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By : throughvioleteyes
  • From Delfin on March 02, 2008
    ohhh :D

    goodie! =D game's on bring it on hehe :P
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  • From theorgskittles on February 27, 2008
    Real good and if you are still in need of a beta then I could do it for you.. I am liking this story
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  • From Citten on February 26, 2008
    holy freaking hell that was great!!! :) Okay sorry for the near swearing (hope that it doesnot bother you) but there was just no other way to explain that chapter! i love that it has almost become a game-well i guess it already is and was. i do hope that you will be posting and soon--very soon! i love that he just kissed her like that it was great. well i cant wait to see what the other girls will say. now i only want you to tell us what lucius taught when she 'violeted' the spoon. ;) (hehehehehe) hananna abbolt is just fine i think for the porpose of your story they will do very well together. thought ron and a ravenclaw sounds a little iffy so prove it. :) until next time my dear!
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  • From Heidi191976 on February 26, 2008
    Excellent. I look forward to reading more soon. I think pairing Harry with Hannah would be intersting. I can't wait to see how Ron goes about asking the Ravenclaw girl to study with him.
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  • From goldspleen on February 26, 2008
    Hi, the story is really funny and entertaining. It makes me smile even after hard day, so I'm waiting for next chapter impatiently.
    I think you could make your chapters a little bit longer, but that's just my opinion
    regards
    ~J
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  • From LondonMarie on February 26, 2008
    i went into seizures from the awsomeness of this story.
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  • From LaBibliographe on February 25, 2008
    Chapter 7: Is seems that Hermione is slowly being seduced by the erotic tsunami that is Lucius Malfoy. How does that man manage to walk the halls of Hogwarts without being molested? (Probably because I
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  • From Utopia on February 18, 2008
    Chapter one:

    436 NEW school rules - how many does that give them?!

    Oh, one thing - can you shuffle the A/N in the middle to the end - it really wrecked the flow of the chapter!
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  • From Heidi191976 on February 18, 2008
    This was great. I can't wait to read more soon to see if Hermione get into trouble with Professor Malfoy again thus earning her punishment.
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  • From catysmom1028 on February 18, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From LaBibliographe on February 17, 2008
    Chapter 6: Is your writer's block because you can't decide which way you are going to jump on handling Lucius Malfoy? It seems as though you've introduced him now as a slightly less malevolent character (which I like). Is there some secret why he hasn't been showing up at meals?

    What are the girls' reasons for making their plans to continue hounding Lucius? If I remember correctly, DLM meant death to Lucius Malfoy. Right? Apparently he's not the worst teacher if Hermione agrees it's Trelawney (of course, it would be hard to surpass her for lousy teaching). Can we see Lucius in action in class? He teaches a class that has some good possibilities for drama - or comedy. The class could have a field trip. There could be discussion or a showing of the girl students mooning over Lucius and the hassle it causes him - maybe finding them waylaying him between his rooms and his classroom, or in the men's room. Adolescent girls aren't known for their reticence or subtlety in some cases.

    If Lucius is to become the focus of your group's enmity, what strong reason do they have? I may have forgotten between chapters.

    The chapter itself is well done - I don't see your need for a beta - and you've begun to have Hermione interact with Lucius. I think this moves you forward. I hope you continue. I think Lucius as a professor is sexy.


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  • From Citten on February 07, 2008
    boy computers are such pains-in-the-asses. so are bad internet connections. well i just started to read your story i love the lucius you have created and i love hermione and lucius fics! :) i am really looking forward to lots-lots more! hope that your writers block will quit giving you trouble and that life wont trough you any cruve balls for a while. i will be watching for a new chapter! i am not a big fan of same-sex pairs but hay what ever flots your boat. i will be looking forward to the l/h parts though! :)
    ps i love the way you have El i espically love the eyes i always thaught that would be cool to vielot eyes! ;)
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  • From jessirose85 on February 06, 2008
    This is a great fic..please update this soon
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  • From katiemay on August 06, 2007
    interesting story hope you update soon
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  • From LaBibliographe on July 27, 2007
    Chapter 5: Writer's block is extremely difficult, isn't it? I hate when you get started well, and then suddenly you feel like you've written yourself into a corner and can't figure out where to go. I'm glad you're moving ahead now.

    Of course, I'm happy that Lucius is turning out not to be a depraved monster. The man is too complex for such a one-note personality in my opinion, but then I love playing with that character so I'm biased.

    So DLM proceeds. What will the girls find to do next, I wonder? Hermione has such a fertile brain, it will be fun seeing how she pulls Lucius' tail. Will this story see them as a pair or is it more a Lucius versus Hermione struggle? You've removed some of the nastier edges of their conflict by making him more sympathetic so the DLM isn't so revenge-oriented now, which I think I like. It could be a bit more playful now with Hermione jabbing at Lucius' arrogance and superiority, bringing him down a bit, like a determined little mouse taking chunks out of a lordly lion - not life-threatening, but definitely irritating.

    I always like to read how Hermione bests Lucius and makes him belong to her, but if this isn't about that, that's fine too. Two superlative minds dueling is always entertaining. And you got rid of Narcissa!! I do LOVE that! Thanks for updating!
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