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Reviews for Memoirs of a Serpent's Son

By : Angelsfear

From GwadaBabe on April 30, 2007
Oh my! Poor, poor, poor Draco! This fic is /amazing/!!! (I don't think I could strense that point anymore). I'm sooo sad that you have to leave for ten days . . . but I guess you do have to have some kind of life >< I'll be waiting eagerly for the next updates!!
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From sunset20 on April 30, 2007
Shit... I knew it was a bad idea to read chapter 27 today... but I couldn't help it... I just had to go on. And now I'm in tears again because the two parts that I've feared the most were in this chapter: the Sectumsempra chapter and some bad bad Ginny stuff, and I'm still not sure if I'll live to see how this story ends. Oh, DRaco... *sobs* Ok, I think I need to write something tragic to be able to deal with these feeling right now! (Thank you for this wonderful story BTW)
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From berkie88 on April 30, 2007
I like it! I felt sorry for Draco sometimes, especially with the ferret incident since I've never really thought of it like that... but OMG he's self-absorbed. he really thinks he's the center of the universe huh? no empathy! he really doesn't understand why what he does makes Harry hate him... o.O I thought that when he himself met Voldie he would at least begin to understand what Harry has been going through but...
can't wait to see the attack from his POV... and what happens when he learns that Snape really did take the Vow (he will find out right?)

you did make a few changes mistakes from the books... I wanted to ask if that was for the plot or...
I took Crabbe and Goyle back to the common-room but something strange hit me. They looked odd
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From sunset20 on April 30, 2007
Okay, I'm working more or less properly again. At least I've stopped crying and my heart isn't pounding furiously anymore. Luckily I've realized that HP and the Philosopher's Stone is shown on one of the HUngarian channels today so I've watched a bit and seeing my baby Draco being 11 and happy and cute and slightly arrogant made me feel a bit better. I really needed that, while reading your story I suffered more than I could ever have imagined to suffer from a story... I know this doesn't sound like a praise but believe me, it is. I ADORE this, it is the BEST novel-length story I've ever read on this page!!! Not kidding! And don't you dare worry about the pace, it's fantastic!!! It's just the right amound of detail, I think it would be less powerful if you rushed into the DRaco-Harry stuff, this way we sort of feel some of the tension DRaco feels. Speaking of which... DAMN YOU FOR MAKING ME GO THROUGH ALL THIS!!! These imotions... BLOODY HELL!!!! And I thought I'm cruel to my readers by making them suffer with Draco, but compared to this one my stories are like bedtime stories - and believe me that says something. It was amazing how you could find all the right words to express Draco's feelings and how you could match them to what was happening in the books. I didn't even realize it and I was already at book 6. I simply forgot everything around me and could think of nothing else but the pain Draco had to go through. It hurt so much to watch him getting closer and closer to his inevitable fate and DAMN YOu POTTER FOR BEING SO FUCKING OBLIVIOUS!!!! (sorry, I've never been a great fan of Harry and your story isn't really a big help in dealing with my Potter-phobia) The way Harry acted after the kiss... THEIR FIRST KISS!!!!!! I wanted to slap him, kick him and give him to Voldemort as a CHristmas present... or just make him realize what a stupid ass he is. And the turning-into-ferret thingie, GOD, that was so painful, I wanted to rip Potter's still beating heart out of his chest... BTW, I love how you can show the way DRaco is maturing through the years just by letting us hear his voice!!! And I must tell you I was really afraid when I got to book 6, because I haven't read it only 2 chapters from the end, and I didn't really know what to expect. And all that with Voldemort, and DRaco's task and... and then chapter 26... that was too much, up to that point I was trying to stay strong but that dream and then that ending... I just couldn't help it, I couldn't hold my tears back. It was just too much, too much pain and angst... and this realization hit me like a Bludger... I THOUGHT THAT THE ANGST WAS TOO MUCH?????? OH MY GOD!!! THIS IS THE END OF THE WORLD!!! I'm practically living on angst!!! It's my water and air, without a good amount of angst I can't even enjoy a hot sex scene between the guys!!!! I'M OBSESSED with angst! The combination TOO MUCH ANGST doesn't exist in my world!!!! And now you come with your chapter 26 and destroy everything I've ever believed in!!! I didn't know what to think, I was confused and couldn't decide whether I liked you for doing this to me or not... By now I've decided that I LOVE you for making me feel like shit (especially because in moments like this I get the best story ideas :D)! But I'm still not sure whether I can face chapter 27 today... *shrugs* Keep on writing so much angst, keep on making me feel like after a friendly chat with Voldemort, keep on making me unable to breath from pain - YOU'RE FANTASTIC, I LOVE YOU'RE WORK!!!!!!!!!!
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From claire2007 on April 30, 2007
:] thanks for answering my question
and great chapter
have fun in london and paris ... you can come visit me haha
xxxxxx
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From Jerrillith on April 30, 2007
Well Daft Fear, What can I say
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From sunset20 on April 30, 2007
Oh my god... sorry... I... I'm... I'm crying... I... sorry, I need to... I need to calm down. You did it. I can't believe you could do it. I thought nobody could do it but you did... I... I'm still in shock. You managed to... no I still can't write... I'll write another review when I'm not choking on my tears anymore... sorry (BTW I've just read all the chapters up to chapter 26 in one go... I guess that sort of explains my reaction...)
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From Danine on April 30, 2007
Oh lordie, that was a hell-of-a chapter for Draco. And the Dumbledore scene is coming up! Eek!
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From misslala on April 30, 2007
Have a wonderful trip in London and Paris! :) That sounds like fun, I hope it is a pleasure trip rather than business. Something that is nice and relaxing, refreshing and possibly inspiring! :) Anyway, poor Draco, Harry doesn't want him dead, he doesn't know what he wants. Its so sad, is it not? so I hope that they do fuck like rabbits, I am ready for some juicy lemons that I didn't write! LOL I am trying to stick really close with the many stories I have already started, they can be so insane at times! Keeping up with them that is. Oh and I will have to update and give you something nice in "The Personal Ad" since you are leaving. I shall get on it tonight! :) RAWR! I think everyone is looking forward to that anyway, lol

Ah well, wonderful work as usual! I am looking forward to chapter 28!
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From thrnbrooke on April 30, 2007
I soo can't wait for chapter 28! Poor Draco! Harry didn't know what that curse did. Not that he would tell Draco that. Draco thinks Harry tried to kill him. But Draco did try to Crucio Harry.
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From danradfan84 on April 30, 2007
This was so sad. Great chapter though. Can't wait for the next.
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From GwadaBabe on April 29, 2007
Wow . . . just, Wow!! I loooooved it! I //cannot// wait for chapter 27!!! but tell me . . . when are Draco and Harry finally to get it on? Is it going to be in the sixth book?
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From Mitamay on April 29, 2007
Did you HAVE to leave it hanging riiiight there!? I first caught wind of this on y! Gallery, and I. Was. Hooked. The fact that it was from a whole another point of view--Draco's, esp--was what got me. I can't wait to see what happens next! EM
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From Snarrylover on April 29, 2007
ch 26:

i still love this story, even after this chapter. poor draco. his day was already one from hell and he's still gonna have to face other shite *huggles him*.

sorry for not reviewing for reviewing all of the time. i just finished exams recently and my home life has been in chaos. i love this fic. i love it. i love it. i love it. i love it

cant wait for more,

cheers!!!
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From claire2007 on April 29, 2007
Ok when i first was that bit with theodore i was like pfft ... why ?
but you wrote it so well it's totally believable!
and it actually fits in really well
don't make draco sad for too much longer!
xxxxxx
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