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Reviews for Angry Clouds

By : SoriaUndead
  • From ANON - megan on July 07, 2007
    i dont get it..
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  • From NightLo on July 07, 2007
    Oh~~~~ an ememy is nearby and that is Ginny! Ron will be sad, so do the twins...will someone notice that sooner than later?

    BTW, if Lucius gets a hand on Ginny, will he use that to capture Harry than Draco? Or both Harry and Draco? And will you explain what kinds of 'treatment' have been done to Draco?

    As there are too many questions unanswered, you must write it on! XD
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  • From ANON - Jesse on July 07, 2007
    Come on, all you have is a bunch of dialog in CAPS. And the stupid shit with ginny and lucious is just moronic. You could have made this way better.
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  • From Danine on July 07, 2007
    THIS IS NOT A NEW CHAPTER WHERE THE HELL IS THE NEW CHAPTER!!!


    *puppy dog eyes*


    Are you ever going to update this, hon??
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  • From Jicky on May 14, 2007
    hmmm i'm not sure if wut i'm feeling is confusion... anyway i'll state my comments in points.
    1st plz fix the bold n underline, cuz whole chapter has that format @_@ not quite easy on the eyes.
    2nd well i guess Harry finally fixed up Draco. but "whoa!" at the rape! i thought they'd reconcile or somthin similar, not suddenly go into DomSub relationship. n i thought Harry would top. o__o
    3rd well is Lucius bad? like totally? or maybe just prefer to be on the powerful ie winnign side? (i never liked Ginny, so i'm just gona ignore that part LOL)
    4th my meaning of "content" isn't really sub stories... i just feel that there might be a bit lack of narration cuz the events are really jumping from one to another. it definitely helps with having the place/time stated, i like to have them to tell me the setting. but i think the story lacks a bit of smoothness.
    well of cuz these are just my opinions. maybe it's how i like to read. anyway, i look forward to seeing Harry n Draco together with a hopefully nicer attitude towards each other.
    oh n of cuz i like the twins, but their drunken singing seems pointless to me.
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  • From FireCats20 on May 03, 2007
    I love it, please post soon. The LM/GW was something I wouldn't have expected.
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  • From FireCats20 on April 27, 2007
    loved the story wright more!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Argo on April 17, 2007
    You must add "rape" in the warning, and maybe change pairing on DM/HP, if it's going be dom!Draco. I was worried for Draco before this chapter, but now I so hate him and want to strangle this bastard, my hands tremble. Harry, being named "pet" after rape makes me cringe. I think, I'm going to be sick.
    I hope you will not make Harry enjoy this, because it will be sick for his side also. :(
    I absolutely murdered by last chapter, and don't think I can stand to read more...
    Unless Harry gets the revenge. Make it better?
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 16, 2007
    Sooo need chapter 4! What happens now? Draco just raped Harry.
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  • From Danine on April 15, 2007
    Holy shit!! Where to begin?!?!? The twins were amazing, I adore them! And Draco... holy... omg, rape rape rape but hot and porr Harry!! HARRY OMG WAKE UP, he needs a loving hug and Draco needs to appreciate what he's done and hug and kiss him and say sorry! I'm blown away! I'm absolutely blown away!! And Ginny, poor thing... or not! Omg Draco, bad boy. BAD. That was so hot though, I'm such a pervert!

    Thank you so much for dedicating the most fucking awesome chapter EVAR to me!!! Love you!!!!
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  • From KCRae on April 15, 2007
    Ahhh I love it and I can't wait for more!! Okay I will now refer to you as ferret because I have satisfied my mongoose urges with my closest friends and co-workers! :) I am so psyched for chapter 4. Great job! ps. love the weasley twins, you write them wonderfully. As for Draco, tsk-tsk. I'm never one for the enjoyed rape, but even I admit it would be in Draco's character to do something like that. so rock on my ferrety friend, rock on!
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  • From ANON - Kermit on April 15, 2007
    More Soon, can't wait.
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  • From KCRae on April 13, 2007
    I'm intrigued mongoose. I think since you are new at this that all experianced writers should call you mongoose because that is just so fabulous. I marvel at YOUR cleverness!! I can't wait for more and hope that Harry doesn't stay quite so...sadistic. :)-madness
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  • From ANON - tie me up. tie me down. on April 11, 2007
    Good beginning. Harry is not a happy camper. Make him happy!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 09, 2007
    wow thats quite some anger harry's got there... I am most intrigued! Update soon :D
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