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By : ranmouri
  • From thrnbrooke on May 28, 2007
    I soooo can't wait for chapter 3! Wow! What a change!
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  • From LycheeTea on May 28, 2007
    I love it so far! Draco is so cute! And harry is rather lost in Slytherin... its funny how much can change without Draco there... Anyways great story!Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - flinn on May 28, 2007
    oh i really like your idea of dracos dumstrang time *smile*
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  • From ANON - Kaisei on May 28, 2007
    Very Nice start, can't wait for more :)
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  • From deewekomsi on April 18, 2007
    more plz!
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  • From monkeyshines on April 01, 2007
    i like the idea and everything, but for the first chapter it seems a bit rushed. You could've spread it out for at least 2 chapters, but thats just my opinion. other than that i like it.
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  • From on March 31, 2007
    Where's the rest? You tease. :(
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 27, 2007
    Holy moly! I soooo need chapter 2!
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  • From Jan on March 24, 2007
    OMG! OMG! Please don't let Lucius take Draco away from Lupin. Oh Gods, update soon please.
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  • From EmeraldGrey on March 24, 2007
    Na, it's perfect!
    Well thought out plot and
    what a plot!
    :)
    Looking for more soon!
    EG
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  • From Draeconin on March 23, 2007
    It's an interesting premise. The only logic fault I can see in it so far is that Draco's black eye would have been healed with a charm, either by Narcissa, or a house elf ordered to do so by her. Lacking that, a glamour could have hidden the damage. Far easier than taking the time to do such a good make-up job. Instead of seeing bruises, Remus' motivation could be that he smells Draco's fear anytime he mentions his mother (and/or father).

    Other than that, it's well written, good spelling and grammar.
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  • From lissagal99 on March 23, 2007
    Actually I really like it. I love the idea, I had a similar one but couldn't think of it even to the point you got too. I don't know what you think could be wrong. Perhaps that Lupin's reasoning is a bit off. How a couple hours becomes 4yrs... yeah that's a bit off. Maybe if a bond was expressed in those first couple of hours or days? I don't know, either way I love it as it is.
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  • From Star55 on March 23, 2007
    Wow, very interesting start to your story! I would love to see where this goes. I feel for Remus and Draco, and I agree, make Narcissa a bitch, (most fics make Lucius the bitch, but I'm reading one at the moment where Narcissa is the bitch and it is very good!)

    Can't wait to see what happens next, please keep posting!!

    ~*Star*~
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  • From PeachDancer82 on March 23, 2007
    I actually like this I think you have a good thing going here. I really would like to see you continue this.
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  • From ScottyToledo on March 23, 2007
    So far so good. Maybe Lucius should be a good guy in this one. (I like a good Lucius) And Narcissa should be the evil abusive mother/wife. Maybe Lucius, Remus and Snape can all get together and take care of Draco. While Narcissa causes alot of trouble for everyone. Just some thoughts. :)
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