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From thrnbrooke on June 25, 2007
Sooo need chapter 61! Who was taken from Arthur's department? The bad thing is it may not be DEs that have them. It could be Muggles.
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From Shananigans on June 25, 2007
Dammmit you know what blows?!?! In my last reveiw I was tottaly going to say something about Lucius being attracted to Voldy cuz of his weakness, but I didn't...Blast!
Now I'm going to write everything ever that seems important. If I can remember when the time to reveiw comes anyway:P
If Draco was spotted, wouldn't he have been spotted with Harry, Hermione and Ron? Even just Harry? I mean...they were together were they not? That would seem pretty relevant to me, If this big wanted death-eater is wandering about the bank with Harry Potter... Just wondering.
Great update!!
Update soon!!
Please, I would prefer no cookies..
Shannon xoxox
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From misslala on June 25, 2007
Oh no, Draco's in trouble now! haha that's not good when he's been sighted - especially when they have been going to such lengths to keep him under wraps. Oh I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope his nightmare wasn't a portent of things to come. :( Evil Voldemort, always taking advantage of everything. At least they have some clues now as to ways to get at Voldie. I wonder what you have in store for us for the next installment.
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From mystiedaze on June 25, 2007
well nice to know destroying a horcurx could do some good for draco. made him better. cant wait to see how harry uses the parsletounge (spelling is bad) on draco could be kninky.

lucious murdered. i personally think he deserved it but hey draco's daddy no matter what.

and do you have to bring back ginney? she is such a B.

well cant wait for your next chapter.
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From claire2007 on June 25, 2007
eeee!
sorry i haven't reviewed in agesssss but i've been in hospital and only got out early this morning
had to read all your chapters
like the first thing i did lol my parents think i'm mad
anywayyy
wow ! that last one was a bit of a shock
can't wait for the next one and good luck planning the rest
i'm supposed to be resting now so =] bye
x x x x x x
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From NightLo on June 25, 2007
Well...this is a brilliant turn, and now Harry knew exactly what to do they have a fight...and I just worry - werewolf attacks. Lucky that last time Remus was there, however, we still have one great greyback, and one bellatrix that might know the weakness of Malfoys (but she is a black...hum...good question). NEVER, never, expose this bit of information...

But still questions are - what are Harry and Weasley (to use against Ginny - remembered Draco), Black (the Bellatrix), Snape...as well as Voldermort. As you said, though some are half-bloods, they still possess the weaknesses.

BTW, remember to always remain discree when you revenge on Ginny, and remember befriend to the twins soon...

Hey - if ever, still it seems unlikely - that somehow you want the two have a children, through...m-preg...then Draco's heir will not be acknowledged. And the royal status will be lost...With such a chaos, if ever a royal is present and ends all the disasters, he will become king. Then how will become Harry? Anything hint on the bloodline?

If through surrogacy - then practically the mother will become the queen - again - what will become Harry?
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From stasa on June 25, 2007
Weakness to Parseltongue? A good weakness or a bad one? Hope it
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From sunset20 on June 25, 2007
Hurray for Neville and Luna!!!! :D Thank you for bringing them into the story! But why Ginny??? Well, you will have your reasons, but I HAAAAATE her, she is horrible!!! *hugs Draco for no reason at all* :D
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From masha on June 25, 2007

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From on June 25, 2007
*stares at the chapter*......what the hell.....O.o I had to re-read this acouple times. I had to make sure that I had read this right.

....I got the whole Malfoy blood line. That took awhile for me to get but I got it. It suck that Harry was in the books. I thought for the longest time that he was a pure-blood....weird I know..I am slow for some reason xD. Figures aht ginny would come back..I feel a fight is going to happen between Draco and ginny...maybe he might do something damaging.....hehehehehe....Opps....you didnt hear that. xD

Ok what?!?! Weakness to Parsultongue?!!? ....I hope that is something good......not bad...>< and if it is bad then it will end up good right?.....O.O
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From Ryko427 on June 25, 2007
Harry nodded to me and went to replace his own book before venturing over to the other side of the library. The goblin stood like a sentry at the door, his back to the contents of the vault as he waited for us to finish.

This makes me very impressed. This is what makes a good writer. The second sentence is very important because it shows that you push forward when writing, but you take a step behind to recap and go over a few things. I have never ever done that when writing cause I always rush through things and never ever recap.

I liked this chapter even if you don't. It did explain some things definitely going on with Draco. As for the weakness with Parsletongue, I have two theories on what that weakness entails and how you may use it.

1. Sex with Harry, no doubt Harry will use it when he wants to get at Draco ^_^.
2. Voldemort may use it to lure Draco into a trap, thats if Voldemort knows about this weakness.

I am also very interested as to how Bellatrix got into Azkaban. And if it wasn't her, who was it?

Oh an weakness to love potions? Well well well, I could concoct a love potion and Draco would adore me! Bwuahahhaha!

Ahem... I do hope, before the order reacts to another thing that Voldemort does, that you involve some cuddling, sex, and love time with Harry and Draco, and I do hope freaking Ginny... god how I hate that bitch, leaves them alone. If she freaking bothers them, and follows them around, and prods at Draco, well I hope that Harry hexes her, because then she might see how much Harry cares for Draco and will, pardon my french, FUCK OFF!

Now... Glad I got that out of my system, that she-weasel whore gets me worked up. Hate her. Yes I do! This isn't like how Draco said before how he hated Harry, but really loved him! I utterly hate Ginny, and I love Harry, and Draco... but Draco more...

There is another thing I wanted to mention! I love how you add little cute things just randomly in your writing between Draco + Harry! Like when Draco was running his hand over the tome, and Harry touched it smirking... I LOVE THAT STUFF! Little cute things makes me so happy ^_^. I am dieing to read chapter 60. Oh my god! It is going to be Chapter 60! FORGET THE COOKIES! GET SOME CAKE NOW!!! Erm... what goes with cake? Milk? Wine? Pfft, I want to be a chef, and I don't know what goes with cake -_-.

Much much much love love love!
Hopefully I will have another lovely dream tonight, possibly kissing I hope, must think very hard about Draco... but not too hard! Then I have to do something before I go to sleep -_-.
Anways! Nuff of that!
G'nite!
Ryko

(lol, instead of putting Ryko at first, I almost put Draco, I think it is a sign, thinking very much of him, dream of him may be possible! I will fill you in next morning if I do have one!)
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From ehcie0utada on June 24, 2007
Hmm...very interesting chapter.

So, Voldemort's "tentacles" managed to taunt, but not completely obliterate, the Dursleys? I wonder why he sent four of his most powerful Death-Eaters in a muggle's house. Maybe he wanted Harry to get out of the "hell-hole" he's hiding in. I don't think he really wanted to lure Harry and kill him there. Maybe the havoc his followers had caused served as a warning for Harry...Maybe, maybe.

And...Snape was included in that "little" fight? Hmmm...makes me wonder more if he's really good or really bad.

Wow, I feel sorry for Stan Shunpike. It just shows how stupid the Ministry is. Hello, the conductor of the Knight Bus suspected of being a Death-Eater? How insane can they get?

I pity Neville. The death of his grandmother also reflected the outcome of war - the destruction of not only innocent lives, but the future of orphans as well.

I knew it! Lucius did not kill himself! He's just too fucking in love with himself to destroy his own existence. And Bellatrix killing him? Well, it's not such a far-fetched idea. She's too murderous for her own good.

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From Shananigans on June 24, 2007
Okay that made me happy. Draco has always been strong about his blood, and I know that him giving it up for Harry was a huge deal. I won't lie. It made me sad. Only because that was the only thing tieing him to his family now..if that makes sense? I dunno I'm just crazy.
Good chapter, can't wait for an update.
Shannon xoxox
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From misslala on June 24, 2007
I like the blood magic stuff. I am all into it! And it didn't confuse me, in fact, didn't I ask you something along those lines last chapter? :P I liked it a lot!!! You go woman! :) How very brilliant and fun. I can't wait to see how things play out. I almost want Draco to hex Ginny into oblivion, but hey, what would the point be? lol Except to get out some much needed tension, lol.

Ah and now we sit and wait for the next Horcrux to be found. I am interested to see how it comes about. I like it so far, losts of very cool, very original ideas. I like how he is weak to Parseltongue, it seems to appropriate! :)
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From Ryko427 on June 24, 2007
Hello again!

I completely forgot this dream this morning when I woke up. It must of been an earlier one, but I remember it now. It wasn't the kind of dream I was hoping though. I was hoping for another kiss or something! But instead it was boring and frightful. Apparently Draco drank an aging potion. And when you age, apparently you heal among that time at an increased rate. Soon Draco was getting too old, almost in his late 40's before my mind shifted to another dream. It was quite scary, although I did see Draco in nothing but boxers, which I liked very much... but still no touching or kissing =/. Hopefully! I will have another dream, without an aging potion I pray to god, and it will involve... *nice* things...

Much Love
Ryko
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