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  • From Danine on March 30, 2007
    Bye Ginny...

    Wooo!! Awesome story! I can't wait to see how you turn the second part out!!!!
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  • From Star55 on March 30, 2007
    Yay for special features!! (that is the reason I *always* buy the dvd lol)

    In a way I feel bad for Ginny, but I can't help but not really care for her. She was stupid to think that Harry could ever get over a sexy god like Draco!! heehee...

    Well written, and you still live up to the title!!! Woot =)

    Can't wait for more special features, especially that of the Harry/Draco kind!!!

    Love Star
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  • From misslala on March 30, 2007
    Well at least he tried to do the right thing...poor Harry. Poor Ginny too...but at least she could have been honest with Harry. Man...that's harsh. I can't wait to see Harry and Draco go flying back to England together or Draco uprooting to America, LOL Though...harry should leave that job and do something else...something where he can be with all three children and his sexy, tasty new mate, LOL Are you going to go into the bitter dovorce stuff or leave that to the imagination? I mean, its crazy how much you have to attempt to pull from this bad boy, lol
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  • From on March 30, 2007
    Ginny is a bitch... update soon!
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  • From NightLo on March 30, 2007
    Just finished...however, this is a crossover between HP and WOaT, right? How can tracing Snape and Blaise mix with WOaT? Would not that be other FBI team/ police work, not THIS team? Or do I know insufficient about WOaT??? I am all confused!

    Well, personally I suggested you can add one more episode to end all things, e.g. documentation, interrogation, release of news and report etc, that will wrap all better (or in a more FBI way)...instead of opening a new episode, change Snape and Blaise into another bouns scene...sure there MUST be another scene between Harry, the twins, Draco and Parker...

    BRB...
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  • From EmeraldGrey on March 30, 2007
    Ballz!!! YOU RAWK MY SOCKS!
    KUDOS for: No Cliffy! *does happy feet Snoopy dance*
    I LOVED this!
    Yes, now bring on the deleted scenes, footnotes,
    whatever your little heart desires luv. You write it, I wanna read it! :)
    Ohh, and I was swooning, cooing and making you virtual cookies, cakes and steak dinners, lol
    ANOTHER EPPIE!!! YIPPIE!!!
    *happy dances through the orange peel trails out of the room* ;)
    EG


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  • From thrnbrooke on March 30, 2007
    Soooo need chapter 14 or episode number 2! Whichever way it comes! Gotta know what happens next!
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  • From misslala on March 29, 2007
    Yay! Harry is out of the broom closet! hahaha So cute. Ginnyleaving him...dang...bitch, LOL Oh well. I am so glad you updated tonight I was waiting and waiting and waiting, LOL....Yes it isn't at a close but I am gonna stick around, cause I love it :) I know what you mean about not thinking a chapter is up to par I think that a lot with my own work quite frankly but hey it happens and then I get 25 reviews that say you rock! LOL Which I am now going to do to you!!! YOU ROCK! *giggles* I will wait patiently for the next chapter. You are going to keep attaching it to this story right and not make a seperate or will you do that? Hrm...

    GOod for Harry sleeping with Draco and Parker to protect them. :P Too cute! KAWII! Ok I am done now...lol. I gush too much over this story, BUT I am sure you love it :P Feeds the writers ego. mwuhahaha it's great, keep it going.
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  • From Shananigans on March 29, 2007
    All i have to say is "Wow!!!!!!!" THis is an amazing story, really well-thought and just..wonderful! I never was a huge supporter of Without a Trace, but now i think you may have swayed me to watch it. Do you watch the one that the killings happen in the past, and then the files are brought back out for re-exacmination after some new evidence is found? I can't remmeber what it's called, it's driving me crazy, but it's a pretty sweet show and i bet you could incorporate it into a good HP story!! lol, okay sorry im rambling. This is an awesome story and i cannot waaaaiiittt to read the rest of it!!

    Shannon
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  • From DracaMalfoy on March 29, 2007
    *screams* no! not my Draco! *jumps on top of him to gove body heat and huggles him* Yes, you would do that to Draco, maybe just in a fiction, but you would do it! I read this last night and had a really long review wrote out and my internet went *KKkKKAAAAAAA BBBBOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMM!!!!!!1!!!one!!!!* so that made me mad, but here I am! Oh my, yes a support group wouldn't be needed if you weren't so angsty! lol, but yes, loved this chapter because Parker is okay, and I'm still dancing for the fact that you blew the mother fucker, or I suppose kidfucker away. A while ago you asked if you should kill Ginny, and I origianlly thought, yes, but I was thinking about it and no. She may be an asshole, but she's still the girls' mother. So that would be causing them pain. So, maybe maim her a little bit, but not too much. But yes, feeling ADDish again...wwwwwoooooooooooo! So yes, I'm going to start making Harry and Draco dolls, I think they'll kind of look like Potterpuffs. And they'll be squishy and cuddly. I have to work on the chocolate stain/tearpfoof ness of them though so we can cry on them with our cookies/brownines while reading fanfiction. Oh my, I think that's all for now. *munchs on some snackage from party* and I send cookies and Doritos, because I have a Costco mega bag that I'll never eat all by myself...*munches* update soon!

    *loves* Draca
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  • From Jan on March 29, 2007
    WOW! You really update quick, last I read was CH:8. But I am happy that I didn't see your updates sooner, because it was worth reading all the climax together then separately. Oh and the whole hypothermia thing-y, OMG! I can't tell you how scare I was that Draco was going to die. Good thing Harry knew what he was doing. Well I hope I see your next update, cause I want to see what's going to happen now that Draco is going to be ok (I hope) and He and Harry are going to be talking about their relationship(I think). So please update soon. ^_^
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  • From Snarrylover on March 29, 2007
    i know i havent reviewed for like 2-3 chapters, but damn this is good. im glad i didnt read each of the climax chapters seperately. i think i wouldve gone crazy for more. im so happy that jack killed spaulding. if i'd been the one to shoot him, i would have stomped on his head and reveled in his blood. i hate him grrrrrrrrr. the whole hypothermia thing had me on edge. made me realise that i should really update my first aid training. and our boys are connecting again. i love this fic. kudos to you for writing something this amazing and making me read a cross-over ^__^

    cheers
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  • From EmeraldGrey on March 29, 2007
    MERDE!
    My friggin' internet went out last night and I was gggrrin'
    wanting to read this SO damn bad but,
    it's working now and so I FINALLY could. ;)
    Wow, now that was an impressive chapter considering that you were
    pissed' when ya wrote it? For real? wow.
    I am impressed!
    Even sober i cannot write that well! lol
    I am mad at you for yet another
    cliffy *biotch lol*
    may you swim in orange peels! grrr.
    But?
    I am happy HAPPY with you thus far for A.) killing off spaulding,
    B.) having Draco rescue Parker, and Harry rescue them both.
    and C.) wow, I had NO idea about the hpypthermia thingy, the information you
    shared might even save a life one day, so good on you!
    All in all?
    I want MORE! hee*
    Cannot wait for the next eppie!
    Ya done good kid! Major 4-D AGAIN! I feel COLD!
    I
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  • From Star55 on March 29, 2007
    *hands out more cookies to share* Glad you liked them!!

    Another brilliant chapter. I thought something bad was going to happen to my 2 favourite blondes. *Sniff* so so glad it never!!

    You certainly live up to the title!! as if you could ever fail from that title!!

    Brilliant work as always =)

    Love Star!!
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  • From NightLo on March 29, 2007
    Sorry, after re-reading again my curiousness kicks in - but I must ask first - is there anything like warming and drying charms? Since fanfics are too common to have those, I just kind of again wonder Harry's forgetfulness of being a wizard and using magic. Though without any wand in hands, and under state of shock, that would be difficult
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