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Reviews for Memoirs of a Serpent's Son

By : Angelsfear
  • From thrnbrooke on June 13, 2007
    So the title has been passed on! I sooo need chapter 52!
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  • From eLeMeNOhPee on June 13, 2007
    When I first started reading this, I thought it was completed, but now that I have reached chapter 50, I realize it's a WIP. Whyyyyyyyyyyy, I love this story too much for it to just stop suddenly and unexpectedly. That is exactly why I don't read WIPs but I will now, just this one time. =)
    Great writing, great style, great EVERYTHING. I love how you didn't make everything OOC for Draco and you didn't really rush anything. Update very, very soon please and make it extra long to make up for last chapter's shortness...with extra Harry/Draco action. Please. ;)
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  • From claire2007 on June 13, 2007
    oh and just a quick question
    didn't everyone hear them when they were having sex ?
    or did they silence the room
    x x
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  • From claire2007 on June 13, 2007
    oh.my.god.
    i hope neither of them regrets that and they have a proper chance to talk about it
    and i hope this 'like it was the only chance that there would ever be.' wasn't a hint of anything...
    i've had the worst day today and this cheered me right up =]
    eek. 51 ... can't wait
    xxxxxx

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  • From Danine on June 13, 2007
    Ah very hot! Cna't wait for the next!
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  • From stasa on June 13, 2007
    OMG! Lovn
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  • From Snarrylover on June 13, 2007
    ch 50:

    well....finally. i absolutely loved it except for one part: the lack of lube. since that was harry's 1st, he would have torn 'cause draco only used spit. i dont really see that as realistic. but damn it was HOT!!!!!!!!!

    great job, cheers!
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  • From ehcie0utada on June 13, 2007
    Wow...that was a pretty intense sex there...kinda reminds me of Brokeback Mountain.

    Yahoo!!! Thank Merlin they had sex! Yipee!

    I understand why you made it into a very angry sex. With too much emotions running around like that, they are really bound to an angry bout. And yeah, I do agree that men are the physical type when extreme emotions arise.

    Wow...the sex is just breathtaking. It's not the typical "sudden, no attachments" sex I usually read in DMHP fics. I just observed that most fics here in AFF lack the "human" in sex...or maybe their plot is a tad too short that the gradual build in the relationship suffers, hence, their sex lacks meaning. However, in your fic, it is full of emotion, full of passion, full of need. At the same time, it is also full of tenderness and care...Man, that's how sex should be like!

    I bet Draco and Harry enjoyed your take on sex! Hehehe!

    I'm glad you liked my last review. Darn, you got to admit that was too lengthy.

    I knew you wouldn't disclose Snape's true "nut-ness"...Okay, what I said is just weird...*sigh* Anyway, I guess I have to wait for your ultimate revelation.


    Speaking of secrets, I also have one for you!

    I have a present for you, but I won't tell you what it is just yet (since it's not done and I want to surprise you) You'll soon find out anyway. :D I just hope you will like it.


    Keep writing! I really REALLY love what you've written so far! Can't wait for more!


    ---reiche

    PS: By the way, about the second to the last statement in your A/N, the chapter worked in your story. I thought you intended to write it this way, so I was surprised that you admitted that this was not your initial plan. Thank Merlin for 'accidents' like these!
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  • From NightLo on June 13, 2007
    Well - all I can say - desparation and fear finally broke the tension and brought them to each other. Death, Voldermort's trap and close steps planning, powerless and helplessness towards danger, being separated and feelings...all got mix and very need a way to burst out...really being boys and 17 were not easy.

    With already 4 horcrux gone, one being Voldermort, and if one being Nagini, they very much needed to find out the last one and started training again - perhaps they also needed emotional and psychological control/therapy to release constant stress and desparate feeling...though they must wait and see the reaction of the community, the ministry and Voldermort over such plan...

    However, I am wondering, what did Minerva do now? Still busy over Hogwarts? How about Moody and Ginny and Luna and Neville? Would they join the war and preparation? It seemed that the four were quite lonely in fighting against the evil...would the others and the community realize they have put too much on 2 17 teenagers?
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  • From Silvae on June 12, 2007
    *snickers* he wants to take him to the Forbidden Forest, push him up against a tree and.... what? I definitely think he had to force himself to write the 'pummel him' part, because honestly, I'm QUITE intuitive and *I* say that he had other things in mind. Oh yes.

    Can anybody say quickie? I can.

    Lovely, as always :D And now I have to start reading more of the fourth book AGAIN because I just can't prep myself enough for the seventh book *dead*

    I HATE YOU FOR SHOWING ME THOSE T-SHIRTS! I wants them :[
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  • From masha on June 12, 2007
    That's fantastic!What you have done is amazing!!I'm so gland those two boys finally get together.I'm wondering how they would face everyone else the next day(especially ron.Poor ron
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  • From Ryko427 on June 12, 2007
    I wonder if anyone heard the screaming and moaning ;). Loved this chapter! Finally some hot and heavy action, loved how angry and violent they were. Even if the chapter was short, it filled my fix for the night. I have been rechecking the site all day long until before I went to bed (10:30ish east coast time) and saw chapter 50! I even squealed! Ask my brother, he charged in (Did you just yell?) yes, now get out ^_^. Loved it! Can't wait till the next chapter. Draco finally said he loved him out loud! Of course Harry was asleep -_- damn it Harry! Oh Well, I guess I would be tired too after fighting Inferi... getting punched and beating up someone, and then having angry sex.....

    Loved it!

    Ryko
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  • From thrnbrooke on June 12, 2007
    OMG! I sooo need chapter 51! I thought they were going to kill each other! Instead they realized a lot of things!
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  • From misslala on June 12, 2007
    I love you! That was hot and brilliant and OMG poor Draco and Harry!!!!!! Wow. I love it! :) I can't wait to see what happens. I will be devastated if either or both die, but I can't help it, LOL I love it that much.
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  • From Ryko427 on June 12, 2007
    You asked before about what people do to relax and let the mind flow, etc.

    I like to do a few of the following ;)

    Sometimes just take a stroll around the block. Depending on of course where you live. I live in a somewhat secluded street away from the rest of the town, so it can be quite relaxing.

    Other times I would draw and just think up creative things to do, even just mess around in photo explosion not making anything special.

    I usually like to just lie on my bed and think over stuff and rack the brain.

    I also hum song lyrics in my head. *Makes me feel like a singer ^_^*

    And when all else fails! I always have my friends to turn to. Most of my friends are very humorous like me and we love to just joke around.

    Heck, sitting on the porch sounds like fun actually. Especially when the three little kids across the street are playing in the front yard of their house. It is pretty fun to watch, makes you miss being a kid.

    But anyways! Thats the stuff I do. Also wanted to say that I absolutely adore your story and every minute of. It often feels like a drug and I need my fix all the time ^_^. Hope this fanfic lasts for ever. I always did wonder what Draco thought =D.

    Ryko
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