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Reviews for Stylistic Harmony

By : hells1belle
  • From Annecia89 on April 13, 2015
    I loved it even though the ending broke my heart.
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  • From ANON - Aby on December 08, 2014
    Sarah,

    Over the last few nights you have taken me on one hell of a rollercoaster ride and I am exhausted, exhilarated, turned on beyond all measure, and all cried out! Dear God woman are you trying to kill me?! *grins*

    This is by far THE BEST dark Harry Potter fic I have read and I congratulate you thoroughly on writing such an engaging and character driven story. Hermione is by far my favourite character and getting to see her so dark, untamed and wild was absolutely breathtaking and made me fall in love with her all over again. I love how she was drawn to Draco and Blaise and how you played out their seduction of her, it was nice to see her go to them of her own free will, and even though you wrote her so OCC, it was completely believable. I firmly believe that there is a certain amount of darkness in all of us, it's just what you choose to do with it that decides how you will live your life.

    I am by far and away a Harry/Hermione shipper at heart, but I have fallen in love too with Harry/Draco, Hermione/Draco, Harry/Draco/Hermione, Draco/Blaise/Hermione and pretty much any other combination of the four together (yeah, yeah, I'm a big ol' slut *grins*) So, getting a chance to see the sexy Slitheryn boys completely possess our Hermione in all ways was so very yummy.

    I loved the whole premise of this story, it was dark, exciting, full of excellent plot twists and turns, and made you want to keep reading to find out what the next thrilling interlude was going to be. You kept the balance of plot, smut, romance and intrigue finely tuned to keep us hanging on and begging for more. I am so glad that I came to this story in its completed version, cause I'm not sure I would have been able to be patient and take it in instalments!

    There really is only one gripe I do have, and that is your improper use of 'then' when it should be 'than' and 'to' when it should be 'too'. It was a bit distracting for me, as I am a well known Grammar Nazi, and so I found myself continually correcting it throughout the story. It didn't mar my overall enjoyment of the piece, as you can see, but it was enough of a distraction to annoy me.

    Thank you so much for sharing your work with us, it has been an absolute pleasure to read. I cannot wait to read the sequel now and find out what has happened to our beloved characters, and to hopefully get the happy ending I am so desperately wishing for.

    Thank you again!

    Aby
    >^..^
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  • From ANON - Mc111 on March 30, 2014
    Loved this story. But the ending made me cry.
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  • From MaskedLily on November 26, 2010
    That was an absolutely fabulous story.... How could you end it that way??!!??!! Leaving Hermione like that made me want to cry. I really hope you have a sequel and if you don't that you write one. Thanks for such an awesome read!!!!! =)
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  • From Akasha101 on September 03, 2008
    omg..

    took me maybe 5 hours to read your story... this one only... going to start on part two tomorrow..
    omg... im hooked
    10/10

    have you posted on any other sites.. like
    hpfandom.net or harrypotterfanfiction.com
    like omg...

    if i ever get my hands on harry or ron...
    i dont care if i not magical... i will make them
    with they were never born...

    im not officially in love with the hg/bz/dm ship...
    *drool*
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  • From smmz79 on May 30, 2008
    ok so i found this story when you updated the sequel and decided i had to try it I LOVE draco and hermione and throwing in blaise is even better!!!!!!! i really like how you have thing s changing withing the golden trio.... i do like the darker side of hermione.... and i love how you write their shared dreams very well done... not to long but long enough to be full of detail.....i hope you continue on with the sequel i can not wait to get there
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  • From Lifvared on April 16, 2008
    I'm speechless...This is one of the best fics I've ever read...and...I can't find the right words to describe what I feel right now... this story really made me cry a LOT, 'cause it's like my own story...The man I love is not with me... And I'm stuck with someone I don't love... and the worst thing is that my lover and me, we both feel the same, but we can't be together... Too many people will be against it, my own family... please write more... I need a happy ending... Because I can't have my happy ending... Please...
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on February 14, 2008
    i loved this story cant wait to read the sequel!
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  • From DB1 on January 11, 2008
    OMG what a sad ending draco better not be dead I want them to be toegther!!

    *DB*
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  • From titfortat on October 07, 2007
    NO NO NO NO... I xcant believe she married Ron..... No No
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on September 10, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From luvhp on September 07, 2007
    OMG! That's it? That's the end> NOoooooooooooooooo, so not fair! She can't marry Ron, she doesn't love him. Draco can't be dead, his body was never found. Blaise and Ginny can take her away with them.
    YES!! Please write a sequel. You MUST write a sequel. MUST, MUST, MUST!

    This has been a brilliant story to read.
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  • From Jammar on September 05, 2007
    OMG!!! This cannot be the end!! This was such an amazing story and I am crying thinking this could be the end. The plot to the story was so well written and told and I just cannot believe that you would end the story this way. It is so short lived. Please!!! PLEASE!!!! CONTINUE!!!!!!!
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  • From bananasforyou on September 05, 2007
    is it really done. omg noooooo please dont end it. omg im crying please email at fatcitysumtin@aol.com if its true :(
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  • From Clare1984 on August 30, 2007
    Oh My God! excellent chapter. finally Draco and Hermione back together again and it was hot! so glad Ginny has come to her senses and picked Blaise.

    Oh and talk about a cliffie! that's mean. hope it's not too long till the next instalment. Please! don't leave me hanging!
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