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Reviews for Memoirs of a Serpent's Son

By : Angelsfear
  • From Selera on April 03, 2007
    Great chapter. I looke forward to Draco's reaction to getting a Patronus cast on him. ^^ Also are you palnning to take this past HBP?
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  • From misslala on April 03, 2007
    oooh our poor draco is learning the ways of masturbation and fearing waking up with morning wood! HAHAHA That is just too perfect for words, don't ask me why but its just funny :) I love it I can't wait to see what else happens.
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 02, 2007
    Sooo need chapter 8! Poor Draco! He's sooo confused!
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  • From CiraArana on April 02, 2007
    Chapter 7:

    Poor Draco, with his ... 'urges'. *giggles* It's so funny, having him kind of tip-toeing around it. I thought boys are rather open (at least to themselves and maybe their mates) about having a hard on. But then, Draco is still rather young. It has just started. So I suppose it's fitting.

    Actually, I loved the way you played his health. Have him react this way to pain explains his canon behaviour. Better, I think, than the usual explanation of him being a coward. So, he's got no physical courage. But that doesn't come from nothing. And you supplied a good explanation. So, is this muddled? Anyway. I liked it. ^-^

    My favourite part was the beginning, his reaction to Harry flying Buckbeak, 'this hideously beautiful beast'. Lovely. But, of course, I loved this best: 'I think I was staring with my mouth open because Crabbe asked me if I was alright. I snapped to attention and glared at him. I didn
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  • From CiraArana on April 02, 2007
    Chapter 6:

    You know, I really love how you weave canon and fanon into a credible story. And make Draco's emotions so understandable. His glee at Potter fainting when even he had never done so. Yeah, I really suffered with him while the Dementor was on the trian, and then felt his triumph over having one up-ed Harry. gets me wondering, though. What kind of 'punishment'?

    Oh, that dream was lovely! Romantic even. *dreamily smile* But what I loved best was the beginning and Draco's account of puberty. The idea of Draco squeaking! Hilarious. My face hurts, I was grinning so wide. And I can so see him, standing in front of a mirror that fawns over him (having learnt that it's probably better to lie than tell any Malfoy something they don't want to hear), worrying at the spots on his face.

    BTW, does Harry have them? Has he been hit by puberty like Draco? I'd love to see Draco's reaction to a spot on Harry's face. Or have Harry's voice hitch during a fight between them, and Draco going all superior because he isn't bothered with that, thanks to his potion. And then probably have his voice hitch in the next fight, because he got so riled up that even the potion didn't help anymore. Or something like that.

    Sorry. Got carried away. *smiles apologetically*

    Okay, on with the next chappie!
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  • From CiraArana on April 02, 2007
    Chapter 5:

    Oh yes, I enjoyed that dream. Re-read it, too, and began analysing it. Yeah, I'm weird that way. Call me fangirl. ^-^

    I totally loved the last entry! For several reasons. First, the thing that Draco seems most annoyed about is that now he has to do the dishes all by himself. That's so totally hilarious! I mean, there are these other things: blow to Malfoy pride, having his father fired, having his family wrecked (one of the things I adored; it's Draco, I think, with his family pride and everything, to consider his father being sacked and their reputation tarnished like someone else would probably consider the divorce of their parents); all those things, but he seems most annoyed about being forced to do the menial work.

    Interesting, that you made him follow 'Crabbe' and 'Goyle' and see who they were. I always wondered about this in canon. I mean, the real Crabbe and Goyle must have told Malfoy they were trapped in the broom cupboard! That Draco saw for himself would explain why he never kicked up a fuss about it. Only thing I found surprising in your version is that he didn't marvel at how Harry and Ron transformed into Crabbe and Goyle. that would have been interesting. to see him wonder and maybe do a little research himself. Or remember that Snape told them about the Polyjuice, and then put two and two together and get four. Would have angered him, that they managed to brew it. But I suppose it would have flattered him as well, that Harry was willing to break more school rules to spy on him. I was so grinning when Draco wrote that in his journal. *is still grinning*

    Oh, more 'extra bits'? *giggles* Looking forward to seeing them!

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  • From Selera on April 02, 2007
    I like like alot. Look forward to the next part.
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  • From misslala on April 02, 2007
    Wicked! This is too much fun and I love the idea of things coming from Draco's POV!!!! I can't wait to read more. :) I am so glad you liked my story BTW. :)
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 01, 2007
    Sooo need chapter 7!
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  • From Selera on April 01, 2007
    Nice can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From Snarrylover on April 01, 2007
    gods, im totally addicted. Draco's POV is done perfectly. im so happy with the way its turning out.

    any time draco mentions getting punished by his father just makes my heart clench and makes me want to cry. poor draco *huggles*. its sad to see that he thinks it's alright to let someone who's supposed to love him hurt him *tear*

    cant wait for more, cheers
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  • From Selera on April 01, 2007
    Very nice. Look forward to the next part. 13 lovely Sirius.
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  • From Snarrylover on April 01, 2007
    freaking brilliant chapter. i cant wait for him to get older and discover his feelings for harry. gods, is that ever gonna cause some major angst. excellent pacing too.

    cheers
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 31, 2007
    Sooo can't wait for chapter 6!
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 31, 2007
    Sooo can't wait for chapter 5!
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