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By : Angelsfear

From graballz on June 04, 2007
Chapter 42--WOO HOO AN UPDATE! What's so special about Moody? I'm guessing that's something "from the books". I know he turned my Draco into a ferret (for that, I hex you, Moody! *hex* HA! Take that!) Poor baby!

*squeak* DRACO MEETS TONKSY! AUGH! Ohhh, I love his reaction! Well, I don't LOVE it, but I *love* it! Of course, I just want him to be okay and everything to be sunshine and roses between him and Harry, but I *LOVE* his reactions! SO PERFECT and SO HIM!

POTTER IS THE MASTER OF MIXED SIGNALS!!!!!! THAT IS TOO FUCKING GREAT! *dies from greatness* I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE THIS SENTENCE! (The only thing that could've made it better is if Draco said "Merde" after it...because him speaking French is fucking bloody gorgeous, sexy, and HOT!)

*giggling madly from the grave* Howler from Pince...Granger the next librarian!!!! That's fucking great!

*confused* This is Draco's month? His birthday isn't until June, and we're currently in October. I don't get it, but okay...

Ohhh, I can't even tell you how much I love this story! You are BRILLIANT
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From bananasforyou on June 04, 2007
i applaude you on this wonderfully creative chapter. i loved the howler and how draco responded to tonks...very funny indeed!
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From thrnbrooke on June 04, 2007
I soooo need chapter 43! Pince lost her mind! I'm sure of it! What did McGonagall say to her?
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From misslala on June 03, 2007
Yay! :) They have all that UST to work on now :P In the midst of a war no less, LOL OMG I am so loving this, LOL I so can't wait for more and I am glad happy to see little things coming out in the end ;P Rawr! :) Ok, ok calm down, calm down, lol I love the dynamic between this harry and drao soo much! :)
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From NightLo on June 03, 2007
Well...has Draco been depressed too much and too long? His emotions just changed too quickly...but given he shared feelings with Harry (the only feelings that he understood...mind you..he must be estatic with this piece of news) and the use of 'our'...

I would suggest - always locking one inside a house is not a good action, they should go out and exercise a little...you know...to vent the tension and frustration out!

Actually - I did agree...what on earth would parents allow their children to become orphans, why did they not work hard a little more and ensure their survival? Their loneliness is not something they can easily bear...
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From berkie88 on June 03, 2007
I have no idea what house I'd be in... I'm not cunning and rather gullible actually, I'm not brave at all, I dislike hard work and I'm not a big fan of studying... 'but I do like learning and knowing things (not really things I actually should be studying...) so I think Ravenclaw.

wow, talk about an emotional rollercoaster for Draco (and I suppose Harry too)... I don't think many fics have a character say to Harry what Draco did (about the sacrifices of the people around him)... it's very rare. you definitely make both Harry and Draco face their flaws/mistakes huh?
btw, if Draco's blood changed, does it have any effect on what his father did to him that makes him heal slower?

your theory about the sacrifices being needed to destory the horcruxes is flawed in canon though... Harry was already healed by Fawkes when he destroyed the diary. did you deliberately change it to fit your story?
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From mystiedaze on June 03, 2007
i am really enjoying this.

ok so harry explains basically i dont want you to die so there for... and draco calls him an idiot. more upsets but at least draco has a momento from the evening.

now i figure harry's way of thinking is ok i messed things up (putting it politely) now lets see what i can do to get his attention. so ya don't actually acknowledge him but you are every where he is. just being in the same room is aggrivating (spelling sucks). ya sit next to him and he wont move cause that means you are getting to him. neat game. and the peck on the cheek i bet that had draco blushing and grinning as well as shaking his head.

cant wait for the next chapter.
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From ShariShari on June 03, 2007
Gah! That was just another FANTASTIC chapter X.X I love it... it just makes my day! You wouldn't believe me if I told you I went too AF everyday, sometimes six times, only to check out if you updated... anyways, i hope this will be going on quite some time although we're already 7th book... anyways, to answer your question, i think i'd be a little to dumb for rawenclaw... XD too lazy (and sumtimes too selfish as well) for hufflepuff... too soft for slytherin... and maybe even actually not brave enough for gryffindor... T.T well, honestly, i don't know but i guess i'd be griffy after all..
hehe
anyways
love your story
love it the most
love it for eternity
love draco even more XD
actually
love everythin from authors notes over draco over harry to every single chappie ^^

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From ehcie0utada on June 03, 2007
btw, about your question...i think i would either be in slytherin or gryffindor.

why?

i think i would be in slytherin because i have too many secrets for my own good. i could also get very sly with things. i also get into lots of sticky situations, although i have to admit that half of them were not of my intention. same as a slytherin, i also lead a double-life. the good (or bad) thing about it is people even close to me don't know about that because i'm good at keeping things from them. hehe!

on the oter hand, i think i would be in gryffindor because (as harry-ish as it sounds), i would lay my life for my friends and loved ones.
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From ehcie0utada on June 03, 2007
breath-taking chapter!

the awkward stage was really played out well. it was so believable. i think you intend to write it to make harry take a breather out of that heated argument (which took place after the smutty session! yay!). it's just natural that harry would think things through before jumping into a relationship and getting lovey-dovey with draco. let's call it "adjustment period". and besides, he still thinks of voldemort destroying the precious loved-ones he got.

it's hard to believe, but harry DOES think! the thing with him is, he thinks too long. hehe!

it's a good thing you're still not rushing the draco-harry relationship. the gradual warm-up is really the way to go with both of them. and i like how you inserted draco's sarcasm in the second part. i have to say, draco really has that gift. you captured it perfectly with the snide remarks.

i'm still all hung-up on lucius' death. darn! hope i could find it out soon.

thanks for the greeting and the hug! i really needed it. don't worry, i'm fine now. i hope you are too.

---reiche

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From Danine on June 03, 2007
Aww he kissed him. So sweet! I just wish he could have done that in front of Ron and Hermione.

And to answer your question: I would be a Gryffindor. My husband insists I'd be a Slytherin because I'm pretty evil and will do anything to get what I want, but I think I'd be placed in Gryffindor because I'm stupidly naive at times and have this streak of blind courage that most people lack. I'm a leader, and if I don't like someone I let them know immediately. And I'm certainly as unpure as they come, both of my parents were pig and chicken farmers! Yeah, I'd be a Gryffindor.
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From claire2007 on June 03, 2007
eek great chapter
urgh back to school tomorrow :(
and to answer your question i think i'd be in ravenclaw or slytherin (haha nobody wants to be in hufflepuff)
hope you feel better
oh and just wondering ... will we find out what draco's patronus is ? quite interesting to see what people think it would be
xxxx
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From NightLo on June 03, 2007
...well, I just love Draco's reason - that Harry is very very foolish, stupid, selfish for the motion of 'not getting close for protection' - you know, even they died or may die because of Harry...however, they did die on their own choices, own willingness! Draco should really lock some sense into Harry's mind - (1) that Harry does deserve to be upheld, protected and made sacrifice for, not only for him, our love for him, but also for the whole lot others...(2) we have made our own choices of the way we die...

Have you seen Spiderman2 before? I particularly liked that serial movie as...spiderman girlfriend (just forgot...) made a choice of staying with him for all costs...even there is danger, we know it, but we are willing to take it...the challenge...it is our choice and decision but not spiderman or Harry...

So if ever possible, I hope this Draco could make Harry understand...yes, it is his decision to distance and protect us...but we...knowing all the threats and danger, still willing to stay put for everything, even for the sacrifice, we have made our choices! With such a firery, pride, equally-stubborn, self-centered Draco, maybe he really can open Harry's shell and make him see sense...as you know...fighting and argument is part of their communication and interaction (but wouldn't this make lovers tired more?).

BTW, I just love how puppy and 'pure' Harry's responses of closeness towards Draco...after all, if I am not mistaken (even though this are mainly Draco's POV)...Harry does lack experience with affection, intimacy and likeness...
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From TorturedArtist on June 03, 2007
awww, harry is such a little puppy dog, following him around!!!
I think l'd be in Slytherin. I've got a bit of a mean streak.
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From graballz on June 03, 2007
Chapter 40--OHHHHHH THAT WAS BLOODY AMAZING!!!! SO FUCKING HOT!!!!!! YES YES YES NO, HARRY DON'T LEAVE! *whimper*

I also agree with everything you said about Draco. And I love you for it. I trust you, and this is fucking amazing!

Chapter 41--*speechless* Whoa, DAMN, Draco really cut to the heart of the matter! SHIT, you must be trying to prove a point that not only will you NOT write a stupid Draco, Draco just had one hell of an inspirational truth speech!

AUGH! SOMEONE SMACK THOSE BOYS UPSIDE THE HEAD AND TELL THEM TO PUT THEIR ARMS AROUND EACH OTHER!!!! (Okay, or the next best thing...Draco wearing Harry's shirt! *AWWWWWWWWW*)

I love how you so totally echoed my own thoughts of "where the hell did that come from" about Draco's talk with Harry!

OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HARRY KISSED HIM ON THE CHEEK!!!! YIPPEE SKIPPY I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!!

I think that you did a PHENOMONAL job with this! I think the very "Draco way" (yelling at Potter and telling him he's an idiot) is EXACTLY the kind of thing that would happen...and I LOVE how Harry is avoiding-without-really-avoiding Draco...SO PERFECT!

I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! Even though I really want them to be together already, I definitely agree with taking things slowly! The peck on the cheek is just bloody adorable!!!!

I am a Slytherin. (I'm also smart like a Ravenclaw, cry like a Hufflepuff, and am straightforward like a Gryffindor, but I do play politics and keep secrets and lead a double life, which makes me think I'm Slytherin, first and foremost)

That's an interesting question you posed!
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