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Reviews for Merry Christmas Potter

By : Sophist
  • From thrnbrooke on March 27, 2007
    I sooo can't wait for chapter 3!!!
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  • From Angelsfear on March 27, 2007
    Hahahaha Draco is the best. He's deliciously mischievous and evil! I also love Harry's half-hearted comment 'I like breasts!" hahahah I love it! I hope you update soon!!
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  • From Vittani on March 26, 2007
    Hell no not turned off, not turned off at all. Need another chapter. And there is nothing wrong with your writing.
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  • From on March 26, 2007
    Hmm... you write Draco extremely well. I love the inherent snarkyness in his attitude... well written! =D I realize you only have so much spare time, but I look forward to reading more of this story when you get the chance! ;)
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  • From KCRae on March 26, 2007
    :) !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From NightLo on March 26, 2007
    Actually to engage a more tension situation, a 3rd party is always helping...you have many choices, e.g. Seamus to talk with Harry on homo situation, Michael/Draco/Justin in showing interest in either Harry or Draco...that would definitely tense it up...as Harry is determined to get revenge, while Draco wants sole attention from his new toy, neither of them would love to see interference...
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  • From on March 26, 2007
    Hmm... the answer 'Fuck YES' seems appropriate. *grin*

    That was wonderful... I always love reading good foreplay... fantastic. ;) I really do hope that you continue this - you have an avid fan in me if you do! :D
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  • From mystiedaze on March 25, 2007
    this means revenge....harry can do no less.
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  • From Rannapulla on March 25, 2007
    i really liked it i would love another couple chapters :)
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  • From NightLo on March 25, 2007
    You know...since Harry has no knowledge on what has happened to him, how does he feel, how should he feel...some stuff like that, he needs outside help to figure out all feelings! E.g. talk with some gay population, Hermione and Ron etc. It really would be lovely to read Harry wanting revenge without actually knowing his own feeling, that would stir up a lot of humurous consequences.

    If Draco...only if...he does have some feeling towards Harry, like pulling pigtail acts, all that would happend naturally (if Harry has actually got him back). However, if you would like to continue Draco to be one of cold heart, cunning, manipulative and others, his feelings need to describe also, e.g. change of heart/longing/jealousy...seeing him falling would also be very very funny...
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  • From Kassia1213 on March 25, 2007
    *giggle* Yumm! Yeah, it does wander a little, but that's a matter for editing. On the whole, I think it's got promise. It's certainly nicely subtle in terms of plot and motivation, and the slash was good too. :)
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  • From Vittani on March 25, 2007
    very good, i definitely want more though. You cant leave it like that, if you do you are evil.
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  • From daynajones on March 25, 2007
    you have got to be kidding, yes.... I think you should continue this. You said that it seemed all over the place, but I don't think that at all, if anything that just adds to the confusion that Harry is currently going through. Don't know if you have a long story planned out or not but I can see that you could easily do several more chapters to bring this to a "satisfying" conclusion. Just be careful and don't make R,H and G too "cookie cutter", their interactions with Harry and Draco situation can be just as interesting and "deep" as between our boys. You could do a chapter from Draco's POV, I would be interested to know what is going on in his head and what he is planning. Good luck with this, it is a great start, and I would love to read more.
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