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By : Angelsfear

From ehcie0utada on June 20, 2007
Wow...that was an extremely fast update.

As I expected, chapter 54 was the "calm before the storm." You really cooked up some chaos there, mate! And it just had to occur in the world leaders' summit. Voldemort is surely whacked, although his reasons for doing so has grounds. I do agree, the wizarding world is too submissive to common folk. But then, Voldemort's actions cannot be justified with that. After all, violence cannot be amended by violence too.

Despite that, the attack would surely urge the gang to hurry up with their task.

I just love your descriptions after the attack. I can almost feel the molecules in the air thick with panic and fear. And the muggles stashing guns wherever they go...wow, that is SO America! It made me laugh a bit.

Draco DID change. The Gryffindor traits are definitely rubbing on him...maybe because of all the physical contact with Harry. Lol!

I wonder how the Dursley's fared in the attack in Surrey. I would have preferred them chopped into pieces, but I certainly would want that to happen after Harry gets all his most-coveted answers. I think this is just the perfect time for Aunt Petunia to explain Dumbledore's reasons for leaving Harry under their care. Or better yet, hand him Dumbledore's letter which was included when he was left on the Dursley's front steps. I have the notion she's the only one who knows what Dumbledore's true intentions are (I don't think McGonagall truly understands Dumbledore's reasons, but that's just me). What about the other Squibs living in Privet Drive? What about cat-lover Mrs. Figg?

I wonder what Hagrid's doing now. Will he pay Harry a visit in Grimmauld Place some time? Or will Harry do the visiting?

Your story is pacing much faster now, and I feel you are nearing the end of your story. Oh, I still hope you don't kill anyone...well, maybe Ginny...but please, not Harry or Draco! For the love of Merlin, not them!

Can't wait for chapter 56!

---reiche

PS: I'm sorry if this review is quite short. It's 12:02 pm here (lunch time!) and I haven't had breakfast yet. Merlin, I'm terribly hungry that I can't think straight anymore. Plus it's beginning to get hot in here. Merlin...Philippine climate just sucks right now! It's supposed to be raining, but it's so hot it's as if our summer climate is having an extension!
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From thrnbrooke on June 19, 2007
Oh Draco is evil! I love it! Sooo need chapter 56! Will the Dutch hit squad come help? Will the Muggles try to kill them off?
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From Danine on June 19, 2007
LOL I know he probably didn't mean it as such, but I found it ironic that Harry was getting he and Draco turned on right after talking about the Dursley's being potentially dead. Brilliant!
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From on June 19, 2007
*looks at the chapter*Thats it? O.O Wow that was short! xD i was like um!!I read through it really fast then. I have some things to say.

First. *bows* I was not expecting that turn in the story. I thought it would be more like the classic were they find some big clue and it leads up to the final battle and Harry vs. Voldermort. You know?. I was not expecting the whole WORLD DISTRUCTION! Just amazing. That or I am lame. ^^;;; I also have to say. Did I see some hence nudge nudge wink wink Death Note in here? xD *key give away* "Kira" *cough*... I really thought the whole idea of the world going insane was a great touch.It will one day right?

...awww that is just like Harry. To care for the people he hates the most. And I liked the whole game that Harry set on for Draco. xD Slytherin vs. Gryffindor.

I am kinda wondering that too.....why do they hide from the muggles. Yea sure they have nukes and what not but the wizards have magic that can block nukes or anything else that the muggles throw at them. So in a way you kinda maked voldermort look like a good guy. Well kinda. ^^;;

WOW! Who would have thought that Draco was that rich!geez. Also for some un-know reason I just have the randomest urge to have Draco get shot at. Not kill or anything life threating but just have him shot at and then when he is recovering Harry teases him to get even with Draco for teaseing him like he did in this chatper....I dont know either. I wonder about the minds of yaoi fangirls. -_-;
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From GwadaBabe on June 19, 2007
Swoo~
I can't believe how much I've been missing!
Darn school field trip made me miss all of this D:
I can't wait to get up to date again!
The Harry Draco sex was amazing! ;D
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From ehcie0utada on June 19, 2007
It's finally official! They're finally THE couple!

Wow...that is sweet. The shouting match between Harry and Ginny is definitely the easiest way for Harry to broadcast to everyone in the household that he and Draco are a couple. Talk about subtle.

Fred and George are a bit mad, eh? But I expected them to be the most understanding from all the Weasley kids. Merlin, I just love them!

And...they're going back to school! Are they? I wonder if Harry got a letter and was made prefect or Head Boy too (although I think Ron would be since he had been made prefect during their 5th or 6th year). Or maybe Harry is made Captain of Quidditch?

Anyway, I feel that this chapter is the "calm before the storm". Well, there is still a war waging outside Grimmauld Place, and they still have to find Helga Hufflepuff's cup, not to mention kill Nagini and Voldemort. The future is definitely dark for both of them, but they have no choice but to walk through that path.

If ever both Harry (if he even got a letter) and Draco decide to take their 7th year, I have a notion that all the action will take place at Hogwarts...as it had been occurring there since the beginning of the HP series. Although, maybe Harry (assuming that he did get a letter) wouldn't go since they wanted to make Pettigrew's death look like Harry's.

Speaking of that, Harry did mention he went to Diagon Alley to purchase some things for Draco. How is that possible? Isn't he supposed to look dead to the millions of wizarding folk? Did he drink some Polyjuice Potion to change his appearance so he could buy those gifts? I don't think he used the Invisibility Cloak...although it is possible that Harry asked Lupin to do the shopping for him and he was following Lupin under the Invisibility Cloak...

Help. Some clarifications, please? I wonder if Draco had noticed that. It is, after all, his idea for Harry to look dead to others beside the Order. He likely would have fumed at Harry afterwards. He didn't want Harry endangering himself for trivial, not-so-important stuff like that...and going to Diagon Alley without him and worse, because of him, is definitely included in this category.

And in connection with this, I think Voldemort already knows that Harry is alive and that it is Pettigrew who was found in Godric's Hollow. He's not daft, and, after all, he is a powerful wizard. He's too much of a Slytherin, too. He would have calculated the possibility of this outcome when he devised that sneaky attack in Godric's Hollow.

By the way, will Draco always be on top? Or will there come a time where they will switch places?

Hope you beat your deadline. July 21 (the release date of the 7th installment in my country) seems pretty far but it will come faster than a hurtling Bludger. Good luck! Can't wait for more!

---reiche

PS: Sorry about the delay...as what I've mentioned before, my professors showered me with too much homework. Merlin, I can't believe it is just the second week of this term! Also, I'm worrying over my thesis now. I don't know if my professor would approve my thesis proposal. *shiver shiver* I hope he does. *crosses ALL fingers tightly*

PS PS: Despite all that homework, I'm 100% certain that I would be able to give your gift this weekend! I'm so excited!

PS PS PS: I really liked chapter 54, but some memories that I wanted to forget just resurfaced when I read it. Let's just say I'm doing all those stuff I've said regarding distractions. And with a plus! I actually cried...after a very long time of not doing so. Don't worry, though. I will be fine. I always have picked myself up anyway. Maybe a bit of cigarette (on second thought, maybe a lot) would help ease it too. Hehe!
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From misslala on June 19, 2007
oh wow, that was an incredible chapter! :) I loved it! And yes, I agree about the Wizards and muggle war. Voldemort wouldn't just stop for wizards.

You should read "The Burning Times" at the Hex files. It's a really good story. Very painful but VERY good. haha It talks about them opening the wizarding world to muggles and trying to live in peace but it backfired and they all ended up in concentration camps basically. It was a hard read because it was so emotional, but damn, LOL That chapter reminded me of it, I had to mention it.

I can't wait to see what happens next. Does harry find the Dursley's, if he does, are they willing to let him protect them if he so chooses? Man that is insane, LOL
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From on June 19, 2007
Hahaha. i knew it. I knew Ginny was a bitch. Lol. Still, thou, I like how Hermione was nice to Draco even thou he was still kinda mean to her. ^^ I really hope that ginny dies....Cant you see my haterd toward her? *laughs* Also it seems like Draco isnt a morning person. xD Great job!!^^ I cant wait for more. And!!I have gotten like 5 more people to read your lovely fic here. ^^ I just want to share. xD
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From claire2007 on June 19, 2007
stupid ginny *hits*
and aww draco would have been head boy =]

thanks for putting up with my never-ending questions !
i'm sure i'll have more soon lol
x x x x
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From NightLo on June 19, 2007
Too many to write, let me straighten them first.

The starting - I like it very much, it is really so Draco, so arrogant-like, so 17! And I did believe he meant it - that was never a time to 'hold on'...just like...you really need to pee, but you are asked to hold on though there is a loo nearby, but the urge is too great, still you need to hold on...something like that - at that time you would seriously consider killing that person!

The coming out and Ginny is never expected, but one thing I was sure - Ginny's manner needed to amend. You should always knock on a door and now she understood clearly of why...and she was just too selfish and GIRLY - and I hate too GIRLY girl/woman (if your description about her affairs back were true)...but I would say - hey, you deserved this. You should always behave and be nice! Now...now the table was turn and your chance was forever lost...

The first night between the two was just too beautiful and I just liked the picture too much - bittersweet can we say?

Head boy and Dumbledore - again I liked this idea much. Actually Dumbledore is my second favourite character (Harry always comes first). He is just a genious, though his reason of sending Harry back to the Dursley is still unknown...simply he is too important. His beliefs of second chances and potentials and choices and trust are just...too right. And such decision/your decision of making Draco Head Boy really meant a lot to him...esp. to someone who is broken and of self-doubt. Really, how will the story go on without such a character? I hope to see him more in here (even in the protrait)!

Sirius - well, I would say...if he will not come back from death, then please...don't allow him to stay for too long - e.g. talk through the enchanted mirror. That idea is just too...cruel to everyone, esp. to Remus.

Lastly, I don't know whether that rumour is true or not, somehow some Chinese said they are able to get the chapter list of book 7 out and post them on the web, and the first chapter is...Ginny's task...if Ginny is really somewhat cunning and evil - all suddenly makes sense! I just hope this information can help you create a more evil Ginny!
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From Ryko427 on June 18, 2007
OMG.... I tore through this chapter like a Christmas present! (no direct relation to the Christmas in the story =P) But I cried, I laughed... I was aroused.... This was one of my favorite chapters by far! The Emotion! The Love! Playfulness! The Confusion! The Anger! The Anguish! The Sadness! All of that came through with a punch. I gasped so many times during this chapter. Especially when I heard the door click open. I said to myself (OMG PREPARE FOR THE SUDDEN EMOTION AND SCREAMING ABOUT TO COME UNDERWAY!) And it did. I did feel a tear or two roll down my cheeks when Harry was saying that he loved Ginny, but then he cleared things up later and I smiled. My heart was breaking in half just as was Draco's heart. I also loved the cuddling! Yay! Cuteness of Harry and Draco! About time! I love sex and all, but I adore cute couples ^_^. I would also love to hear your dreams of related to Harry Potter. I will admit that was not my first dream of Harry Potter, I did have another one when it was just me and Harry in the Common Room... but thats for another time...

10/10! Five Thumbs up! Grammy Awards, Oscars, you got it all with this chapter! Can't can't can't wait till the next update! Another question for ya, Do you live in America, or Europe? I live on the east coast, so each update is like a bed time chapter because I always get them right when they are updated around 10:00pm for me or 11:00pm. But anyways! Loved it, sorry for the long review, had so many thoughts bubbling that needed to be expressed in this chapter. Ate Logo! Or.... Adeus! Trying to remember my Portuguese -_-... I have packets over the summer... yippe....

Ryko
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From eLeMeNOhPee on June 18, 2007
Ahhhh, I knew it!! And Harry loves Draco, though I don't recall Draco telling him the same, well at least while Harry's conscious...though it is implied. Ginny is finally gone after she was a total bitch this past chapter. "The Weasel" better come around because Harry has to have his bestest buddy after all. Now the boys have to tackle the last Horcruxes! Can't wait!
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From thrnbrooke on June 18, 2007
Wow! Everyone knows! Draco knows how Harry feels about him! He's been made Head Boy. I sooo need chapter 55!
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From misslala on June 18, 2007
My god! That was a helluva chapter! :) I LOVE IT! I did not expect anyone to walk in, well, maybe just a little, but that was absolutely incredible! I love how Harry said Draco was his equal, I adore it and you put my emotions through the gamut on this chapter!!!!!! How dare you! :P *j/k* Brilliant as always, I am highly impressed with this and the way things are progressing steadily. Now, I am bracing myself for the inevitable :( Someone will die soon, who, I don't know, but I DON"T WANT THEM TOO, lol

Hope to see an update soon! :)
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From ehcie0utada on June 18, 2007
And she cuts it at the worst moment...

Well, I do hope Harry gets to say what he really feels towards Draco. Come on...get it over and done with, you two! Isn't it about time that they define their relationship? Wow...I really feel sorry for Draco. He feels so used. "All I was to him was likely some kind release
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