!!
    ^^
    It'd be kick ass! Esp. with your writing!!
    Quick question (has nothing do do with your fic)
    Where are you at, at the moment????
    (back to fic questions)
    Got a rough idea on how many "bonus features" you're going to make???
    I'm glad that my review made you laugh! =D
    Why couldn't you just kill Narcissa???? I mean come on!
    She's such a bitch! Who would do that to their grandkid??
    Wait.. SHE would!! >_
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  • From DracaMalfoy on March 30, 2007
    w00t! 2 chapters! YAY! *sends double batch of cookies* I loved the end how it's pretty well all wrapped up. I want more Harry/Draco goodness. Make him all dopey and cute. That would make me far too happy. But yes, nearly had a heart attack when I came on here to read WoAT and 2 CHAPTERS! *dances*. Update again soon so I can leave more crazy reviews. I sent your email back, I hope you got it. So tell me!

    -Draca
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  • From Snarrylover on March 30, 2007
    thank god ginny's gone, although im sure she'll be back. as long as she doesnt get custody of the girls, its all good. these last two chapters were excellent, especially when harry decided to stay in draco's room *awwwwwwwwwww*. and poor baby parker *huggles*.

    i cant wait for more, cheers!
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  • From devilfancy on March 30, 2007
    You did such a wonderful job on this story.
    I know how hard it can be to write a truly disturbing scene like
    the one you had with Parker, but you pulled it off beautifully.
    Bravo!
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  • From chantalmalfoy on March 30, 2007
    Harry staying in the hospital room is so sweet. And the Ginny chapter kind of made me feel bad for her, but not enough to want Harry to stay with her... ;P

    It's too bad you don't know Law and Order as well as you know WOaT. Because a 'british version' of L&O (probably SVU... ummm... Special Victims Unit) would be a better fit for your 'second episode'. Either way I'm sure it will be wonderful. You have a gift for writing. I've enjoyed this fic emmensely.
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  • From NightLo on March 30, 2007
    Finally have time to read Ginny's extra...really tiring of today work.

    Well, I must admit that it took a long time to break someone heart and belief. Being fascinated and infatualated with Harry for MORE than 5 years (as in book one, Ginny squealed when she first saw Harry), especially after the first year incidence (as Ron might tell her) and second year disaster (as she personally involved), Harry's knight image was just too big to be probably disposed of...no wonder Ginny would thrill and only be happy with Harry's attention.

    But now we knew it was Harry that avoided, ran and hided...he must be in denial to be in love with Malfoy, or, knowing that Draco was going to engaged and married Pansy, still Draco had the nerve to ask Harry stayed with him, would Harry be so broken and started with Ginny, after finding out the newly formed couple. Though he never expected the pregancy, this just gave Harry a chance to start anew.

    Still, some faults were brought by Ginny, had she not invited the Slytherins, of all Draco Malfoy, would their marriage be destroyed so soon...Draco must be very enraged to obtain an invitation, raging that Harry got a nerve to send (or in Draco's POV - order/challenge) one - so this just started another chain reaction...brought Pansy, gave present, wished well and showing off...so in the end, Harry could not bear the news of Draco's wedding, and typically flied all the way high to USA - avoiding possible another Draco's confrontation + wedding challenge...

    So now I understood why Draco was so peppered up and taunted in challenging Harry even though in such despair situation...and he must be very very happy to hear Harry's confession...
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  • From Shananigans on March 30, 2007
    Alright, 'Cold Case' is definately what i was thinking of!! thank you for clearing that up:P. Great Job. I tottaly know that Pansy (being the bitch she is) knows something!!! even if it is her own son, maybe she really did want to just get rid of him so she would feel no ties to Draco whatsoever. I mean that would be easier (in some sense, the crrrrraaaazzzy one) then just up and leaving your child, getting rid of him so he wasnt a burden on your mind. Keep it up, I love it, part two should be spectacular!

    Shannon
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