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  • From thrnbrooke on April 03, 2007
    They're back together! I sooo need chapter 16! Can we kill Severus now?
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  • From misslala on April 03, 2007
    ME-FUCKING-OW!!!!! Alright Harry and Draco in the hospital bathroom!!!! HAHAHA That's is so funny. But I must say what a fitting reunion of their souls as it were. MY GOD! Poor Draco - DAMN SNAPE AND LUCIUS! *kills them both many times...or kills them until they are dead* That was a joke from a movie, but I can't remember what movie at the moment. hahaha.

    I hope Draco and Harry get to fuck SNAPE UP! Pardon my ghetto terminology there, but damn! What sicks fucks...and the sad part is, that shit happens in real life even if not to that degree, obviously magic out, but you know sick eil fathers try to make their sons "straight" again by teaching them lessons. I dispise hate...bleh.

    So I can't wait for more as usual. Mmmm...Hot Harry Draco sex...RAWR!
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  • From DracaMalfoy on March 31, 2007
    YAY!!! I was up late enough to see this last night, but needed to sleep since my eyes were closing themselves and not opening again. (AKA falling asleep at my computer). HOORAH! More Harry/Draco pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeasssssseee!!!!! *jumps up and down with a plate of cookies as bribery*. But yes, feeling slightly ADDish again...WWWWWWWHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! I bought 'Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them' and 'Quidditch Throught The Ages' today. I'm thoroughly enjoying them. Especially 'beasts' because it has Harry and Ron's thoughts throughout it. It makes me laugh. Anyhow, yes, that was long and pointless...but yes, MORE PLEASE!!!

    *loves* Draca
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 31, 2007
    I've sooo gotta have chapter 15!
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  • From NightLo on March 31, 2007
    Wow...get some time now to review at last.

    Actually these deleted scenes help us to understand the characters more, especially Jack - I understood the feeling of unfinished business and constant pain in ass, and I love that pain is finally gone! It is more interesting to read when we can finally link the characters' lives with us - how do they feel and what do they think...somethings like that. Really hope to read more about Jack and Vivian as team leaders...

    For Draco and Blaise - how can a secret lover being so un-secret? Actually I just wonder under that situation why did Draco not get a divorce with Pansy? Malfoy/pureblood pride? With no mom and dad around, he is Lord Malfoy, cheating will be the ENOUGH reason to have a better and happy life...okay, maybe he is afraid of fighting the custody for Parker...but no one can interfere with a Malfoy's possession and heir, right? Also, if Blaise is 'really' in love with Pansy, not just fancying some married woman who is hot in bed...he should fight...maybe this is the reason why Blaise has participated in the planning....

    Wait to read about Harry, DRaco, Molly and Lily as well as Parker, for Snape, well it is really up to you to decide, both bonus scene and new episode sound great to me!
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  • From Jan on March 31, 2007
    Another great update as always. Please update soon.
    Hmm...I wonder are there going to be any Harry and Draco flashbacks too?
    Well can't wait to find out. ^_~
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  • From EmeraldGrey on March 31, 2007
    delish as ever, bring on the hot man lurve
    AND the next eppisode!!
    wink wink* OH! You SO slay meee!
    EG
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  • From Shananigans on March 31, 2007
    Hmm that was interesting!!!!!!!! Can't wait for the Draco/Harry deleted scene.
    You are amazing!!
    Shannon
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  • From misslala on March 30, 2007
    *Busts out laughing* Pardon me, I have partaken of a spirit or two this evening and my usual pateint self is suffering from what I would like to term "Drunkards impatience" hahaha So yeah, I get the email and jump up and down and my husband looks at me like I have lost my mind. I return to the kitchen and get more ice to add to my crown royal/coke mixture and settle in to enjoy the deleted scenes. :P RAWR! Draco can be a bastard, hehehe. ROCK ON! GO FUCK YOURSELF ZABINI! I always hated him as a character, don't ask me why, LOL. WHen I thought of him it made me want to retch up my wonderful drink mix, BUT I did keep it down and that is due to your wonderful writing! I hope Harry and Draco curse him to hell and back, LOL They deserve to take care of him snape and Pansy, LOL

    I am in rare form, so don't mind me, LOL I am here trying to write on one of my other stories and I am so buzzed the music keeps distracting me, LOL Anyway I will stop my drunken rambling and give you five thumbs that I don't have up!
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  • From misslala on March 30, 2007
    You tease! I thought another chappy was up!
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  • From DracaMalfoy on March 30, 2007
    I thought that you had posted another chapter. *humph*
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  • From CinCity69 on March 30, 2007
    I love your writing!
    I like Ginny's story, you make it seem like it could actually happen!
    The ending was... meh. Not what I was expecting but it got the point across.
    Oh! And I do think that you should do a second part where they go after Snape and Blaise!!
    ^^
    It'd be kick ass! Esp. with your writing!!
    Quick question (has nothing do do with your fic)
    Where are you at, at the moment????
    (back to fic questions)
    Got a rough idea on how many "bonus features" you're going to make???
    I'm glad that my review made you laugh! =D
    Why couldn't you just kill Narcissa???? I mean come on!
    She's such a bitch! Who would do that to their grandkid??
    Wait.. SHE would!! >_
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  • From DracaMalfoy on March 30, 2007
    w00t! 2 chapters! YAY! *sends double batch of cookies* I loved the end how it's pretty well all wrapped up. I want more Harry/Draco goodness. Make him all dopey and cute. That would make me far too happy. But yes, nearly had a heart attack when I came on here to read WoAT and 2 CHAPTERS! *dances*. Update again soon so I can leave more crazy reviews. I sent your email back, I hope you got it. So tell me!

    -Draca
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  • From Snarrylover on March 30, 2007
    thank god ginny's gone, although im sure she'll be back. as long as she doesnt get custody of the girls, its all good. these last two chapters were excellent, especially when harry decided to stay in draco's room *awwwwwwwwwww*. and poor baby parker *huggles*.

    i cant wait for more, cheers!
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  • From devilfancy on March 30, 2007
    You did such a wonderful job on this story.
    I know how hard it can be to write a truly disturbing scene like
    the one you had with Parker, but you pulled it off beautifully.
    Bravo!
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