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Reviews for Heartbeats in the night

By : sunset20
  • From AyaChan2006 on June 15, 2008
    hey are you going to continue this or should i just delete it from my list??
    e-mail me with your answer at kaoru_14_89@hotmail.com
    ...ta

    Aya

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  • From ProfessorSibly on March 29, 2007
    I love it. I love how you wrote this, i love how perfect it flows, i love how you see the emotional walls and the guilt and pain of both of them...

    And.. =Oh.. Did i mention I love it?
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 28, 2007
    Now you really can't stop! There has to be a chapter 3!!!
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  • From NightLo on March 28, 2007
    This story now completes itself, with both POVs we know the whole idea behind...

    Keep on writing, and looking forward to the next one (either new or sequel)
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  • From graballz on March 28, 2007
    Chapter 2--YAY! I was so excited to see Chapter 2 of this fic!!! Your chapter 1 was so amazing!

    Ohhh, Draco's description of him and Harry!!! I just want to grab him and hold him and shake him until he realizes that Harry won't hurt him!!!!!!!

    "just shagging" my ass! (Well, Harry's ass!) Sorry, Draco-love, but you can lie to yourself only up to a point, and NOW IS THAT POINT WHERE YOU JUST HAVE TO LET GO AND LOVE!!!!!

    OH. MY. GOD. "liquid pain"? Ummmm, excuse me a second...I have some "liquid pain" of my own at the moment!!!!! *sniffle* YES MELT FEAR MELT!

    OOOHHHHHHHHHHH MY HEART BREAKS AGAIN FOR THEM!!!!!!! *SOMEDAY* *MAYBE* OHHH HONEYCHILD, YOU CAN DO IT!!!!!!

    Why are you sorry for that perfect, wonderful, (AMAZING SEGWAY FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER *hint hint*) ending???? ;) Seriously, though, no, I loved those last few lines! So poignant, so tragic, so....redeemable!

    My response: DRACO, HARRY WOULDN'T HURT YOU!!!! YOU CAN GIVE YOURSELF TO HIM AND HE'LL PROTECT YOU!!!! EVERY LAST SHRED OF VULNERABILITY! And if you can only let go and love Harry...that's all he wants and you CAN give him what he craves!!!! (Right??) And I can see that you love him even now...which is what he wants...even if you can't admit it! *I swoon, I pine, I perish*

    Slight punctuation thingy--"the moon is right; I can
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 27, 2007
    How sad! I hope he can melt the ice!
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  • From MrGalion on March 26, 2007
    Not as good as your last but it was good.
    Then 2nd Person point of view always throws me off.
    You make great scenes and descriube emotion in a way that's truely wonderful.
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  • From graballz on March 25, 2007
    Chapter 1--Thank you for the warning about it being sad! (It helps me cope...lol) I'm sorry that all you are writing right now is sad stuff...my first couple of fics on here were dark and angry, too ("Draco's Cracked Mask" was the first, and then "Dragon and Savior"...if you have time to read them) :)

    Okay, on to YOUR story!

    Ohh, what a dream!! I dream about that too! At least Harry's not alone in the bed...I was afraid that he was (and that he was dreaming of the past or something...)

    Awww, Harry's crying!! That makes me sad, and he needs a hug! *whimper* Draco woke up!!!! Good? Yay, good!

    Draco being a stubborn, distant Slytherin....*sigh* typical. Harry can shake him out of that, though, right? *gasp* He's seeing Draco's vulnerability!!! Maybe, maybe? Ohh, he can't face his emotions (just yet!) Poor Draco!

    YES Someday...maybe...YES YOU WILL! YOU CAN DO IT, HARRY!!! Keep reaching out to Draco!!!

    Oh. My. God. My heart just stopped. I found my favorite line in the entire work: "How can hell disguise itself as heaven"...and FUCK I'm tearing up! DAMN IT! A couple of tears are rolling down my cheeks!

    But I can deal with that ending..."someday...maybe" :*) (that's me crying happily)
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  • From Extraho on March 25, 2007
    that was sweet. sad, but with hope for the future.
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