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From thrnbrooke on June 21, 2007
Sooo need chapter 57! Draco's been shot! In the stomach! No!!!!
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From Ryko427 on June 21, 2007
Quick question I forgot to ask, My British... ummm... Lingo is it? Isn't quite that far well knowledgeable... I know trainers are shoes... but what is a jumper? Surely can't be like... an underwear kind of jumper ^_^.

Thank you,
Ryko
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From Ryko427 on June 21, 2007
Well I have quite a few things to mention about this lovely chapter, so I will start off with humor.

"He handed me my Slytherin scarf from my trunk along with a pair of gloves and thick socks. The socks were fuzzy.

Fuzzy socks.

I smirked at him. They were NOT mine."

I adored that scene ^_^, I was in hysterics and love the fuzzy socks ordeal. Funny how Harry lends his clothes, I think it is cute.

"I have to admit that, despite the circumstances, I felt liberated. I haven
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From misslala on June 20, 2007
Oh no! Draco got shot! NOOOOOO He can't die! Not yet! :( No death!!!!!! Harry just told him he loved him! *cries* Poor Draco. I can't wait to read more. Fucking muggles, LOL ARGH.
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From Silvae on June 20, 2007
Poor Draco, I'm really looking forward to the following chapters because more of him is coming through with each one. I feel a lot more sympathy reading this than I do in the books, when you're reading from Harry's perspective it's kinda hard to see how hurtful some of the things they do to him are. :( They're both horrible to one another.

It's obviously love.

:D
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From Silvae on June 20, 2007
Oh yes, you definitely hate him, Draco. That's why you get a boner everytime you see him. Because hatred and sex are just made for one another O_O

Silly boy.

Ahhhh, I need to keep reading, because Draco's sexual tension gives ME sexual tension.
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From Silvae on June 20, 2007
*death* HA! Draco + puberty = hilarious! He's so affronted by it, like it's personally insulting him.

I like how he ends his rant about petting Harry's hair with 'Yeah.' Like he's agreeing with himself. Hahahahaha.

Draco's a sex beast now. :D
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From berkie88 on June 20, 2007
...we don't speak German as a language here... yes a lot of people know German because it is similar to Dutch and is taught as a secondairy language in school (like English is). a lot of groups like that are given English names though so English names though so that would have worked... never German. I'm not sure what you want the name of the group to be or else I could have translated... The Control?

I think the main reason people keep it out of the fanfiction is because most people write/read fanfiction to relax and forget... a Muggle-Wizardwar is not easily resolved (the wizards may never be hidden again) and would cost a lot and is angsty and very real... so not very relaxing... same reason why Global Warming and the Rainforest are hardly ever mentioned... it'seems so easy with magic doesn't it?
and I think Voldemort had an ulterior motive in broadcasting it... as someone who grew up in the Muggleworld, around the time of the second WW... I think he'd know how Muggles would react...

and why should the wizards hide? because they know that a war would cost both sides and there are too many Muggles. and living peacefully together, espceially once they find something they can fear, is not a human trait unfortunately...

and Harry going out in the middle of a warzone to check on his (hated!) family... that's just MAD! *sigh* Gryffindors!!! make you want to pull out your hair! :-P love the Slytherin-Gryffindor interaction btw... he should have seen that coming!
hope for more soon! (why do I ever still add that anyway?! I wouldnt'be reviewing otherwise right?)
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From claire2007 on June 20, 2007
that lsat bit made me laugh gryffindor draco lol

and will we get to see malfoy mannor, i'd love to see your description of it. it's always been my favourite place in the books too probably because i would love to see where draco grew up.
x x x x x x
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From bananasforyou on June 20, 2007
i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From NightLo on June 20, 2007
I love you I love you I love you - yes - such a great act! Riping of all important leaders - though you are evil and is haunting and hunting little Harry, but Voldermort, you are a great guy...you also somehow 'save' our muggle world......just love this idea too MUCH!!!

Though that kind of chaos is not something I like to know and live with, but the idea....is just too...> v < (too afraid to...you know)

However, this served good. Actually all should know this is a war, not a fight between two people, esp. they knew nothing about the prophecy, they knew and understood nothing about the 'chosen' thing. However, they would expect Harry or a TEENAGE boy (or worse, the ministry, when did history tell you to trust a governing body?) to stand up and take the charge. The ultimatum sent by Voldermort should wake everyone up - no one is safe, no one would not count in it. This is their war, they need to prepare, they need to be trained, they really need to be reminded. Actually what I hate most - how can the adults just stand back and let one 17-year-old BOY fight for them? And what kind of a 'human' to hurt and hunt and torture a 1-year-old baby and a 17-year-old boy...Voldermort and death eaters are all insane! And you just described them too right...

For Draco, the act of 'donating Manor' is just too noble of you, and you really love him deeply - your history and standhold and you are/have willingly given up because of Harry...well, I never foresee that you are such a romantics...no wonder Harry would think you of a little Gryffindor, still you can prove you are Slytherin at heart!

Hum...for the Dursleys - served them right. They should be frightened for a good amount of time - better for them to remember for a lifetime - for all that they have done to Harry...evil grin XD.

Now I am really looking forward to your story, as such chaos have never been seen in any fanfics!
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From stasa on June 20, 2007
I love the attack on G-8 summit. It was brilliantly placed and I completely agree whit your logic. Hope the muggles stop attacking for a moment to get their facts strait, and maybe assist in the fight rather then make it more difficult. After all, wasn
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From Poppendol on June 20, 2007
Hi,

I've been reading your story for for a while now, lurking about for say the last twenty chapters or so. First of all my compliments. I think you've captured Draco very well and I especially like the fact that although he's trying to fit in, he hasn't suddenly had an epiphany and turned good. He's changing but some of his core values will not change. Secondly, your idea of having Voldemort attack the G-8, and the subsequent terrors, was a stroke of genius, and your motivation is spot on. I thought, but can't remember exactly, that it always has been his goal to rule both worlds.
One minor point though, and more pride than anything else, is that although I like the name 'Das Dominanz', sounds nicely imposing, even if I'm not sure its correct German and I like your positive potrayal of the Dutch in this, German is not a one of our languages. In fact, its a sure way to piss us off, we're really quite sensitive about that. Having said that, the proper Dutch translation would be 'de controle' or 'de macht' (lit. the power), 'Das Dominanz' really does sound so much better. If any more Dutch should crop up in the story, I'd gladly help you out.
Again, my compliments and please keep it up, Poppendol.
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From misslala on June 20, 2007
Ok that story I mentioned is complete on hexfiles.net but DracosDirtySecret started posting it here. Here is the link. :) It's a great story!

http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600010760
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From Ryko427 on June 20, 2007
I liked ch. 55. While no cute relationship stuff came until the end, it did explain a lot and progress this war even further, which I think needed to be done. I can just feel an ending coming soon ='(. I don't want it to end, it is like my night time reading =(. Then what am I going to do every night?! I would love it if you posted a Dream Journal =D. That would be fantastic, what does the writer dream?! Anyways, loved the chapter. And I ADORED the ending. It was so cute, and I loved that Draco simply turned away from him ^^ very funny! Had me laughing quite a lot. Anyways! Goodnight, and I will check up on ya tomorrow for chapter 56!!!!! Wow... 56 chapters O.O.... I pray for 56 more ^_^.

Ryko
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