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Reviews for Do I Have Your Attention Now, Potter

By : dropedonmyhead
  • From AliceMina on June 23, 2007
    Kinky! I likes!
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 30, 2007
    I love this!
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  • From misslala on May 30, 2007
    Nice attention getter :P That's great! I love it! :)
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  • From bubbysbub on May 30, 2007
    ok, this is the highlight of my day!!! so fucking funny!!!! hot too!!!! you are a legend and i love you cause i need major cheer-ups today. thankyou darling, for making things all better with lovely draco tantrum. love it.
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  • From on May 30, 2007
    looks like draco is uber horny
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 27, 2007
    Oh my! He's going to be quite embarrassed later!
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  • From Annie on March 24, 2007
    Dear holy shitty slashy god...you certaintly got MY attention. O.O

    I would have loved to see what happened after! But the last line was absolutely priceless ;)


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  • From SoriaUndead on March 24, 2007
    you could um... you know... write a second chapter... where they humor Draco's needs... i'm just sayin'... cuz i'm a total fuckin' pervert... and you're writing gets straight to the point ;)
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  • From Heksy on March 24, 2007
    HAHAHAHAHA, oh my gawd, you nailed Malfoy.
    I had a great time reading this.
    I always love your work, but this is the best one yet!
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  • From shevien on March 24, 2007
    hahahahahahahahahahahahahaaa!!!
    Ow, my side...my side.
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  • From Kireania on March 24, 2007
    Well he definitely has my attention. This is hilarious. Love it.

    Ja ne
    Kireania
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  • From graballz on March 24, 2007
    Chapter 1--heehee!! Draco's POV! YAY

    *gasp* I LOVE how Draco has numbered and "patented" his glares!!!! That's SOOOOO FUNNY! (Nice touch!)

    OH MY GOD!! *choking with laughter* Draco...pouting...being ignored!!! PRICELESS! And I love the way it's written, especially for that!

    Pouting and glaring!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA (I'm such a lunatic) HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHA

    AHAHA the "super pout" OH SHITE I CAN'T BREATHE!!!

    OH FUCKING HELL THE DIALOGUE IS PERFECT!!!!! The irony is killing me here: "Don't you 'please' me!" and yet, Draco wants Harry to please him!!!! I know exactly what you meant, though, and I can appreciate a good play-on-words-in-writing!

    Oh fuck!! Draco's speech is so HOTT!! I want to fuck him (and I don't even HAVE a penis!! haha) if Harry's being too oblivious.

    (The only thing, and I wonder if you wondered about this yourself. At the end of his speech, he asks "Do I make myself clear" and then "Do I have your attention now"...it almost seems like the first question is the most poignant, and then the repetition of asking is sort of a let-down, even though the title of the story is the second question. IMO, Draco's speech should end with "I want to feel you come so hard you black out." and then Harry responds to THAT with, "Merlin, Draco!" and THEN Draco says to him, "Do I have your attention now, Potter?" And that, in my mind, is the ONLY thing that can make this exquisite snapshot better!

    But it's such a little thing...just a suggestion)

    Mmmmmmmm, I can just picture it! Are you sure there's no Chapter 2?? This was fanbloodytastic and I really enjoyed it!
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